Dragon Ball NW

Laos

Laos cracked his knuckles.
"I'm gonna give Kelson some time to cool off. In the mean time, I'd love to do some training..." he said, a smile playing at the edges of his lips. "This Mark guy isn't gonna know what hit him."
 
OOC:

I'm finally where I want to be. DW, I did some editing to my last post. Not shure if you did or even want to read it? But hey considering how much it covers I think I did a fair job.
 
hey

hey im here again ;) and i was just wondering if you would let me join in?
 
Hey Lord... of course, you're welcome to join. You may want to read the last few pages or so of the thread to get the general gist of whats going on, but it's not too complex, so you'll probably pick it up pretty easy - feel free to jump in with a character.
 
Ski in "Finally it Aint Me"


As they discussed the book of Saiyans I got bored. I remember this conversation from two years ago. The book is in code and none of us can translate so what is the use of going over dated material. Standing away from the crowd, I noticed Nilons looking like she was about to leave deciding this was better than hear these. Before she left I gave her my wife's address and phone number in case she wanted to stop bye.

When ask if anyone has seen her plane I immediately point to Michio. Hey Man Rule #1: Always be the first to point to another man. This will not work with women because women stick together. Guys must not be afraid to rat on other guys, especially when you know that you did the deed still point to someone else before they point to you. Anyways back to the story. With the blame squarely on Michio's shoulder Nilons walks over to him and executes the most dangerous move in her repetoire (trust if anyone knows it's me). It is a move so gruesome that males under the age of 18 sound never see with the nakked eye. That's right boys and girls she brought her foot back and kicked the extra point right throught the goalpost turning Michio into a Saprano. That is what bastard gets for pissing me off earlier. Now if only I steal something else and set Zeo up. Ah another battle for another day I guess.

Turning to others I look at them and say "Good offer but I think I am going to do some training from home first. After all in Crystal's condition she should not be in the mountains by herself. However if you need me here is a number to my cellphone." I hand Laos the card since Michio was still clutching his wounded soldier. Right before I flew off I chuck Michio a ice cube and yell "Put this down your shorts until you nut transplant gets here." Then I took off at full speed laughing loudly all the way home.

OCC: Sorry I had to write myself out because this Friday or Saturday I will be going home for the week and will more than likely be far far far away from a computer. Don't worry I plan to do maybe one more post as Ski and another one as Mark before I go.
 
hrmm alrite ill go check the last few pages when i got a few minutes than ill post a char to jump in, til then im gonna browse around the forum see what i missed ;)
 
The book of Saiyans

IC: Zeo looked over to were Nilons ^Ouch that must hurt like hell^ Zeo thought Laughing

Zeo opened the book as soon as Nilons was away in her helicopter he read the first page, most of it mad sense but some didnt for the main part he could read it read

Hi there my name is Gohan and i decided to write this book with the help from my farther Goku and his friend well if you could call him that Vegeta. Shitsnf JSinfn HJsSnnf.

The rest of the page he couldnt read, He fliped though it and he found something that startled him "Oh my god can this be" Zeo said with excitment. "Hey you" Zeo shouted as he pointed to Laos, "Can i borrow this" Zeo asked

"Can we trust you" Laos asked

"Come with me if you want i wont run off with it" Zeo responded "You lot cant read Saiyan can you" Zeo asked. all there heads shuk meaning that they didnt "Look on thing Mark is good for and that is his knolage on different Launges and he knows all the Saiyan langauge, Luckly i downloaded this and i was able to bring it here to earth do you lot want to come with me and learn" Zeo asked
 
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Okay, let me get this strait I'm gone one day so far and lord is replaceing me? Bastards show some loyalty. I will have Nilons kick every carecter in the nuts for my vengence. Ha, ha, ha.

Phenix, don't worry I post today and tomrow and then again on Sat. and they haven't kicked me out. Actuly Lord I have nothing against you, yet.

Zeo, note the entire point of the book in code is so moves slowly leak out. So if your going to add some moves I'd run it by the rest of us first.

<Story below>
 
Nilons

OOC: All of Nilons reveled.

IC: My mother and father repeat the same questions. I repeat the same answers, never really explaining whats going on. I don't want them to panic. And thats what they'd do, there's no way they know how strong I am. No way for them to know how strong my allies are. Besides the truth will lead to questions I'm not ready to answer just yet.

