Dragon Ball NW

OOC: Zax your welcome to join. Here I'm even pming you a sumary. A very long sumary but since this thread is been around for so long and we normally don't have this many ooc conversations, it's ratehr long. The last couple of pages have ooc because we are ironing out a few bumps.

If it works it works Zeo, but still I'm saying it's not my first choice for turn of events.
 
Zax said:
OOC: I was going to join this rp...but honestly, I don't think I could take the incredible amount of ooc arguments and what looks like a hell of alot of god moding Oo;; yeesh...


Look I don't know you but I do not take kindly to people passing judgement on a rp without even being a part of it or reading it. This thread has surpassed many of the others on this board in terms of longevity and talent in my humble opinion. Sure we have a few arguements but when you write with a group of people sometimes people have conflicting opinions and those opinions spill over into these pages. Now I am not saying who was right or who wrong but I am not stand here and be hypocritical and judge them based on what happened. Now if you chose to judge an entire rp or story based on something that was less than a whole page then that is your option to not involve yourself, but do not come here and look down on all the work that everyone has done and judge us because you saw something you did not like. Yes there has been a few missteps here and there but no one is in complete control. Now if you still want in Ok. If not then the show goes on without you. Now these are just my opinions and if you don't like it, I'll hold the door for you.
 
Joule`and ghe Supreme Kai in "The Prophecy"


I sat there meditation,_ I knew that it was soon going to be time for the Supreme Kai to come get me and the kids and return us to Earth.__ It'll be good to get back home._ While I trained my body like the best of the Siayans and the hybrid Changling race that Mark belonged to, I still trained my own mind like a Namic._ Focusing my mind I prepared myself mentally for the return to Earth._ If I knew Earth like I think I did I know there is probably going to be some kind of catastrophe going on right now.

Right now the kids are practicing and the footsteps of the Supreme Kai is coming closer and closer._ As he opened the door, I hovered slightly off the ground coming out of meditative state. Without opening my eyes I asked him "How much longer till the kids I and I get to return to Earth."

"The time to return is coming soon however be cautious the hambringer of death and despair is coming. Mark has noticed the going ons of what is happening on Earth and he is marshalling his forces in preparation of the final battle. I do not know how soon or what shape or form, but I do not that the battlelines are being drawn as we speak."
 
General Green in, "Joke's On You, Biatch."

(Bunnying your characters for some irrelevent stuff, sorries.)

While the possessed Zeon and Dixie were talking, the remaining androids who had been ignored had been charging up powerful ki attacks, when they had completed them they unleashed a hail of energy, lasers, toxin filled syringes, and bombs at Nilons, Dixie, and Zeon. Naturally when the explosions cleared, the three were still standing, a little worse for the wear but still rearing to fight. The eighteen androids flew right towards the three of them, blasting away during their approach to soften them up. Zeon and Dixie fired back, blasting two of the androids apart. As expected the broken remains of the two androids merged together to form one more.

So it went, the seventeen androids brawled with the three warriors. The androids were not as fast or powerful as any of the warriors but they had coordination and and a superior grasp of tactics then even the ancient Mark had ever employed. This and the fact that a new android appeared for every two taken out, the battle was a tiring one. The warriors eventually won, but they had expended a good deal of energy doing so and Mark's diabolical monologue had lost it's momentum leaving a dead silence amongst the three warriors.

He was about to start again when his right earlobe fell off, his shoulder was warm with spilled blood. As he put a hand to his ear a bullet zupped through his left shoulder. Impossible, no mere bullet could harm Zeon! But wait, there was General Green up in the air with his giant Solonoid Quench rifle. The General chambered another round and attempted to put a bullet through Zeon's forehead. Zeon managed to duck but the bullet tore through his Saiyan hair, leaving a bald trail right through the middle of his hairline.

"It's obvious that you won't hold still, so I'll finish you myself murderer!"

The heavily armored form of General Green flew down and engaged Zeon, swinging at him with his bladed Gauntlets. Zeon/Mark was able to block the attacks but even with his super-saiyan toughness these super thin claws were leaving red lines up and down his arms. Dixie/Transca attempted to grab Green from behind to snap his neck and end this foolishness but a strange lense popped up from his armor and flashed a powrful light in her eyes, momentarily blinding her. A tiny gun then swivled around and fired several darts into her face that were not unlike porcupine spines.

