Dragon Ball NW

IC: "Ah i've been waiting to meet you for some time my dear" The figure spoke "You see i've been watching Earth for some years now and i've seen most things come from you saiyans" He continued "Well you see i've noticed alot of great power in you and i want it to be used for evil" He carried on for a while, He went on and on about the battles from when Goku was alive

"Now you see i want that power, thats why Zeo is my top man for the job he's almost got the transformation part right anyway in these 3 years you will be going though the intense training that you will ever go though" he said once again. This was a bit hard for Nilons to understand. "So what is your name i bet its something big and stong" Nilons asked "My name is Mark" Mark replied. Everyone fell to the floor (Typical anime style) "Thats what your name is Mark" Nilons said in surpirsement "Yes well my mother choose it for me" Mark continued while chouhing

Mark continued to go on and on for ages telling them what he was going to do and what they were going to do for him.

ooc) Ok i know Mark whouldnt be a strong name for a bad guy but i found it funny lol
 
Nilons in "Trying to stay awake."

OOC: Zeo you forgot Nilons dosen't know you'll return in three
years. And beside's will go to earth in two years. That oght to make every one panic. Be funny as hell.

IC: I walked in to see a figure standing bye the window. He had blueish skin. He wore a black cape and had dark blue hair. Not what I expected for the face of evil. To top that off capes aren't in stlye either maybe I should tell him. No he'll figure it out when he can't get a date.

'Aa, you are here youg lady. Nilons right. I've been watching earth for some years now.' Why the hell would this evil bastard be watching my home planet. 'I've seen many thing come from you sayains.'

Oh so he watched it because of me and the others. Then why had he let Zeo kill off the others. I remeamber on the flight he had told me his master foreced him to spare me. Why would he spare me and not the others. There just as sayain as me right.

(This fallowing dilect is modified from what Zeo posted.)

'You see your the strongest saiyan female alive, and I want your power.' Oh shit I don't like how he got gender involved in this. But that dose tell me why he killed the others. He wanted me because I'm a girl. Well I guess the old stereo type came true. Only th white chick lives.

'You see I first herd of Gouku..' I hate it when people go on and on about there lives. A good 30 minute latter the conversation sounded like this.'Super......Super....Super.....super.....' After what felt like days he finally stoped.

He began to clear his thought as if to add more so I had to come up with a question."Um.... Whats your name." Zeo looked at me like I did something forbiden. "Um.. I bet it's something big and strong right...." 'I'm Mark....'
 
Did some searching

AS far as I can tell this is the biggest thread that actually has a story to it. Not bad if I do say so myself. Course the ones biger then this are 900 and 1300 so um lets just pray we get that big. I know I'm going aslong as possible.
 
OOC: Hey, this thread is going great. And I was the one who created it. *Looks smug* But anyway, thanks again for everything.
As for super saiyans at our next... *ahem*... meeting, I'm not really sure. Personally I don't think our characters could advance that much (Not even Zeo...) Think about it, Zeo's PL at this point in time is the highest of all the PC's at 1300. And the pure saiyans turned SSJ at 1,000,000. That's a far cry off 1300.

IC: Laos.

Laos hopped into Kelson's capsule machine, grateful for the chance to just sit back and relax for a bit. As they flew after the others, he watched the clouds pass absent-mindedly, his thoughts on Nilons and how he couldn't even gather the balls to go and save her. Damn it, what was his problem? He had never been afraid of anything before... but then again, he'd never had anything to be afraid of... and it's not every day that an ultimate evil power tries to attack your planet. Once you've felt the power of that ultimate evil, it kinda knocks the courage out of you...
He frowned and his jaw locked, his fist flying out to meet the side of the machine.
 
The Sorrow/The Real Training

Flying back to the Lookout with Ski on my left and Laos with Kelson in one of Nilons' Capsule Cars.

Nilons will get at him for taking the car....

She really is gone. I didn't have a long time to know her and now she's gone on to the Other Side. Why is this happening to us...to me now?

I look to my left and see a single solitary tear fall from Ski's eye. He was struggling to not let it out but it sneaked by his defenses and fell.

