driving in reverse

odyssey050

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Keith was a 6'4" 280 pound Anglo American Construction Worker

His wife of 8 years Patricia was 5'4" weighed 140 and was African American.

They were the perfect couple

Keith had a secret fantasy, that was for his wife to fuck his asshole

with a huge black dildo.

Unknown to him, Patricia had that same fantasy.

So one night they were talking, and Keith told Patricia of his fantasy.

Patricia didn't say one word, rather just closed her eyes and covered her face with her hands

On The Inside however , she was beaming bright with anticipation.

So Keith came home from his job, and Patricia was cooking supper


and about 930 PM That night, as Keith was watching TV

Patricia came in their bedroom with a VERY BIG AND PLEASANT SURPRISE.

She had gone to the adult toy store and bought a 15 inch black dildo and harness strap

At that time Patricia looked sexier to Keith than at any time ever.

Keith went to his knees and started sucking that big black dildo...

"Oh< Baby, I love you so much" Said Patricia softly as she stroked his blond locks

And After this Patricia put baby oil all over that dong.....

"Are you aura about this?" She said...

"Yes, dear I am.. As You've taken me up the ass, you have moaned out of sheer ecstasy."

"All right, darling, get on them all fours

Keith obeyed, and Patricia spread Keith's ass cheeks wide and looked up his asshole

"Oh, Baby, MMMMMMMMMM That is so sexy........I'm gonna love this."

so she inserted the head in first, Keith began to sigh, then inch by inch

until the entire dong was wrecking Keith's Ass.

Keith started to buck as a wild stallion.. and scream out of ecstasy.

It only took a few minutes for his 10 inch cock to become rock hard as this was going on.

And She, half the size he was, WAS able to control him.

She enjoyed this very much....

His cum was splattering uncontrollably,

she made him lick it up from where it landed..

"Nothing had ever tasted so good to him.....

this ritual went on for 5 hours, Until they were both exhausted.

Keith masturbated his Cum into Patricia's Mouth as she sucked him Dry....

They then French kissed.

She held him so close to her sweet black breasts and nipples....

as she called him, "My Beautiful Wife, I love you."

And he, knowing great pleasure that tonight....


"O My Beautiful Husband, I love you."

they slept for what seemed like a coma.

but was actually about 9 hours.

Fortunately tomorrow was an off day for rim.

But it was an ON NIGHT!
 
It needs some work.

. . . could be a little more poetic.

Just my opinion, though.
 
I'm guessing what you wrote is a story and not a poem, right? Would you like this thread moved to story feedback? You'll get more feedback for your "story?" on that forum.
 
annaswirls said:
um is it even possible to insert it from the other end? :confused:
Don't be a bitch.

"It only took a few minutes for his 10 inch cock to become rock hard as this was going on.
And She, half the size he was, WAS able to control him."


She had a 5" one?

No, that's not bitchy. I'm just curious. And I'm curious if the writer considers this a poem or not. :confused: I'd hate to move something that's poetry to the writer...
 
WickedEve said:
I'm curious if the writer considers this a poem or not. :confused: I'd hate to move something that's poetry to the writer...

...darling, get on them all fours

That's pretty poetic.
 
wait I thought I replied to the bitch comment.... hmmm

I wasn't being a bitch, just curious, I have personally never used a 10 inch dildo, I thought maybe there was some kind of reversable feature I did not know about.

:cool:
 
annaswirls said:
wait I thought I replied to the bitch comment.... hmmm

I wasn't being a bitch, just curious, I have personally never used a 10 inch dildo, I thought maybe there was some kind of reversable feature I did not know about.

:cool:
I was teasing. Noticed that I asked about the size thing? lol
 
WickedEve said:
I was teasing. Noticed that I asked about the size thing? lol


I know, you are such a tease.

and the size thing um, well I almost peed myself.
 
Uhmm poetry? eh.. hmm *scratches chin* :confused:


I like the title, 'driving in reverse'. I think I may swipe it.
 
neonurotic said:
Uhmm poetry? eh.. hmm *scratches chin* :confused:


I like the title, 'driving in reverse'. I think I may swipe it.

Will you illustrate it? I'll find you a photo...of a car. :D
 
annaswirls said:
I know, you are such a tease.

and the size thing um, well I almost peed myself.
I'm glad you know I was joking!
Um, did odyssey050 ever return to tell us if this is his idea of a poem or a story? I know what I think it is.
 
I wish to state publicly for the record, I am not an Anglo-American, I am not 6'4" and I have never had such a fantasy!
 
bogusbrig said:
I wish to state publicly for the record, I am not an Anglo-American, I am not 6'4" and I have never had such a fantasy!


shut up and bend over, we are a non-discriminatory orginization
 
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