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The fighting continued for at least half an hour, Kelson wasn't exactly sure how long. Following a half hour of exhanging attacks, however, neither side was any nearer a victory...in fact, neither had even broken a sweat yet.
Kelson threw another, easily blocked high punch. Without any warning, Kelson then threw all the power he could summon in an instant into his rapidly rising leg, hoping Zeo was both complacent enough from the half hour battle and his block too high to block the powerful leg heading for his ribs.
Within his mind, Kelson already had the next attack planned. As Zeo fell leftward from the blow, Kelson would move in with a barrage to the face.
Kelson threw another, easily blocked high punch. Without any warning, Kelson then threw all the power he could summon in an instant into his rapidly rising leg, hoping Zeo was both complacent enough from the half hour battle and his block too high to block the powerful leg heading for his ribs.
Within his mind, Kelson already had the next attack planned. As Zeo fell leftward from the blow, Kelson would move in with a barrage to the face.
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Seeing how Zeo's last attack hardly did anything he looked at Kalson who was grining at him.
"How'd you like that?" Kalson said
"Well it would have been a shame if you had gone down so easily" Zeo smirked. "Shall we continue" Zeo asked
"How'd you like that?" Kalson said
"Well it would have been a shame if you had gone down so easily" Zeo smirked. "Shall we continue" Zeo asked
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"in a word yes i think you have been trying" Zeo laughed "Now lets take it to the next level" Zeo cried out
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" Zeo shouted as he was doing this his power level was rasieing.
After a few seconds Zeo was almost at full power "I'll stay like this for a time being ha ha ha ha" He laughed again
"ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" Zeo shouted as he was doing this his power level was rasieing.
After a few seconds Zeo was almost at full power "I'll stay like this for a time being ha ha ha ha" He laughed again
Kelson watch neutrally as Zeo powered up, careful not to disclose his internal thoughts.
Oh...shit...very...very not good...I can feel the energy falling off of this guy...shit shit shit...how the hell did he do that anyhow? Please wake up soon guys...I won't be able to hold him long at this level...damn, even his breathing is accelerated...not good
Oh...shit...very...very not good...I can feel the energy falling off of this guy...shit shit shit...how the hell did he do that anyhow? Please wake up soon guys...I won't be able to hold him long at this level...damn, even his breathing is accelerated...not good
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Ski in "Good F'N Night"
As soon as we got back to the Lookout Nilons hopped out of the jet so fast that she never really landed it. Quickly sliding over into her driver seat I parked the vehicle and ran back just in time to see some blond guy hit Nilons then fire a blast at her. I tried running but I was too far away to save her. Just then I saw Kelson catch her by the leg and chuck her the opposite direction into the house. ^Great aint that second person to go through that wall since we got here.^ I smacked myself in the head for even thinking of this like it was a joke.
Running into the house I check Nilon's pulse. Thank God it was still strong. Carrying her farther away I laid her down on top of a table then ran back outside just in time for Kelson and Zeo agree to thier little duel. Well if they think I was just going to stand by and watch while eating popcorn and yelling go Kelso go. They got another thing coming.
Powering up I was preparing to take it up a notch. Right before I took off I yelled "Hey blonde your candy ass is mine." Funny that sonovabitch ignored me to talk rules with Kelson. Ok now I am insulted. Just as I was a few feet away from they the blonde jackass fired a these weird white balls at me, Loas, Nilons and Picholo. I tried to dodge it but the ball some how entered my body. Suddenly my whole body felt heavy and I began to feel like I could not lift my own body weight then I felt my Ki energy dip all of a sudden. This made the whole concept of flight not possible and I began to drop like a stone. The last thing I manage to notice was Blonde refer to Nilons as making her his love slave. I managed to shoot him a stare of pure hatred and difiance before slowly drifting off.