Green sneered at Mark/Zeon and leapt back, sliding dramatically across the ground and raising up a small cloud of dust. He pointed his fists at the galactic tyrant and fired off a burst of lasers to keep him busy. Transca, who was quite annoyed with the effectivness of this low powered human dog ran towards him to kick his head off his shoulders but with his right hand he fired a minature missle towards her. With a smug smile she blasted it out of the air, only to find that it hadn't been explosive, it was a chemical bomb and it's contents splashed all over her. She felt as if her skin was going to melt off and indeed she was beggining to manifest chemical burns, however with some quick thinking she charged up and the energy aura burned off the chemicals.

Mark was tired of being embarassed by this pathetic human and he charged up for a quick kill, Green knew that his quick tricks and tactics were not going to work for much longer, he would have to get ready for a fight he knew he could not win. It wouldn't matter much, it was almost done. Almost...

"Form of the Nataraja!"

Four robotic arms popped out from his armor and he engaged Mark. The battle was quick and violent but Mark/Zeon was the clear victor as he was able to land a punch through Green's armor and through his stomach. Green fell to the ground and laughed as blood poured from his eyes, nose, and mouth.

"So, no revenge for me..*cough* not in this life. It doesn't matter anymore. The planet is yours now, you all wanted to rape this planet so badly with your battles...it's all your now. All yours. Heh...enjoy..Just remember the trouble I gave you, thousands more...millions more. You wouldn't win. Just enjoy your new fucking playground..."

With that his eyes closed and he drifted into death. None of them were quite sure what he was talking about. Nilons was still surprised with the fight the human, who was several times weaker than any of them took on two of the most powerful Saiyans at once. Transca was pulling the spikes out of her face. Mark was the first to feel it, where before he had been able to feel billions of weak humans populating this world, there were now a few hundred. They weren't dead, they simply weren't here!
 
Soryan

OOC: hey bunnies can i ask a small favor can you tell me what happened to soryan and where zion is, im a little lost. after that i think ill be able to post again
 
OOC: Not that I don't like the rp, or that I don't respect what you're doing, the storyline and progression is great, but honestly, when, in the words of one of your own role players, when participants can't spell simple words like "The" and "Father", or just write how someone's attack just makes them stronger then have them regenerate in the dumbest way possible...I kinda think poorly of it
 
ooc: look zax heres the deal, you can 1 join and show us how good a roleplayer you are or two stop posting things period.

none of us in this thread are "god moding" (you hit me and i get strnger = god moding) Bunnies was talking about another thread he was playing in, and the healing thing has been fixed and we have worked past it


you sound intelligent and sound like yu could greatly contribute to this thread, so if you want to join you are welcome to if not i would personally appreciate you to stop taking up bandwidth. (space)
 
Nilons

OOC: Hey Bunnies, you still need to post for Violets children. That way Ray can get back into the plot smoothly.

IC: Mark? He couldn't be. Mark doesn't have the pwoer tol posses people, does he? But Zeon and Dixie were made there, prehaps he did something to them while they were worked on.

I broke eye contact with Zeo for a second to see what had happened to the other people who were here. A glow told me what was about to happen, they were building an attack. I placed my eyes back onto Zeo. Doesn't look like he's going to attack just yet.

The problem with machines and androids is they have no energy level that I can detect. So those attacks could be totally meaningless or increadably strong. Further more machines are capable of useing a wide range of weapons in adition to ki blasts, so energy sheild will not protect me completely. My best bet is to dodge the attacks but there are some where between 15 and 20 of them. So how do I dodge this many attacks? By not being here to shoot at, thats my best bet and a few days ago I learned the move to use. I just need a fix on a power level. There should be one close by.

Why can't I feel power levels? I must be stressed. No, why would I be. Theres one power level just behind the androids. Thats the spot. I quickly ready my mind for my trick. I glance at the side and see an attack leaves an andriod's hands. Now is the time. I teleport behind soryan outside the andriods circle around the battle feild. A few seconds go by and waves of andriod attacks hit the area Zeo and Dixie were in. Sadly I can not help them because they are simply a trheat if Mark and Transca can take control of them.