We were siting on the couch, in the living room. 'Nilons....' Shit mom is working on a question. Um what to do? "Um, I'm going to take a shower." Hey how convint I didn't do that at the look out.

Before Mother can object or any one else for that matter, I'm up the stairs and locked in the bathroom. That was close. They're asking to many questions. I'm just not ready to answer all these just yet. Now for the shower.

I take off my clothes. I feel a bit more relaxed now. For the next ten minutes I have nothing to hide, no one to disturb me. And most importantly no under ware chafffing my tail! (That took months to get used too.)

I step in the shower just the two of us, me and, little Ray. With no clothing hideing her it's easy to tell I'm pregnat. I feel completly relaxed as the water trails down my black hair, past my blue eyes, down my slender neck, ....censord.... , down past Lingerie to my, ....censord.... , and finally drips down my legs and washes bye my toes.

I step out completly calm and relaxed. "Now, I just need to find a way out of all the questions." Think, Nilons, think. I contiue to dry my self off.
 
OOC: Gee, cats, do you have to get so defensive all the time :p Lord is not replacing you, you are a valuable member, yadda yadda yadda, blah, blah. Lord was involved in the old old Dragonball Z thread that I was in also... ah, some good memories from there... but I think this one is better :D

I never noticed how far this thread had actually come till you mentioned that Kelson - wow.

And yeah, you probably did that a bit fast Zeo, but that's fine.

IC: Laos.

Laos watched as Ski flew away from the lookout, wondering what was on the guy's mind. He was returned back to reality as Zeo discussed the book.
^Wow... if he can decipher that...^
"Okay, I'm coming." Laos said, nodding to Zeo before turning to Michio, who was finally recovering from Nilons' patented move.
"Michio, how about you? Want to come, or do you have things to do up here on the lookout?" Laos asked. Secretly he just didn't want to be alone with this Zeo guy... he seemed like such a... such a creep. But he was a powerful creep, so he held his tongue.
 
OH THE HUMANITY!!! IT'S ME THIS TIME!

I explain the Book of Saiyans to Zeo since he didn't know then most of the people decided to leave. Nilons said she had to go and then asked about her plane.

Ha Ha, Ski's gonna get it again this time...

To my amazement and shock, Ski points at me and says I took her plane. Me! I couldn't believe it! I was being Framed! I was shaking my head, trying to reason to her that I couldn't have done it nor needed to do it, but it was to no avail. With a swiftness like nothing I've seen before, she brought her leg back and connected in the "Family Jewels."

I was kicked so hard by her that I actually flew up into the air, but only to the height of the lookout's roof, then I fell down all the way to the floor, rolling myself up into the fetal position and shedding a couple tears as I lost my breath and tried to breathe after such a hard hit to such a private area. The reason it was so much more intense for me than Ski was that he was used to it by now, but since it was my first time from Nilons, I guess you can say that I've been initated into the Nilons' Ball-smashing club.

I could tell Ski was laughing a bit.

Motherfucker. Ok, you want it that way, I'll play your game. The next one hit will be you again my friend.

As I was holding my "wounded soldier," Zeo had taken the book and was reading through it then made a revelation. Since Gohan wrote the book with the help of Goku and Vegeta and they decided on a code for every part of the book, there were about 10 different codes inside. Zeo noticed that one of the codes was the Saiyan Language itself, no doubt Vegeta's idea for that one. Zeo then offered us his help in training us all. Laos said he would, but Ski said he would go back home. By this time I had regained my breathing and was able to get back on my feet, albeit a bit wobbly.

Before Ski took off back home, I walked/hobbled/dragged myself to him so I could speak.

'I'll get you next time for the nutshot, but all things set aside, I wish you and your wife great tidings and blessings on her upcoming birth.'

He looked a bit offset a bit then he said,

"Thank...you Michio."

With that, he was gone, heading back to the house to be there for Crystal.

I got more of my composure back and turned around to Zeo. (OOC: Zeo, I think you got the names a bit backwards. Michio has the book, not Laos so you would be asking Michio if you could borrow it, just to clarify for everyone.)

'You can borrow it, but I'm going with it too. You don't rip any pages out, or write shit in it. It's my heritage you've got in your hands and I'd like to be able to pass it along to my family... if I ever get one.'