I just hope we can still get things done, especially for her sake. We have to be ready for when he comes back and I swear...

'I swear on the memories of Kazuo and Nilons that I will make that bastard pay; by any means necessary...'

The others just look at me as I fight the urge to go blow something up right now. Thankfully by now the Lookout was coming into view and within a minute everyone had landed on it's platform.

I go over to Laos and Kelson in the car and with no sugar-coating explain what Ski and I believe happened to Zeo and Nilons plus the message left by him.

I then address the three of them.

'Gentlemen, I don't know about you but I'm going to train. I will eat, sleep, and breathe Revenge on Zeo. This is the thing that Piccolo has brought us up here to do: Defend the Earth and right now we're 0 and 1. I'm not looking for a repeat performance, at least by me.

If you're with me then we must bust our ass and make sure to be stronger than we've ever dreamed.

Whether they accept this or not, I better be the one that goes down to her family to let them know. They shouldn't be left in the dark.
 
Kelson looks at Michio, looks at Laos, then shrugs.

"Do as you wish...I fought the guy for nearly an hour...he couldn't touch me...managed to nearly take him out. Then he got serious. It was after I nailed him in the ribs hard enough to throw most 200lb men flying, but he just took it like a hard gut-punch. Anyhow, following that he did something...it made him fast...very very fast...and strong. I don't know how many shots I blocked...obviously not enough, but lets just say those blocks hurt worse then your hardest hit on me, Michio. You're going to have to do something amazing if you hope to catch up. His hands were barely blurs to me, and I recall being much faster then you..."

Kelson kicks the accelerator and heads off towards the destroyed mountain, interested in seeing what has happened. After a long second, he self-conciously closes the window he was talking at and, without looking at Laos, confides his secret.

"I told you I hit him hard, but I don't think Michio understood. I hit him harder then I have ever hit anything...EVER. I used that ki you spoke of...energizing my attack. He obviously felt it...but much less so then anyone else I've ever fought. Most would have shattered chests...probably be dead by now due to internal bleeding...he might just have a bruise, if that. However, when he powered up...I could feel the energy in the air. It was as thick as water and chilled me to the bone. I think I might have made three or four blocks...but those were luck. When he got a shot in...it was all over. I remember him slamming me against the ground like some kind of rag doll...that is when the ribs broke...I couldn't hardly see anymore."

Kelson glances over at Laos, trying hard not to betray the fear in his heart.

"He could have taken us all and killed us. Even powered down he was faster then the others...I only really hit him because we were just sparring more or less. I only kept him from using the sensu beans by deceiving him, and kept him from flying or using energy attacks by claiming I wanted a fair fight without wanting to send us both hurtling to the ground after I blew up the lookout...which I claimed would happen if it came to energy blasts."

Shaking his head, Kelson turns to look outside again, they are near the mountain.

"Laos, we won this battle by luck. Luck that he didn't take me seriously enough, luck that he overanalyzed me...thinking I was just playing around when I was giving it my all...playing by rules I created for everyone's safety, but were really made to hide my weakness. He moved faster then the fastest human, or saiyan, I've ever met and hit even harder. I don't know why he left us when he did...maybe he thought I was going to get pissed and power up on him."
 
Notes

After contiplateing, I agree with DW. The supersaiyan thing should require more power. Still at the next meeting Nilons who I imagen will be the weakest would be up as high as Zeo. Then you have the concept of Goten and Trunks they were super sayain by the age of seven. Given they are more powerful but maybe it just fallows emotions. Any how you would have to go in to detail and it's better to have it as a trump card. Mark is a lot stronger then Zeo. Coarse we'll be fighting henchmen before we fight him.

I've been working on a bit of history for Nilons between were she is now and when she returns. If there are no objections I would like Nilons to have achived the .5 form once before. Giveing her the tail. I however plan on haveing it be the case were she dose it once and can't do it again.

I'm just going to hang around til Michio dose his post to leotard. Um, I do want to return in two years instead of three. Catch the others off gaurd be pretty funny.
 