As there barage stoped I teleported back next to Zeo. I was going to speack to him and find out what I can from Mark, but the andriods land and begin an assult. I raised my power a few levels more. I wasn't going to fight them I just needed to dodge them. In the end I escaped with only takeing a few blows and my power almost in the same spot as before.

I faced Zeo once more still ready. A bullet blurred threw his ear and I stoped once more. I took a few steps back to watch. I should help some one. I supose I should protect the human but no he seems to handle himself. He will lose though. Maybe I can hold back Dixie and make it a fair fight. No I shouldn't do that either. Well maybe I should help Zeo and Dixie no they are possed and a threat ratehr then an aid. Well what the hell should I do.

My mind began to wonder as I pondered such a strange turn of events. My body could still feel the human power levels I had been planing to use when I transported but something was odd about them. If I could only feel a few the strongest and closest should be the ones but these ones are neither strong or close.

MY mind froze trying to figure out what was happening. Why can I not feel most of the humans here? Was tehre a plague sometime after I elft and these are all that remain? No, that is crazzy. I glanced back up to Zeo, had Mark made him kill these people off. Wait a second. I looked back towards Rays power. Did she start killing off people? This is confuseing!
 
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soryan

ooc: hey cats can you do me a favor i belive if im not mistaken im there with you (i read something about zion throwing me twoards the androids.) so im guessing im there. If you could write me in that would be appreciated since i am drawing mind blanks on every corner. i cant think of anything at all.
 
OOC:

Mission acomplished. I substitued you for general green. So you are now on the battle feild or ratehr just outside of it and can enter at any moment.
 
soryan

IC: I had been thrown to where zeo, dixie and nilions were to see zeo and dixie start being beat up by androids, nilons was zooming around avoiding stuff, she appeared just behind me and just as i turned to say somethingg she was off again. Zoomin over to her i asked "whats going on here" i ducked just in time to miss a stray ki charged bullet.
 
ooc: Ok i'm a bit confused i thought Zeon and Dixie were on the floor knocked out, rather then up and about kickig some ass. Can someone tell me what happened to Zeon when he was on the floor? i want to make sure that i'm doing it corretly before i post again? Thanks
 
Soryan

ooc: they are on the floor knocked out me and nilons were just posting what we were doing while you two got knocked out, if you would like to continue on thats good. im sorta bored of waiting
 
Nilons

OOC: I was hopeing you'd reply soon Zeo that or bunies would say something about ray fighting the three children. You know what she doesn't have a senzu bean either I think Ray could be introuble.

Oh Zeo I reread a few things. I thought your posts were confused with the Lovers, Zeo gouing evil then being udner mind control. When I reread a few things it made alot more since. I'm impressed.

Hey before Mark comes can we have time laps again nothing to big thsi time but maybe a week? This is for a plot point I've been working on.

IC:Few minutes ago: 'What the heck is going on here?' I dodge a few more bullets and answer. "Looks like a fight to me."

IC: After Nilons mind froze a few psots ago: There gone, all of them are gone. Who could of kiled them off? No they can't be dead thats to many. They got to be some where. "Hey the bag I gave you." I gesture over to the new fighter. "Weren't you supose to tell Lingerie to eat one when you finished your fight?" I will not lsoe my daughter too.
 
Ski in "Return to the Mind"

I had no idea where to take Xuxa as all the bases are on high alert and seeing a Saiyan carrying their unconcious leader in his arms might set them off. Deciding the safest place for both us right now is my home in Vicktown I arrived at my almost mansion like home in time to see the place has been either recently burglurized or just trashed.

I do not have time to worry about that because I had to check to see if Xuxa was badly injured so I push a button that opened up the bookshelf leading to my sub-basement complex. Carrying my fallen leader to the infirmirary. I thoroughly examined her. From my prognosis she only had a set of horrible bruises on her arms, legs and especially her ribs where the furniture and debris crashed ontop of her, but the good news is she was still concious. After asking for some time alone I left her and was preparing to call a medic from town to verify my intial prognosis when suddenly I felt the room go black and I passed out.