OCC: Great now that we are asleep what are we supposed to do now guy?? (tapping foot impatiently)
As soon as we got back to the Lookout Nilons hopped out of the jet so fast that she never really landed it. Quickly sliding over into her driver seat I parked the vehicle and ran back just in time to see some blond guy hit Nilons then fire a blast at her. I tried running but I was too far away to save her. Just then I saw Kelson catch her by the leg and chuck her the opposite direction into the house. ^Great aint that second person to go through that wall since we got here.^ I smacked myself in the head for even thinking of this like it was a joke.
Running into the house I check Nilon's pulse. Thank God it was still strong. Carrying her farther away I laid her down on top of a table then ran back outside just in time for Kelson and Zeo agree to thier little duel. Well if they think I was just going to stand by and watch while eating popcorn and yelling go Kelso go. They got another thing coming.
Powering up I was preparing to take it up a notch. Right before I took off I yelled "Hey blonde your candy ass is mine." Funny that sonovabitch ignored me to talk rules with Kelson. Ok now I am insulted. Just as I was a few feet away from they the blonde jackass fired a these weird white balls at me, Loas, Nilons and Picholo. I tried to dodge it but the ball some how entered my body. Suddenly my whole body felt heavy and I began to feel like I could not lift my own body weight then I felt my Ki energy dip all of a sudden. This made the whole concept of flight not possible and I began to drop like a stone. The last thing I manage to notice was Blonde refer to Nilons as making her his love slave. I managed to shoot him a stare of pure hatred and difiance before slowly drifting off.
OCC: Great now that we are asleep what are we supposed to do now guy?? (tapping foot impatiently)
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OOC) Yeah, knocking four of us out with one move is a bit unfair, but that's fine. I agree with what you all said about the fighting - taking it in turns, not doing anything drastic in one post, etc. But also you can't take that too far - otherwise you get pages upon pages of just...
"He threw a punch at me."
"I dodged and tried to kick him."
"I blocked it and grabbed his leg and tried to throw him."
Type stuff.
Again, it's one of those touchy subjects that changes from person to person - a perfect compromise can barely ever be found - but what you guys have done is pretty good.
Anyway, can't really post much, so I guess Laos'll just sleep some more. heh...
"He threw a punch at me."
"I dodged and tried to kick him."
"I blocked it and grabbed his leg and tried to throw him."
Type stuff.
Again, it's one of those touchy subjects that changes from person to person - a perfect compromise can barely ever be found - but what you guys have done is pretty good.
Anyway, can't really post much, so I guess Laos'll just sleep some more. heh...
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OOC: Well everyone, this has been a very good fight and all but if you would let me, I think I'll wake up now. I'm not going to interfere in the match yet. Right now I just want to get Michio out of bed before he gets sores...
I'm guessing that since I was already asleep that I was not hit by those white balls of Zeo's correct?
IC: The..dreams. They're fading from me? Can I actually think? I must try to wake up.
I try to open my eyes, but it hurts too much due to the sunlight and they seem very heavy still. The sedative Mr. Popo slipped into my drink when I came back to the lookout must have finally worn off and I've recovered physically. Mentally, might be another story.
As I fight the lingering effects, I pull the covers off and sit up only to see the group all splayed out on the floor of the lookout. I jump up only to land right on my face with a thud.
'Oww... Goddamn it. I must look like a drunk after a 3-Kegger party.'
I get up a bit and crawl over to the others. The last thing I want is to do another header into the hard floor again. As I make it to the others on the floor, I think they're dead. Imagine my suprise when I can hear Piccolo do a slight snore.
'They're asleep? Why would they be asleep in the middle of the day... Piccolo especially?'
"Because the enemy is finally here Michio."
I turn around to look up at a distraught Mr. Popo. He definately looked like he wished he could be anywhere else but here.
'The enemy?'
"Yes. Some blond-haired youth. He came in while I was at the far end of the Lookout in my room when a Proximity alarm went off, alerting me to his presence."
'Proximity Alarm?'