I call for Mr. Popo. He comes out saying, "Yes Michio?"

'I'm going to be going with Zeo and Laos. If there is ANY problem, use that beacon we created to call me ok?'

"No problem Michio. Good luck to you all."

And with that, he went back to the inner sanctum. I look back at the three of us then say,

'Oh yeah, gotta change for sparring.'

I start to glow and the next thing you know, I change my clothes from the Saiyan's orange clothes to Piccolo's black with the white cape and weights.

Both of the guys just stare at me.

'Piccolo figured before he died that I should at least be able to go around "In Style" according to him. It was something he wore a long time ago and it helped me a lot in my training for the past two years. Well, shall we go gentlemen?'
 
OOC:

In response to DW. Blah, blah, blah, jokeing, yakity, smackity, Wanted to kick every one in nuts, Blah, blah, wanted a reason, ect., sounded good...........

Hey Lord I would be very pleased if you post your carecter today before I go back to camp. Just to give me some time to think about it.
 
Saiyans still being accepted? Well if not tell me and ill change it, and what is the "average" powerlevel right now?

Name: Lord
Race: Pure Saiyan
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Hair: the normal saiyan black hair
Height: 6' 2"
Build: Athletic, muscular
Clothes: Wears heavy weighted clothes that are black, heavy weighted pants that are black, heavy waited shoes that are black, and a black karate belt :)
Bio: Was born and sent to Planet Zukorachu but when he landed the Zukorachu people put him in a ship direct to planet Earth and sent the ship off, Lord landed on earth and when he grew up he practiced alone fighting things himself, he also went to school on a usual basis, and when he grew up(now 17) he skipped school more and did more trainning

OKAYED or No OKayed?
 
Zeo's Nice side

OOC) I will tell you guys what moves and what i have planed for the book

IC: "Come on then" Zeo said as he took off heading for his ship he ran and jumped as he did he did a forwads dive and felw off with some speed.
 
UH-OH

OOC)Hey there Lord

There is one thing wrong with your character that evryone pointed out when i first came into the story, Your character sounds cool but he cant be a full saiyan cos he wud be to powerfull, i cant remember wot the others said to me but it went down the lines of

NOOOOOOOO! lol anyway Dark Lord and that will tell you wot he can be and stuff, with the blood lol but other then that hes a really cool guy and i know Zeo cant wait to train agaisnt him sometime thats if you think that Lord is strong enough lol.

Did i get that right lol
 
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OOC)
There have been between 5 and 7 generations since the times of Goku and Vegeta, thus the maximum Saiyan blood permissable is between 1/32 to 1/128. My character is the only full-blooded human and has more and more often been ignored by the moves of the saiyans...it is getting to their heads I think. Anyhow, most of that is fine I suppose. We're all around 20k pl, except Zeo who is around 30k I guess. Mark is probably 1 million right now, so we won't fight him for an uber time. Kelson has mastered Kaioken and, although it seemed no one else had, Michio has already pulled Kaioken level 2 in order to pummel everyone else. I tried to pull this as well...but was slammed down unfortunately, so Kelson is actually secluded in the woods.

PS) I'm not annoyed by the events I just mentioned, I just think it is something you guys might consider. For every battle we have consistently had certain character pull power moves suddenly for their character's own rp goals while ignoring others'. For instance, in the battle between Zeo, Ski, and I, Michio powered up in one fell move and beat all of us in a second just so he could stop the combat. If you had thought about it, band, you could have simply let us beat on one another until we were all weak enough for you to step in an whomp us without pulling the move that made you more powerful then any other pc by a magnitude of between two and three, including Zeo. And, just for comparison, Kelson pulled the same move and (although cats isn't the one I'm ranting about, we spoke in some pms and she knew Kelson was much stronger at the time...) then tried to do some damage just to have it almost completely ignored.

Like I said, just something to think about.
 
just out of curiosity..how is mark 1 million and everyone at 20 thousand? WTF is that? I mean er...im really lost :( There was no HUGE cap ever in the real DBZ so im just curious how he would have achieved that...anyways is it ever gonna be that people will catch p to him? Whatever, anyways ill post my char again then...


hell no wait ill just change him

Race: 1/32 Saiyan 12/32 Namek 12/32 Android 7/32 Human

((DAMN I WANT MORE SAIYAN :()) oh wells :)
 
OOC:

Lord you have my aproval except for the namek. They are asexual so if you wouldn't mind you should probably put it in andriod or human. Maybe just put an "other" catagory.