I felt like I was being forced into a dream. Once on the dream state I was walking an all black room when suddenly in a spotlight in the corner I see someone I have not seen in 8 years. Standing in front o me in batle ready condition in my mind was Vargas.
 
ooc. im sorry i havnt been around my pc broke:(

IC. sensing a fight i used instant translocation to appear where the fight is and when i reapperd i was shocked by what i saw, zeon and dixie withering in pain but there was somthing differnt about zeon the was a dark aura around him he had turned evil so not knowing what to expect i powerd up to super saiyen 2 ready to fight so after i was ready to fight i went other to check on zeon to see what he said and he said ....
ic. please finish this zeo
 
Zeon/Mark, Dixie/ Transsca

ooc: I havnt been in a while cos i didnt know what was happening or anything like that so i'm going to post something now, sorry if it seems brutal or something but i'm a bit pissed off and depressed lol. I'm putting Ray into this but remember all the characters that Zeon dreams about arnt real, holds His nuts if Cats kicks Zeon's lol

IC: Zeon was on the floor he and Dixie were out cold, for a while now he had been out of control of his actions like someone else was controling him he wasnt sure he wanted it at first but he couldnt take back control, he awoke and looked up there was nothing there but black, had he woken up and was moveing in the outside world or was he in his head? He got up and looked around some more, soon the blackness faded and was back on his own plannet. The cities were busy and Zeon was walking around looking in windows, was he back from were he was, or was this earth and nothing had happened, peeple were looking at him and waveing even some girls were comeing up to him and asking for his phone number. He knew he was back on his own plannet. He walked along the streets some more. He soon found his way to the palace "Good morning Zeon" Vengence spoke "Yeah what ever" Zeon said waveing his hand, Zeon arrived at the throwen of Mark "Morning" Zeon spoke "Yes good morning Zeon, Mark and Zeon had an interesting conversation about things to come and about the past.

After there morning chat Zeon went to the training room to find out what was on the agender for today. Zeon chose his work out, his main one was to train at the differnet gravity levels which would normally be 20000000 Gravitons, HE chose a different program it involved a man and a woman, the woman was asleep and wasnt anyware near Zeon or the man.

The man charged right at Zeon he started to throw punches and kicks as well but Zeon dodged all the moves he started fighting as well, Zeon hit the man in the face and blood splattered everywere, the man fell to the floor and zeon started to kick the man in the stomach and rib cage, over and over again he was kicking, he picked up the man and started to punch his face in over and over, Zeon couldnt stop Zeon withdrew his fist and there was blood covering his fist, he looked at it and then at the man "Please stop no more" The man asked he was beging for mercy "Why should i" Zeon said as he continued to hit him in the face again and again. A tear could be seen forming and when zeon hit him again the tear landed on his fist it washed away some of the blood but only a little bit, Zeon kept hitting over and over again till he droped him and booted him in the face. The man went flying and landed in a heap not moveing Zeon walked up to him and kicked him in the face harder then he had kicked awhile ago. Zeon walked away and looked back to see what he had done, and it felt good. He couldnt beleve the power it felt, he walked up to the computer console suddnely the door opened and it was a new lackie that Mark had taken on "Hi i'm Ray" the girl spoke "Nice to meet you" Zeon said as she walked in, he checked her out "I was wondering if i could train with you" Ray asked

"Yeah why not" Zeon replied the room went dark again and the girl tha was in the corner disapeared the room transformed into a moutain area with lots of walls so that they go though "Let's begin" Zeon said as he flew straigt towards her at his normal level. Ray jumped up and flew back a bit holding out her hand and fireing a few energy blasts over andover again, Zeon was comeing in low and he could just touch the grass underneith him, he flew up and started to doge all the energy blasts that Ray though at him he hit one back and Ray caught it and flug it over her head. She saw Zeon comeing up from below so she gathered enough energy, she made a ball and threw it at him, Zeon dodged and it went right past him, he didnt realise that it was going to come back up with in a few seconds. Zeon held out his hand and was about to fire another energy ball when he was hit hard in the back. "Dam that one stung" Zeon said as he looked bak at his target "Now were did she go?" Zeon said he didnt notice her comeing right behind him and hitting him hard with her knee, Zeon shouted in pain and he went hurtaling down and hit the floor. He stood up and looked at her "Not bad not bad" Zeon shouted back, Ray made the peace sign and sqinted her eyes like a anime school girl just saveing the world or something "To bad that was a warm up" Zeon shouted back, Ray opened her eyes and said "That was a warmup" she was amazed she thought that he was fighting for real not just a silly warm up