"Yes. One thing I've learned by being assistant to the Guardian of Earth is that a lot of people come up here. I was sick and tired of people just dropping in so during Dende's time as Guardian, I installed detection devices all around the Lookout to alert me to any power source coming up to the Tower. Unfortunately I never had it read the lower power settings. It was always tuned to the higher settings for your ancestors. I was too lax there. By the time the sensors could detect this intruder, it was too late and he used some technique to put everyone asleep. I stayed hidden since I was sure he would try to kill me and someone had to be awake for when you woke up."
By this time, Mr. Popo had helped me up to a standing position and injecting something into my leg.
'Hey!'
"This will fully counteract the tranquilizer and hopefully give you a little adrenaline boost when it kicks in fully."
Just then I looked at everyone and did a head count.
'Where's Kelson?'
"Fighting the blonde haired one"
'I've gotta go...'
I take a step and the floor starts taking on wierd shapes and angles. Mr. Popo helps me stay Vertical.
"You have to wait until you're clearheaded."
If only it could go faster.
OOC: Well everyone, this has been a very good fight and all but if you would let me, I think I'll wake up now. I'm not going to interfere in the match yet. Right now I just want to get Michio out of bed before he gets sores...
I'm guessing that since I was already asleep that I was not hit by those white balls of Zeo's correct?IC: The..dreams. They're fading from me? Can I actually think? I must try to wake up.
I try to open my eyes, but it hurts too much due to the sunlight and they seem very heavy still. The sedative Mr. Popo slipped into my drink when I came back to the lookout must have finally worn off and I've recovered physically. Mentally, might be another story.
As I fight the lingering effects, I pull the covers off and sit up only to see the group all splayed out on the floor of the lookout. I jump up only to land right on my face with a thud.
'Oww... Goddamn it. I must look like a drunk after a 3-Kegger party.'
I get up a bit and crawl over to the others. The last thing I want is to do another header into the hard floor again. As I make it to the others on the floor, I think they're dead. Imagine my suprise when I can hear Piccolo do a slight snore.
'They're asleep? Why would they be asleep in the middle of the day... Piccolo especially?'
"Because the enemy is finally here Michio."
I turn around to look up at a distraught Mr. Popo. He definately looked like he wished he could be anywhere else but here.
'The enemy?'
"Yes. Some blond-haired youth. He came in while I was at the far end of the Lookout in my room when a Proximity alarm went off, alerting me to his presence."
'Proximity Alarm?'
"Yes. One thing I've learned by being assistant to the Guardian of Earth is that a lot of people come up here. I was sick and tired of people just dropping in so during Dende's time as Guardian, I installed detection devices all around the Lookout to alert me to any power source coming up to the Tower. Unfortunately I never had it read the lower power settings. It was always tuned to the higher settings for your ancestors. I was too lax there. By the time the sensors could detect this intruder, it was too late and he used some technique to put everyone asleep. I stayed hidden since I was sure he would try to kill me and someone had to be awake for when you woke up."
By this time, Mr. Popo had helped me up to a standing position and injecting something into my leg.
'Hey!'
"This will fully counteract the tranquilizer and hopefully give you a little adrenaline boost when it kicks in fully."
Just then I looked at everyone and did a head count.
'Where's Kelson?'
"Fighting the blonde haired one"
'I've gotta go...'
I take a step and the floor starts taking on wierd shapes and angles. Mr. Popo helps me stay Vertical.
"You have to wait until you're clearheaded."
If only it could go faster.
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IC: After powering up Zeo noticed something as his head turned towards the look out he wondered how he could have missed 2 people, Zeo turned back at Kalson "Looks like you might have some help after all" Zeo smirked "But by the time they get down here your'll be on the floor bairely able to move" Zeo added and wit that he lept forward.
Kelson smirked confidently, "Are you so sure? You haven't fared so well against me yet..."
Seeing Zeo poise to leap, Kelson dropped into a defensive stance; prepared for whatever Zeo might try to throw at him. Well, he was prepared...had Zeo not powered that up.
