Dream

[jonyoungau]

I had this dream its like a third person watching. Where a blond girl not skinny but not overweight somewhere in the middle is walking around a street in a neighbourhood or town naked with a white sholder bag going into and out of shops along the street. The girl does have a pair of white overalls that she puts on when she thinks there could be trouble but when there isnt she stashes them under a bench and continues on. The third person which is her crush who knows of what she does but thats not why he liked her in the first place lets her wander and just stays back, takes the overalls when she discards them so she cant get them back on straight away. And he is following her down the street watching as she walks naked in public. The people she encounters see her naked but its as though shes clothed because no one reacts like you think they would when confronted with a naked beauty. She likes doing this regurally and knows he is watching her but she doesnt hate it she knows he wont do anything so she finds it a comfort of sorts that he is there.

 

[Hypoxia]

The people she encounters see her naked but its as though shes clothed because no one reacts like you think they would when confronted with a naked beauty.

I don't read a lot of voyeur-exhibitionist tales but this sounds like an interesting take -- she is publicly naked but nobody reacts or seems to notice. There is no explanation of WHY she is not noticed, just that she is. No, she's not nutz, not hallucinating that she's naked when she's actually clothed. She IS nude.

One way to play this: She simply walks around nude and nobody notices. She feel excited to be exposing skin, but that's all. The end.

Another way: She's frustrated by the inattention; she displays herself provocatively; and STILL, nobody reacts. She masturbates in front of a high school boy; he glances at her, then looks away. She presses her breast into the mouth of a man sitting on a park bench reading his iPad; he gives her an absent lick, then scrolls the display.

Another way: As you suggest, she is followed by one person who sees her as she is. She is aware of them; she exhibits for them; they do not approach, so does she feel safe, or nervous, or neglected, or what?

 

[MatthewVett]

I don't read a lot of voyeur-exhibitionist tales but this sounds like an interesting take -- she is publicly naked but nobody reacts or seems to notice. There is no explanation of WHY she is not noticed, just that she is. No, she's not nutz, not hallucinating that she's naked when she's actually clothed. She IS nude.

One way to play this: She simply walks around nude and nobody notices. She feel excited to be exposing skin, but that's all. The end.

Another way: She's frustrated by the inattention; she displays herself provocatively; and STILL, nobody reacts. She masturbates in front of a high school boy; he glances at her, then looks away. She presses her breast into the mouth of a man sitting on a park bench reading his iPad; he gives her an absent lick, then scrolls the display.

Another way: As you suggest, she is followed by one person who sees her as she is. She is aware of them; she exhibits for them; they do not approach, so does she feel safe, or nervous, or neglected, or what?

I like the idea of her trying harder and harder to be noticed.

As for a reason, maybe there's a town nudist in the place she's visiting who just happens to be her doppelganger, so they don't even react anymore, having been acclimated to it? She finds that she can enact all of her exhibitionist fantasies without any danger. But then she runs into a friend who recognizes her and realizes who she really is...

 

[Hypoxia]

As for a reason, maybe there's a...

Reasons? We don't need no stinking REASONS!

No, really. Inserting an explanation would INHO weaken the story. I like an atmosphere of mystery. Leave the reason a mystery. Better yet, end the story with a tease for readers to propose possible reasons.

 

[jonyoungau]

I like the idea of her trying harder and harder to be noticed.

As for a reason, maybe there's a town nudist in the place she's visiting who just happens to be her doppelganger, so they don't even react anymore, having been acclimated to it? She finds that she can enact all of her exhibitionist fantasies without any danger. But then she runs into a friend who recognizes her and realizes who she really is...

I like this idea. Have her and the nudist hang out and when the friend finds her naked shes drawn to find out more so she hangs with her and the nudist and before long shes joined them....