Foeofthelance
Virgin
- Joined
- Oct 9, 2011
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- 8
Hello, everyone! Been working on a new project in my spare time, and was hoping to get some feedback on it. Long story short, a guy with amnesia wakes up in a world rather intent on throwing celebrities his way. There's an actual plot line involved, so some faces will repeat fairly often. So please leave any thoughts, suggestions, and criticisms. First three chapters are here:
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-03
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-02
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-dream-trap-ch-03