Zeo went on the offensive, reaching Kelson before the later had enough time to move more then a foot to right. The first blow hit Kelson's block, but the second...third...and fourth all landed hard, forcing Kelson to double over. Smirking grandeurly, Zeo's knee found Kelson's jaw, sending the young human into the air...then back down to crash to the ground.
Not daring to see if Kelson could live up to his claims, Zeo blasted forward again, snapping Kelson up with one arm then slamming him into the ground with the other. Zeo then stepped away, curious if this human could survive the punishment...most he had met would have died after the first punch, but the human was stronger then most Zeo had faced after all.
On the ground, Kelson struggled to raise his battered body, every limb cried out in agony. Reaching the kneeling position, Kelson coughed...a cough that carried blood onto the cracked white-marble florring of the lookout. Rather then allow Kelson to stand up, Zeo moved again faster then Kelson could react, his kick to the rib sending Kelson rolling a dozen feet away.
More blood dribbled from Kelson's lips as he stood unsteadily, finally forming the image of the river again...the flowing Ki within him...but it was running red now. Knowing he must last longer to save his...useless? allies, Kelson spit the rest of the blood from his mouth and fell into another stance, forcing the same ki he had formed into explosive energy balls earlier into moving his limbs...there was no other way this Zeo could have managed his moves after all.
Something was said, but Kelson would never know what it was...then Zeo was on him again...to the dismay of both fighters. At the impact of Zeo's fist on his stomach, Kelson rose more then a foot off the ground, doubled over, then crashed back against the ground as blood threated to exit his lips once again. An even nastier surprise was in store for Zeo, however, when his fist hit Kelson, a human-sized wave exploded towards Zeo from Kelson's entire body...the physical manifestation of his powers...the wave reached Zeo before the later truly realized what it was.
OOC) There, sped it up some...kinda figuring the blast should do some damage, you can determine how much I suppose. Kelson should be able to survive a few more rounds of combat, after you reply with how the blast affects Zeo, then we'll see how much more damage you can do to Kelson. BTW, I thought Senzu Beans healed humans as well...
Seeing Zeo poise to leap, Kelson dropped into a defensive stance; prepared for whatever Zeo might try to throw at him. Well, he was prepared...had Zeo not powered that up.
Zeo went on the offensive, reaching Kelson before the later had enough time to move more then a foot to right. The first blow hit Kelson's block, but the second...third...and fourth all landed hard, forcing Kelson to double over. Smirking grandeurly, Zeo's knee found Kelson's jaw, sending the young human into the air...then back down to crash to the ground.
Not daring to see if Kelson could live up to his claims, Zeo blasted forward again, snapping Kelson up with one arm then slamming him into the ground with the other. Zeo then stepped away, curious if this human could survive the punishment...most he had met would have died after the first punch, but the human was stronger then most Zeo had faced after all.
On the ground, Kelson struggled to raise his battered body, every limb cried out in agony. Reaching the kneeling position, Kelson coughed...a cough that carried blood onto the cracked white-marble florring of the lookout. Rather then allow Kelson to stand up, Zeo moved again faster then Kelson could react, his kick to the rib sending Kelson rolling a dozen feet away.
More blood dribbled from Kelson's lips as he stood unsteadily, finally forming the image of the river again...the flowing Ki within him...but it was running red now. Knowing he must last longer to save his...useless? allies, Kelson spit the rest of the blood from his mouth and fell into another stance, forcing the same ki he had formed into explosive energy balls earlier into moving his limbs...there was no other way this Zeo could have managed his moves after all.
Something was said, but Kelson would never know what it was...then Zeo was on him again...to the dismay of both fighters. At the impact of Zeo's fist on his stomach, Kelson rose more then a foot off the ground, doubled over, then crashed back against the ground as blood threated to exit his lips once again. An even nastier surprise was in store for Zeo, however, when his fist hit Kelson, a human-sized wave exploded towards Zeo from Kelson's entire body...the physical manifestation of his powers...the wave reached Zeo before the later truly realized what it was.
