Early reader interest ?

[nicksouth]

Hey folks, hopefully this is the correct place to ask.

I have a couple of series going (Hot Tub Threesome, Lake Swing) one more series I am starting (Knowing the neighbors) and a draft of a tale for the Halloween contest

I'm not always the best plotter however, and sometimes repeat myself or maybe stray off the best path.

I'm wondering if anyone is interested in seeing an early version of the story and making comments on plot ?

Specifically
- Plot holes / continuity
- Does the plot make sense ?
- Future directions ?

My themes are
- Group Sex
- Swinging
- Hotwife (probably on the edges of this for now)
- Cum play / worship (this is touched on in the series but the Halloween tale will be firmly in this category and is optional)

I don't want help on spelling / grammar, etc, just more of the big picture stuff (Not that my grammar is perfect, I just don't expect early readers to go around fixing the mistakes)

Would anyone be at all interested ? The volume won't be that large as I have a full time job so can't dedicate all my hours to writing

-Nick

 

[Ched21]

Yeah I'm interested

 

[nicksouth]

Yeah I'm interested

Fantasic.

Here is my "Hot Tub threesome" series (which is rapidly diverging from the hot tub)

"Lake Swing" is an entry for the summer lovin contest and I intend to make it a series. Part 2 should have a very rough draft today and a more polished draft this week. I would really appreciate plot comments on this one as I took some diversions

if you are still interested after reading, let me know and I can send you the draft ?

 

[Ched21]

I'll give them a read tonight

 

[nicksouth]

I'll give them a read tonight

Awesome, and no hard feelings if you don't feel like it matches what you want.