Super Saiyan

OOC) Here's a thought, why doesnt some of us transform into super saiyans like Laos, Zeo ect. Because of the hurt they have been though like loseing the people they love. Anyway heres another thought. If Zeo turned Super saiyan wot colour hair wud he have lol, i wud say bright white lol
 
Night fall

Night fall was apon the planet were Zeo was standing alone looking into the stars, What was he planning to do he wanted to become more powerfull, He hated standing in the shadow of Mark, If he wasnt that week to begin with he would have been able to defeat those clowns, he closed his eyes trying to remeber what he did wrong. Suddenly some one put there hand on his shoulder "Zeo" Mark said "Uh yes" Zeo replied "Do you like it here" Mark asked, Although Mark was Zeo's master they had formed a close bond and became close friends. infact Mark was Zeo's best and only friend

"Do you like it here" Mark asked again "I dont know" Zeo replied "What do you want to do" Mark asked "What i really want is to become like this Goku character or even like the others you were talking about" Zeo said as he looked back at the stars "You will my friend some day you will become a super saiyan" Mark said as he walked away "Someday" He added Zeo sighed and continued to look out at the stars.
 
ooc) There were alot of movies made before any of the saiyans went SSJ...why rush it? Let us reach maybe 10k or so pl by next battle and fight it out...around post 1200 or so, we'll be SSJ for sure! Or...whatever it is I do with Kelson...Kaoken :)
 
I dont mind

I dont mind when we turn to the blonde side lol
 
Ski in "The Mood is About to Change"


^Crying does not solve a problem. It will not breathe life back into love ones gone. It will not make past mistakes corrected. Tears are just extention of frustrations and wasted emotion.^ I try telling myself that over and over again but the tears wont stop making their way down my face. Flying back to the lookout I could not see where I was going because the tears in my eyes were blurring my vision but instead I flew home on memory and instinct. Halfway home I notice Michio saw a tear slide down my face so I reach into my pocket and pull out my sunglasses. I did not want anyone to see my eyes. I did not want to show any kind of weakness. I did not want them to see that my eyes were becoming all red and puffy. Because if they could see it then somewhere out there that bastard could probably see it.

Once we got back to the lookout I heard Michio gives his speech about turning things around and in a way I agree with him but now I was tired. I was tired of letting things by pass me. That monster made his way up here and had his way with everyone around here but did not lay a finger on me like I did not exist or I was not worthy. Then he kill off someone I had feelings for. I used to like running my mouth and reminding people how damn good I am but no the time for talking was over the time for words has gone and pass now is the time to turn around train to hand Zeo his ass.

While Michio was seeking acceptance for his plan, I just stared at them with the intensity is radiating off my face. They understood I was even if I did not open my mouth. Holding her charred remains of her clothes my power levels sew sawed in anger and sorrow.
 
OOC: I imagine that Zeo's hair would just go brighter when he went super saiyan. But, that's up to you, if you want to make something crazy. I'm fine with that. :)

IC: Laos looked into the distance, contemplating what Kelson had said. He could hear the fear in the other young man's voice, even if he tried to hide it.
"Interesting that you call this battle a win. I know I don't. I believe you, but. About his power. I only tasted a little bit of it, and it was enough to knock me down." Laos set his jaw hard, his unability to handle his weakness showing. "God damn it, if only I... we... were stronger, Nilons would... she'd be..." his voice trailed off. "Damn it." he said again as he struggled to hold back his emotions.
 
Breaking the News

I was a little mad at Kelson after he seemed to brush me off. He seems so apathetic and indignant that it's really irritating to me. Thankfully he took off with Laos in the skycar.

I looked at Ski and I could tell just by his facial features that he was with me. Maybe it was the fact that Ski and I didn't really have a chance to fight against Zeo, but I knew that Ski would be my new sparring partner for sure... However, First things first.

'Well Ski... I think it's time Nilons' family find out about her. I'm heading over there. Do you wish to come too?'

Ski just looks at me. Obviously this is affecting him a lot.

'Ok, if you want to stay here, I'll tell them or you can just follow me after I leave and we can both tell them.'