OOC) There, sped it up some...kinda figuring the blast should do some damage, you can determine how much I suppose. Kelson should be able to survive a few more rounds of combat, after you reply with how the blast affects Zeo, then we'll see how much more damage you can do to Kelson. BTW, I thought Senzu Beans healed humans as well...
OOC) BTW, Piccolo isn't out cold, no way Zeo could have knocked him out...I think it was said he left or something, but either way, we can't let a 1k Pl character take out the 100,000+ Piccolo (he was 1mil+ last time I checked on final episodes, which we are assumed to be after, Goku reached 25,000,000+). Also, I didn't throw Nilons into or through the house, just towards it...the plan was for her to be safely out of the way of Zeo's blast...she was only like 3 feet away from Kelson when she landed, because he had grabbed her.
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Sorry Kelson. Replace Piccolo with Laos then. BTW: aren't you guys on the ground instead of on the Lookout? Just to clarify for me.
Sorry Kelson. Replace Piccolo with Laos then. BTW: aren't you guys on the ground instead of on the Lookout? Just to clarify for me.
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The Force
Zeo wasnt expecting the energy wave from kelsons body. ^Not bad not bad at all, maybe he could be of some use to us^ Zeo thought "Hey Kid this has been interesting now i must stop it right now" Zeo said. Zeo walked towards the battered Kalson "This time i'm going to end it right here right now" Zeo added.
Zeo charged back at Kalson, Beleve it or not Kalsons energy blast had pushed him quite far. Suddnely after a few punches and kicks from Zeo he stoped Zeo was getting a message from some one ^STOP THATS ENOUGH^ the voice said "Why" Zeo replied ^We have some peparations to prepare for them^ The voice continued "As you wish" Zeo confirmed "Looks like you have been spared if it was me i would have killed you by now, thanks for the fight" Zeo said to Kalson and with that he punch Kalson in the stomach and hit him with both hands on the neck. "Untill we meet again" Zeo added.
Zeo powered up and again and flew offinto the distance.
Zeo wasnt expecting the energy wave from kelsons body. ^Not bad not bad at all, maybe he could be of some use to us^ Zeo thought "Hey Kid this has been interesting now i must stop it right now" Zeo said. Zeo walked towards the battered Kalson "This time i'm going to end it right here right now" Zeo added.
Zeo charged back at Kalson, Beleve it or not Kalsons energy blast had pushed him quite far. Suddnely after a few punches and kicks from Zeo he stoped Zeo was getting a message from some one ^STOP THATS ENOUGH^ the voice said "Why" Zeo replied ^We have some peparations to prepare for them^ The voice continued "As you wish" Zeo confirmed "Looks like you have been spared if it was me i would have killed you by now, thanks for the fight" Zeo said to Kalson and with that he punch Kalson in the stomach and hit him with both hands on the neck. "Untill we meet again" Zeo added.
Zeo powered up and again and flew offinto the distance.
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IC: Zeo was thinking whay his master had stoped him from attacking Kalson "Master why did you want me to stop" Zeo asked ^I wanted you to stop because i need them to come to you my friend^ The voice said "But why" Zeo asked ^Do you remeber that girl^ The voice asked "Yes i do what of her?" Zeo answered puzzled ^Bring her to me^ The voice said yet again "But why" Zeo was no puzzled ^You'll see^ His master had spoken.
Zeo stopped dead in his tracks he turned back and flew back to the look out. Once he got back to were he fought he could see the body of kelson. Soon he arrived at the top of the look out he could see Nilons. Zeo landed he picked her up ad put her over his shoulder with that he took off again when he reached a lower attiude he put his hand out and fired a beam of energy and carved a message in a near by mountin that was near Kalson. After the dust setled he flew off
The message said "If you want to see Nilons again then come and find me if you dare"
IC: Zeo was thinking whay his master had stoped him from attacking Kalson "Master why did you want me to stop" Zeo asked ^I wanted you to stop because i need them to come to you my friend^ The voice said "But why" Zeo asked ^Do you remeber that girl^ The voice asked "Yes i do what of her?" Zeo answered puzzled ^Bring her to me^ The voice said yet again "But why" Zeo was no puzzled ^You'll see^ His master had spoken.