Zeon powered up and became a super saiyan level 3 like he had done on earth fighting many people, he cloesed his eyes like all those people on earth when did i go there? who did i fight? does any of this make sence? he didnt know all he knew that he had to fight now and defeat Ray. Ray were did he hear that name before, he knew like he ahd knowen her for a short amount of time but yet he knew that he had knowen her alot more then that but who knows. Zeon jumped up and disapeared Ray was wondering were he had gone till she felt a painful blow that could of killed a normal human she hit the floor like a bullet and left a crater the size of the grancannon she got up but couldnt really see due to the blood that was blinding her "Mega Flaire" Zeon shouted as the massive energy blast hit her forceing her into the ground deep deep deep into the ground "Farther" Ray screamed Farther were did he hear that before, the energy suddnely stopped and he held his head in his hands he was remembering what had happened

"No farther of mine" Ray said, that was it he knew were he ahd met her before it was on earth but that was silly he hadnt been to earth ever Mark wouldnt permit it not unless he was sent on a mission that's it again he thought i have been to earth now i remeber Nilons, Ski and the others i met them there on earth, then i went to Nacmik and saved them i think he memory was a bit blury, he met his real parents on the astral plain, so Mark wasnt his farther he had tricked him. Suddnely Zeon woke up, he was in the real world he got up and so did Dixie

"What happened" Zeon asked "I dont know do i, all i remeber was fuseing with you and then on the lookout, then i was in another world fighting Michio then i relised i was back on Mark's plannet now were here doing i dont know what" Dixie explained to Zeon "I felt like a metor hit us or something" Zeon told her "Same here what happened?"

"I dont know child tell me what you think happened?" Zeon said in a strange voice "What did you just say then?" Dixie asked Zeon

"Well i'll tell you that i'm no longer Zeon, you could say that i'm the true voice of Mark" Zeon spoke again "No your just shitting around now" Dixie said as she started to step back "I shit you not i am him now and there is nothing you can do" Zeon/Mark spoke "We let you go Dixie because we dont need you anymore we have our fine speacamin back, why would we let this one go" Zeon/Mark said "No the real Zeon is still inside let him go" Dixie said as she took the stance ready to fight him if need be "We dont want to let him go just yet we have plans for this vesal" Zeon/Mark spoke again "Like what" Dixie asked him

"Well think of it like this why should we let our true hero go when we could distroy this world and everyone in it" Zeon/Mark said "This i wont let you Digital Transspearation" Dixie shouted as she dove right into Zeon/Mark's body "So you think you can win can you i cant be beaten ever" Zeon/Mark said, Soon Zeon/Mark went down on one knee " WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME" He said Dixie came out simple i speaated the bond holding you to together. Zeon started to faze in and out and then spearated into to Zeon's. One was free of control and the other one spoke like before he was still a mixture of Zeon and Mark but now there were to Zeon's "Thanks Dixie" Zeon spoke

"Now Mark now we have come face to face again what do you have planned for this plannet?" Zeon asked "Simple i ask all of the fighter on the plannet to join me in a little get together at my place" Zeon/Mark said "Fine count me in" Zeon spoke "And me" Dixie said she placed one hand on Zeon's shoulder "were be there"

"Good i look forward to seeing you there soon" Zeon/Mark spoke and with that Zeon/Mark disapeared

"So it looks like were going home" Zeon spoke "Yep it sure does" Dixie replied "I wonder who else is going to come along" Zeon asked "I dont really have a clue to be honest Bro" Dixie replied "Neither do i" Zeon replied. From what they had been though Zeon and Dixie hugged each other

OOC: I hope that wasnt to long lol
 
OOC:

Zeo, may I sujest you use Commas. You lost me once there and I had to reread it twice because there were some places in the sentence where you paused.