I power up and take a flying leap off the Lookout. Halfway down the tower I get lift and take off towards East City and the house.

In my mind I try to think of good ways to break it to them.

Oh what the hell... there are no good ways to tell a family that their family member had been killed. The problem is... how do I explain it? I can't exactly say,

'Hi Mr and Mrs Briefs. Guess what? Your daughter was killed by an alien. He completely vaporised her. Have a good day now!' Sometimes I think it was a bad life choice to respond to Piccolo's call.


I finally make it to East City and find the house. I land more gracefully this time and just stand out front, trying to find some Divine Inspiration to help me with this task.

OOC: Hey Phoenix, if you want Ski to be with me and to continue the part, just have him land next to me right then and then take over ok? As for the SSJ thing: I think we should wait for a while. I mean as it is it will be a while before we even come close to getting the energy to become SSJ. I sort of agree with DW on the next time we meet with Zeo we have a PL of somewhere in the tens of thousands.
 
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"Laos...you don't understand...that was BEFORE he powered up. He was...almost a dozen times faster after powering up and much...much stronger. Inhumanly fast, in fact..."
 
Nilons

ooc: um shit I guess we could of done a lot more fighting. Sorry I guess I jumped the gun. Um so are we going to go back to the training story or in the next couple of days are we going to return.

Side note when Nilons returns she will have a tail. The tail thing is more cosmetic then anything else. Well a weakness too. Just think of the side plot of her fammily freaking out that she has been dead two years and has a tail. All sorts of fun.

IC: Mark.... Mark..... Mark.... Damn that is so screwed up. What type of mother names a ruthless mercinary Mark. I walked out of the room, after hering a few words a few hundred times from Mark.

Shit his speech might of been enter taining if. Eever other sentence didn't have Super Sayain in it. After the first hour or so it gets real dull. Zeo hadn't fallowed me out. What had he stayed behind to discuss.

Oh shit were they going to kill me! No if they were going to do that they wouldn't of given me new cloths. Not that Zeo had worked hard to get them or anything. The door opened and Zeo walked out.

'Tomorow I begin your training.' Training what the hell dosae he need to train me for. Beating up people weaker then me. No... remain calm Nilons, just relax. This training will make you stronger so you can kill them all.

I felt something cold on my cheek. I raised my hand to touch it. The cool sauck to my finger pulling it back I saw there was tear drop on it. A single teardrop and nothing more. After all I went threw this is all I dared shed. What a depressing thought.
 
Rateing

None of the sites on the first page have rattings. I'll post one.

K, I think I see the reason no one adds rateings.

Nothing happened.
 
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Nilons

OOC: If any one asks this is two years after my last post. Hey any one noticed this page has been viewed a hundred times for every post.

IC:

Rushing out of a space pod. "Michio your alive. Thank god." 'You came back Nilons.' a voice says from behind. I turn to see Laos there with the same smug smile. I was on earth again. 'I thought you would never return.' Laos continued.

'You defeated Zeo then.' Ski spoke behind me. "No, Zeo isn't bad." 'What are you talking about he is pure evil.' "No, he saved my life....." 'He saved your life..' I herd Kelsons voice behind me. "Yes, he helped me, more then once even." 'Then you must be evil aswell.'

I turned to see Kelson. His hand lay lifeless at his side. Blood was driping from the side of his mouth. I turned to the others, They were all dead. Ski even had a hole right threw his chest.

'Don't worry Nilons, I'm here.' Zeo was becide me. 'We killed them once we can do it again.' "I didn't kill them."

'You killed us all.' The sound thundered like an army. I looked around there was an army. An army I had killed. All the inicent I had slayed. I couldn't fight them all. 'Aaaaaaaa' I turned Kelson had punched a hole threw Zeo. 'Now it's your turn trator.'

I sat up screaming in bed. Sweat driped from my body. It was cold out. I sat by a fire and a sleeping Zeo. It's been two years why has my guilt only starting to show now. I wish they were still alive. But how could I face them now. I've joined the enemy. "But thats all I could do" I don't stand a chance against Mark by myself.