Zeo stopped dead in his tracks he turned back and flew back to the look out. Once he got back to were he fought he could see the body of kelson. Soon he arrived at the top of the look out he could see Nilons. Zeo landed he picked her up ad put her over his shoulder with that he took off again when he reached a lower attiude he put his hand out and fired a beam of energy and carved a message in a near by mountin that was near Kalson. After the dust setled he flew off
The message said "If you want to see Nilons again then come and find me if you dare"
OOC) -cough- That is what we were referring to about not doing. We had several people who would gladly have stopped you from getting Nilons, not to mention after our 45 minute fight, the others should be awakening. Beside which, there is no nearby mountain that the people on the lookout can see...they are very, very high up.
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OOC: Kelson is right, the message should be in the floor. Side note how dose Zeo know my name?? Next will compramise. Kelson threw Nilons she hit the building's wall but didn't go threw it.
Why is it I don't post for two days and we add less then a page. Then I come back after a day, we add a page and a half.
Hey Zeo if its not to much trouble PM me of your little plan so I can prevent it or alow it.
Finally I'm seeing the next StarWars film tomorow and wont be able to post. If you wouldn't mind can some one have Nilons start to wake up latter that day.
IC: I was so pissed when I attacked I ignored the wornings of the others. I also hadn't expected a counter attack, any normal person would of had there head torn off. But some how this man managed to survive.
How could he do that, its not possible. I'm the strongest one here so if I can't hurt him who can? No, it had to be something else. His helmet, it had to be what saved him. There is no other way. Why did he were a helmet any ways. Other then blocking my punch it did nothing but hide his face, and he wasn't all that bad looking.
He had long blond hair, quite a fashion statment actuly not all that comon. He rose his hands, like the other men here he had a muscular build. His hands past up past his face. His face was clear and flawless. Maybe I can like this guy after all.
Thats when it hit me. His fists I mean, I feel unconcous imeadetly. My energy was leaveing my body, oddly I would of died from shock if he hadn't used an attack to put me asleep.
I began to dream. I was the queen of the world. Not a care in the world. However this became quite boring, nothing to do. "Kelson!" 'Yes your highness.' "Where is my sex slave?" 'You beheaded the last one.' "So find me a new one."
'We already have.' "Well were is he." 'In the dungean with Leotard.' "Laos go get the prisoner." Laos repied 'Yes mam. Ski come with me.'
Several hours latter they arived with the same blond man I had fought earlier. "I would ask for your name but it dosen't matter. Preform you duty."
OOC: Don't worry this dream will not be posted, and Nilons will keep this to herself. Its her vengence for Zeo's coment.
OOC: Kelson is right, the message should be in the floor. Side note how dose Zeo know my name?? Next will compramise. Kelson threw Nilons she hit the building's wall but didn't go threw it.
Why is it I don't post for two days and we add less then a page. Then I come back after a day, we add a page and a half.
Hey Zeo if its not to much trouble PM me of your little plan so I can prevent it or alow it.
Finally I'm seeing the next StarWars film tomorow and wont be able to post. If you wouldn't mind can some one have Nilons start to wake up latter that day.
IC: I was so pissed when I attacked I ignored the wornings of the others. I also hadn't expected a counter attack, any normal person would of had there head torn off. But some how this man managed to survive.
How could he do that, its not possible. I'm the strongest one here so if I can't hurt him who can? No, it had to be something else. His helmet, it had to be what saved him. There is no other way. Why did he were a helmet any ways. Other then blocking my punch it did nothing but hide his face, and he wasn't all that bad looking.
He had long blond hair, quite a fashion statment actuly not all that comon. He rose his hands, like the other men here he had a muscular build. His hands past up past his face. His face was clear and flawless. Maybe I can like this guy after all.
