Easily The Most Disturbing Story On Lit.

[Marxist]

...at least for me.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=9612

 

[MissTaken]

Well, it appears her "shift" key was on the blink.

 

[Bindii]

They have stories on lit?

 

[estevie]

As scary as this is, I've read that one.

The title snagged me.

 

[Gaucho]

I take it you didn't give it a '5' then?

 

[Never]

I wasn't disturbed.

 

[Marxist]

I wasn't disturbed.

You don't count, you're without a soul.

 

[Jim_Henson]

You don't count, you're without a soul.

No, thats me, hers is just twisted

 

[*Eve*]

That story is pretty tame compared to the other non consent stories there are on the site

 

[Marxist]

That story is pretty tame compared to the other non consent stories there are on the site

There are some awful stories on Lit.

I can't imagine how Killswitch and Never enjoy them.

 

[Never]

Marxist:
"You don't count, you're without a soul."

Harsh.
I have a soul. I've also read stories like that for awhile. I've also had fantasies that were much more violent than that. It simply does not move me deeply or trouble me to think that someone thought it up and wrote it or that the story aroused someone else.

 

[Marxist]

Harsh.
I have a soul. I've also read stories like that for awhile. I've also had fantasies that were much more violent than that. It simply does not move me deeply or trouble me to think that someone thought it up and wrote it or that the story aroused someone else.

Well at least now I know the intended audience.

 

[Never]

If I were the intended audience then the story would have better spelling and grammar. If I were the intended audience then no men would be involved, the story would be much longer, the violence would be much more graphic, there would be supernatural themes, and the piece would focus more on the feelings of the ‘victim’.

The story is rather tame when compared to a story intended for me.

 

[Marxist]

If I were the intended audience then the story would have better spelling and grammar. If I were the intended audience then no men would be involved, the story would be much longer, the violence would be much more graphic, there would be supernatural themes, and the piece would focus more on the feelings of the ‘victim’.

The story is rather tame when compared to a story intended for me.

I think the lack of all those things makes this story more disturbing. It's like a mash note written on napkin in a truckstop by Ed Gein.

The only thing missing is the part where he makes a soupbowl from the girl's skull.

Fucked.

 

[lavender]

Well, I read the story. The violence and the content of the piece aren't disturbing. I think it's the quality that is so disturbing.

 

[Gaucho]

I think the lack of all those things makes this story more disturbing. It's like a mash note written on napkin in a truckstop by Ed Gein.

The only thing missing is the part where he makes a soupbowl from the girl's skull.

Fucked.

Is that what's known as 'subtext'?

Damn, I missed it.

 

[J.B.]

What the hell?

 

[Never]

What the hell?

What?

 

[Fly_On_Wall]

I didn't find that disturbing.

some people actualy like those stories.

(stories are just fanticy it dosn't mean a person want's to act on what they read)

what I didin't like was...........

the story sucked.

 

[WynEternal]

This wasn't one of the most disturbing story I've ever read. The snuff ones are worse. *shudder* What got me (and this is my former editor self screaming) was the quality of it.

 

[teddybear4play]

I didn't make it past the third paragraph.

The comma use was simply outrageous.

TB4p