OOC: This take Nilons into the second season of DBNW.
 
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OOC) After two years...I have no idea how strong my character would be....btw, 10 views / post, not 100
 
Ski in "New Beginnings"


Landing at the lookout I remain stone faced and serious while the others talked. This was happening just like my dream predicted. Nilons was gone and whenever that sociopath gets back the others might fall prey to the same fate and why the hell didnt Piccolo raise a finger to get involved when he is supposed to have more power than that guy? So many things I had to figure out and I had no time to do it.

Michio asked me to talk to Nilon's family but I could not do it for shame that I could not save her. I mean I was right there. Right next to them but I could not save her. I was only inches away from catching up to them but I could not do it and it was eating me up inside. I could have done something. I should have been stronger, faster, smarter, better but instead I focused on fun and trying to get the girl. And what happens someone who I cared about and was innocent payed the price with her life.

I realized that I need to get away from it all. About 20 minutes after Michio left I just gracefully swanndived off the edge of the towers plummetind hundreds of feet to the ground just inches away from smashing into the ground right before I picked myself up and flew to a mansion outside Rocktown. My father lived here right before he died. My dad was a strict person when it came to shape and often trained in a gravity controlled room in the basement for maximum effect. My plan was I was going to lock myself in that room and train like I never trained before and use the gravity as an added weight to my training to get the maximum desired effect.

Sitting in the lotus position on the roof I took my sunglasses and my shirt off and headed toward the basement. The time for talking is over, the time for morning is gone, the time to prepare for vengance was now.

OCC: On the whole SSJ issue it does not matter if we go supersaiyan or not yet. But I think in 2 years everyone should be at that even .5 SS instead. Plus when we go Super Kelson is screwed because he is only human. Ha sucks to be him when that happens lol.
 
OOC: Wow, that rushed on the whole two year thing :)
But, if you guys think you want to go straight ahead to the next arrival, that's fine. Just a few things that will have happened during the time:
1. Piccolo didn't die. After being told about the whole event, and Nilons' apparent death, he told the others about the dragonballs, and how they could get Nilons back. They then went and gathered the dragonballs, with the aid of the dragonball radar that Bulma had once made, which Piccolo had kept secret and safe. Everyone cheered up as they summoned the dragon, knowing that Nilons would be with them in just a moment. When they made the wish, the dragon informed them that Nilons was still alive. I'm not sure what their replacement wish would be, so get back to me if you can think of something.
2. Shortly after this, Piccolo told them that his time on Earth was up, and that it was left in their hands now. He informed them of the other Nameks, and told Popo to arrange a new Kami. He also told them the dragonballs would dissapear. And then he died, much to everyone's dissapointment. Popo is yet to arrange a new Kami.
3. Each of the Earth defenders (And probably Zeo and Nilons) will have trained vigorously, even more so after Piccolo's death, so Laos, Michio, Kelson and Ski will have a power level somewhere in the vicinity of 10,000 or so. As for Zeo and Nilons, you guys can figure that out, but don't make it to one-sided. Does that sound good? By the way, that's not strong enough for super saiyan, but maybe .5 saiyan... (We need a better name for that... any ideas ppl?)

Well, yeah. So keep that in mind if we're going to jump the two year gap. I'll leave that one up to you guys.
Later.
 
I will post...

...But you guys need to hold back just for a couple of hours. Let me do my thing with the Family then if need be we can skip the two years.

Oh and BTW:

DW - Is it ok if I say that before Piccolo died he helped decifer some more of Gohan's Book? that way I can have access to some more abilities... of course keeping them within the limit.

One other thing. The power Level of 10,000; Is that at Max or can our max be between 15-20,000?

Alt. Name for .5 Saiyan = Hemi-saiyan
Or perhaps we can use the Ultra Saiyan thing for us. It could be just sheer coincidence that so many generations after the whole Ultra SSJ came out, we now call a more powerful saiyan below the SSJ level an Ultra Saiyan.

How's that?
 