Thats when it hit me. His fists I mean, I feel unconcous imeadetly. My energy was leaveing my body, oddly I would of died from shock if he hadn't used an attack to put me asleep.
I began to dream. I was the queen of the world. Not a care in the world. However this became quite boring, nothing to do. "Kelson!" 'Yes your highness.' "Where is my sex slave?" 'You beheaded the last one.' "So find me a new one."
'We already have.' "Well were is he." 'In the dungean with Leotard.' "Laos go get the prisoner." Laos repied 'Yes mam. Ski come with me.'
Several hours latter they arived with the same blond man I had fought earlier. "I would ask for your name but it dosen't matter. Preform you duty."
OOC: Don't worry this dream will not be posted, and Nilons will keep this to herself. Its her vengence for Zeo's coment.
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OCC: Hey Kel can you u be anymore anal. I mean come on have fun and stop nitpicking everything. Hey you burnt up my last post to hell
Ski in the "Possible Visions of the Future"
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I fell deeper and deeper into sleep and by the time I hit the ground I was fully unconscious. Once comatose I began to dream (* stands for dreaming)
*The world was taken over by that blonde guy I think his name was Zeo or something like that. All of my friends were dead. My family was dead. My daughter was dead. The only one left to stop him was me. Just when we are about to go at it he stops me and raises his hands and from the ground springs an ancient gladiator arena. Once the gigantic structure was completely erected from the ground million and million of people flocked there and began to chant again me in fear of angering their overlord Zeo. I could see the fear in the faces of the people as me and Zeo waged a war. It was almost an equal battle .... for a while at least. Deciding that we were too evenly matched I decided to attempt to go for all the marbles and attempt my "Phoenix Flare."
Expelling all my energy in one monumental explosion I felt myself change for a second. My short black hair was much longers and blonde and my eyes were not the shade of light brown they usually were and instead were bright shade of blueish green. For a few seconds I felt more powerful than I get been then all. For those few seconds I felt more than I have ever been. The people could feel it too and began to cheer wildly for me to destroy the menace known as Zeo. I felt the all that energy coursing through my viens but just when I felt I was at my apex, it all went away and that was when Zeo took advantage. Beating me as if he was a pimp and I was one of his whore that came up short. He kicked me, punched me blasted me and when he saw I was too weak to be a serious threat he slapped me. Lifting my bloody beaten carcass off the ground he smiled and then proceed to cerimoniously kill every human in the arena. Just when I thought I could not fall any lower I saw a little girl jump from the crowd and run at the monster. I begin to squirm and try to save her but it is too late. She is set on fire by the monster and I am thrown next to her. As our eyes meet the lil girl reminds me more and more of my daughter Chae. I lie there and watch her die with the realization there is nothing I can do. somebody has to stop this monster and if I have to die to give that person time to do it so be it.*
While I slept my body was seemingly glowing with energy but the sheer pain and horror of my dream forced me awake and that glow went aways before I even opened my eyes. However what I saw made me ready to fight again. I saw that blonde jackass take off with Nilons and write that message on the floor. Watching them leave in the fog clouded sky I made a Uturn to the house and then ran back to the edge of the lookout. Closing my eyes I gracefully swan dived off the edge of the lookout falling dozens and dozens of feet before finally take off a few feet above the ground. With an explosive burst I took off after Zeo. I may not be as strong as the others but I am the most resilient and the fastest one of our lil training group. They were still a ways ahead of me but I was not too far behind. Someone had to stop him and according to my dream I have to at least try. If I succeed then all is good if I fail then at least the others would have some time to prepare and this monstrocity will do terrorize this world.