So Zeon split back into the two Zeo's that made him. I wonder if We'll see Marko and Ze again.

Lastly I don't kick people in the nuts she does. *Watches Nilons kick Zeo in the nuts.* Sorry about your kids man. They'll be feeling that for a while. :)

Hey bunnies do you wish to psot the kids now?

Oh and good to see you again Iceman.
 
OOC: Well there is still one Zeon he didnt defuse the reasson why Zeon was going mad was because he had an image of something which was controling him. If you watched Yu-Gi-Oh! Recent it's like how Marik takes control of people useing his malenium rod (And no it's not his naughtty bits). If you dont watch yu-gi-oh! then it's basic mind slave

Now the move that Dixie did was to bring out the real Zeon you all would of been hurt and then Zeon would be hurt with the power of greif and that cos Mark would of made it so painful to watch him hurt his friends over and over again.

Sorry i didnt use any commors i was really pissed off and all i wanted to do was type lol, so i'm sorry i didnt put ne commors in.

Look's like a another space raod trip yay lol
 
OOC:

I dream of a bunny she is a light brown Hare. If I recall she's posting in this thread, just a little after reading this. I hope.

Zeo it's commas. I swear I'm the only one that spells things right around hear. (Me spell something right? That'd be a first.) I disagree Nilons would Kick Zeo's ass, well his nuts any ways. But yeah I get the point there, what I don't get is why it's two Zeons and not two Zeos? Is the form of Zeon strictly based on power and since he became Zeon way back when, he's grown in power so much that even when split back into two he is still Zeon? (Or any otehr excuse would be nice?)
 
new arrival

this is ziruhe is a decendent of pan


name:Ziru

63/64human 1/64saiyan

male

age: 21

weight:230 (90%muscle)

power: 250-350 if angry

height:6'1"

build:martial artist

hair like trunk's in his first apperence

clothes:like gokus but blackwhite gloves

apperence: slice scar on his right cheek

bio: ziru has vageta's outlook and would rather kill an enemy
than spare them

past:his perents abandoned him when he was born he managed to survive by his saiyan will alone.
he learned martial arts from Ryu shen han decendant of tien shen
han
he hates anyone who would harm the earth or her people.
presently hes chaseing a legend The Dragonballs
 
OOC:Welcome aboard tallanddark, your character is a bit underpowered at this point but I think that's wonderful it will help keep this story in perspective and hopefully keep us from going too far.

The reason I have not posted is because once again I am quite confused with the last few posts, especially Zeo's. It's taking me awhile to piece together the events and even longer to think of a response. I'll try to get one down soon.
 
OOC:

Wellcome Tall and Dark. It's been a year since the thread started so we have moved up quite a ways and thats why your under powered. But on the plus side your story lets you in with very little effort.

Bunnies Zeo's last post was a dream. Zeon split into two (Keep in mind Zeon is a strange mix of fusion technology to begin with. Marko and Ze make Zeo, Zeo and the second Zeo make Zeon. So he is unstable enough for dixie to split into two.) One half was udner Marks control and left the otehr half is Zeon under his own control. He just moved Mark back into the main plot.

I was just waiting for you to check in and say you were still reading. I'm paranoid about people leaveing this thread. You should probably post something about the fight with ray, otehr wsie I will, but chances are that won't go well the fight is trhee one one how well could she be doing?
 
zirus quest

ziru has heard about the fight with ray and hears about SS3 but believes its just a rumour but he decides SS3 would be nice so he continues his quest for the dragon ball hopeing to make some wishes
 
The Dream World

ooc: Ok i'm here to help clean up a a bit about my long post, To make things short it was set in the dream world

Zeon was going to go on a rampage and hurt nearly everyone and that but Dixie did a move and separated the part that was controling Zeon, More like a chip or something that had control over Zeon or better yet as Cats said a part of Zeon,

Zeon's power hasnt dropped and he hasnt gainined nething either he's still at the same power level and that.

Welcome tallanddark it's good to have new blood in the story, just a hint, Zeon my character has all the dragonballs and he hasnt made a wish yet, wot could i have install for the dragon who know's lol
 
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