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OOC: Ok...so my request for holding off is unwarranted it looks like. Alright then. I'll post about the family then the next post I make will be 2 years later, will that work for everybody?

IC: I wait outside for a few minutes, hoping Ski would come to meet me, but it seemed not to be.

Well, time to get it over with.

I walk up to the door and knock, only to get no answer.

Oh great...they're not even home.

I was just about to turn around and go when I hear something from inside and the door opens. It was Nilons' Mother, Leotard.

"It's you... Michio isn't it?"

'Yeah, I'm Michio. Can I come in? It's about... Nilons.'

"Um... sure. Come on in."

She could see the tension in my face and seemed to be acting on it. I was led to the Living Room and she sat down. By this time, Nilons' Father and Brother had come into the room as well.

They were very tense as they were seeing me being so forlorn.

No pretense, just tell them baka.

'Something... has happened to Nilons.'

"Well what is it? She break a leg? Piss someone off too much? What?" asked Boxer.

'Our group was... attacked by an outsider. He was very strong and... in the end... he...I'm so sorry. Nilons is dead.'

"WHAT???" all three exclaimed.

Her father was speechless, her Mom was becoming very hysterical, asking me loads of questions, most of them I couldn't answer due to the fact that I was out of it. Boxer however, seemed to be the only one not Catatonic or Hysterical. He calmed down his mom then looked straight at me.

"Did you see her die?"

'Well... no. We can't find her or any evidence that she's alive. The only thing we found was her clothes and those were charred pretty badly.'

"Then she's not dead Michio."

'Excuse me?'

"I know my sister. She might be a pain in the ass as well as long on mouth, short on temper. Just like me someways I guess, but I know she can't be dead. Not until I see her body and can touch will I believe that she's dead."

'I'm sorry Boxer, but there was no body to recover. She was... pretty much burned into nothing.'

"It could be a trick or something else happened. I'm not saying that it's a possibility, but I know she's too damn tough to die like that and especially now. I can remember during that first time I saw you at the Picnic that she did some things that were astronomical. Practically flying into the air to catch balls and some awesome strength. I know she got those abilites from practicing with you and the others she talked about. She's not dead Michio, and I'll stick to it until I die."

'I.. understand. I better be going now to leave you all alone.'

I don't wait for a response, I just get up and leave the house and a family to have their grief. I look down at the ground as I close the door behind me.

Can she still be alive? Can Boxer be right? I mean he's known her longer than any of us...

'No, she's dead. It's just a way to help him accept that she's not coming back. I wish I had that luxury with Kazuo. Well, time to start training. I can't bring back Kazuo or Nilons, but I'll make damn sure that no one else has to experience this anymore. I will defeat Zeo and make him pay. Time for this fucking Saiyan Blood in my veins to start working for me.'

I power up and take back off towards the Lookout, ready to blaze a trail for my life: Defending the Earth and it's inhabitants.

OOC: Like I said, if no one objects, my next post will be two years later. I'll keep Michio at the Lookout and I guess acting like an Interim Kami, even if it's nothing more than a pathetic title. I don't know if any of the rest of you are coming back so better say what happens.
 
Cats ooc:

My two cents.

Um, bout DW's first sujestion. I don't plan on haveing Nilons go evil. I did come up with a nice plot. So my sujestions are.

1) more code in the book in particlar the Kayoken. For Kelson.
2) The dragon will come but when they wish her back to life. Piccolo dies after the dragon says "I can't grant that wish..." That way they don't know why he couldn't grant the wish.

I plan on Nilons testing the others before she asks them for help. Like I said she isn't going evil. I mentioned my plan in a pm to zeo as his carecter is important for the plot I have in mind don't worry. Most of it will come out after she tests you.

Zeo I'm not completely shure about he is either switching to good or Not but he won't be the main villain. We have mark and his limitless underlings to pumel on.

3) I was thinking High Sayain but it's up to a vote.
 
OOC) High Saiyan sounds fine to me...not sure why you want the tail so much, but okie :) BTW, Kaoken lets me move faster then a SSJ of equal power level, they just hit much harder, at least from what I recall.
 
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