Ski in the "Possible Visions of the Future"
IC:
I fell deeper and deeper into sleep and by the time I hit the ground I was fully unconscious. Once comatose I began to dream (* stands for dreaming)
*The world was taken over by that blonde guy I think his name was Zeo or something like that. All of my friends were dead. My family was dead. My daughter was dead. The only one left to stop him was me. Just when we are about to go at it he stops me and raises his hands and from the ground springs an ancient gladiator arena. Once the gigantic structure was completely erected from the ground million and million of people flocked there and began to chant again me in fear of angering their overlord Zeo. I could see the fear in the faces of the people as me and Zeo waged a war. It was almost an equal battle .... for a while at least. Deciding that we were too evenly matched I decided to attempt to go for all the marbles and attempt my "Phoenix Flare."
Expelling all my energy in one monumental explosion I felt myself change for a second. My short black hair was much longers and blonde and my eyes were not the shade of light brown they usually were and instead were bright shade of blueish green. For a few seconds I felt more powerful than I get been then all. For those few seconds I felt more than I have ever been. The people could feel it too and began to cheer wildly for me to destroy the menace known as Zeo. I felt the all that energy coursing through my viens but just when I felt I was at my apex, it all went away and that was when Zeo took advantage. Beating me as if he was a pimp and I was one of his whore that came up short. He kicked me, punched me blasted me and when he saw I was too weak to be a serious threat he slapped me. Lifting my bloody beaten carcass off the ground he smiled and then proceed to cerimoniously kill every human in the arena. Just when I thought I could not fall any lower I saw a little girl jump from the crowd and run at the monster. I begin to squirm and try to save her but it is too late. She is set on fire by the monster and I am thrown next to her. As our eyes meet the lil girl reminds me more and more of my daughter Chae. I lie there and watch her die with the realization there is nothing I can do. somebody has to stop this monster and if I have to die to give that person time to do it so be it.*
While I slept my body was seemingly glowing with energy but the sheer pain and horror of my dream forced me awake and that glow went aways before I even opened my eyes. However what I saw made me ready to fight again. I saw that blonde jackass take off with Nilons and write that message on the floor. Watching them leave in the fog clouded sky I made a Uturn to the house and then ran back to the edge of the lookout. Closing my eyes I gracefully swan dived off the edge of the lookout falling dozens and dozens of feet before finally take off a few feet above the ground. With an explosive burst I took off after Zeo. I may not be as strong as the others but I am the most resilient and the fastest one of our lil training group. They were still a ways ahead of me but I was not too far behind. Someone had to stop him and according to my dream I have to at least try. If I succeed then all is good if I fail then at least the others would have some time to prepare and this monstrocity will do terrorize this world.
Dark Warrior
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OOC) Sorry to say it, but I'm with Phoenix on this one, Kelson. When you have so many people participating with the one story, little things like that are bound to come up, and understandings between writers. The best thing is just to concentrate on what you yourself write in your posts, in my opinion.
Okay, I don't want to overdo the dream thing, so I'll steer away from it...
IC) Laos.
I am the saiyan king...
With that thought in mind, Laos pushed his subconcious to the limit, and finally found his eyes opening. The first thing he saw was the blue sky far above. It took him a few moments just to sit up, where he rubbed his head.
"Where am I..." he muttered, blinking to get his vision perfect before looking around. The first thing he saw was Kelson, in bad shape.
"Kelson? Are you alright? What's going on? What happened to me?" he asked, stumbling to his feet and shuffling over to Kelson. It was then that he noticed the others all on the floor motionless. "Are they...?" he hissed, fearing the worst.
Okay, I don't want to overdo the dream thing, so I'll steer away from it...
IC) Laos.
I am the saiyan king...
With that thought in mind, Laos pushed his subconcious to the limit, and finally found his eyes opening. The first thing he saw was the blue sky far above. It took him a few moments just to sit up, where he rubbed his head.
"Where am I..." he muttered, blinking to get his vision perfect before looking around. The first thing he saw was Kelson, in bad shape.
"Kelson? Are you alright? What's going on? What happened to me?" he asked, stumbling to his feet and shuffling over to Kelson. It was then that he noticed the others all on the floor motionless. "Are they...?" he hissed, fearing the worst.