Also we are at 14k and 20k when we use either kayoken or "high sayain". (Super sayain .5) Nilons is higher hence the fight with Kelson in kayoken x2. She pulled a chichi and went ballistic, and won, sorta. I figure her at 17k norm and 25k high. Mark is at 1m because he is an evil enter galtic tyrant.

Kelson just so you know. You hit one of my pet pevs. You called me a girl, well she any how. Remember I'm actually a guy, and not a girl.

Recap: Lord good but, Namek bad. Cats is guy Nilons is girl. Every one get that?
 
Nilons

OOC: good pic lord.

IC: I wraped a towel around my body. What am I going to do now? As soon as I leave this room I'll have to deal with those questions. Maybe if I tell them I don't want to answer the questions, then they won't pry. No that isn't moms style.

I walk out of the bathrom down the hall and into my room. I close the door and lock it. "Lets see now I need something that fits." I rumage threw my dresser. "Hey my favorit pair of shorts. No that won't do. If I wear them I can't hide my tail. This skirt will do just fine though." Now what shirt? No, this one is to revealing and they'll know I'm pregnat.

...Ten minutes later...

"Good, I'm finally dressed." I step out of my room boxer is there. 'What the heck is that?' He points to my tail which I forgot to put under my skirt. "Shit... Um.. don't tell mom and dad about my tail. I just don't want them to know about it just yet."
 
OOC) Your name, cats, does lend itself to feminine thoughts. In additon, playing a female character will get you referred to as a she- despite the fact that I already know you to be male teenager :) btw...if at high you were 25k...that is less then half the pl of Kelson at that time...

Oh, btw...Lord...if you _were_ going to be x/32 of ANY race, try to figure out how you got to be...then try to imagine how you could be such an odd combination. Cats has a point on the namek though...and probably on the android. Besides, androids absorb energy as I understand it and don't gain it from fighting. Try making a non-super-uber-race character and just play :) My PURE human is doing fine versus all these saiyan types...
 
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True and I hate math so numbers are not my thing. How about 40k and kelson in that surcumstance was already tired. The fact of useing the kayoken for an hour or so in battle. The name thing is also right and I wouldn't of bothered if Lord had already known.

Oh and lord the andriod is fine only the two destroyed abosrbed energy and they can have children as Android 18 did. So to justify that put down desended from 18. All though Kelson as always makes a good point It will be hard to explain the mix.

Sumury for lord.

200 years after g.t. we begin. Every one is dead except piccolo who is kami after fuseing with dende. He picks up Michio, who has the book of sayains and decoded the first chapter or so, Laos, Nilons, the strongest girl in the world.. also the weakest of the pc's at the start, and Kelson, the human.

We train and then Zeo sent by Mark comes. He beats up Kelson knocks out all of us kidnaps Nilons and runs. Nilons wakes up and he tails her that the others where killed by him. She gose with him so he dosen't blow up the planet. Before he leaves though he tears up and lites her clothing on fire. She was wearing a villain uniform.

Several months past by. the others gather the dragon balls to wish her back to life. The dragon says I can't grant that wish and piccolo dies before the dragon gives a reason.

Two years after Nilons abduction, she is now pregnat with Zeo's child. The reason si Mark wants to make the child into the ultimate warrior. Ski got married to a girl named Crystal how is now pregnat.

Nilons returned with Zeo who is switching sides to portect "his child" (Nilons probably won't let him near Lingerie.) The tails of Zeo and Nilons is the result of the high sayain form.

Hopefully this sumry will save you a lot of back tracking and confusion. If you have any questions the others will help.
 
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OOC: Heh, I was just thinking I should do a summary for Lord, but you beat me to it cats. Anyway, what she said pretty much sums it up... just a bit of basic character info on each of the characters...

Laos: PC, played by me, descendant of Vegeta. 1/64th saiyan, claims to be the "Saiyan King".

Nilons: PC, played by cats. I think 1/32nd saiyan or maybe 1/64th. Currently pregnant with Zeo's child (Though she assures us it was artificial insemination, I still have my doubts :p )

Zeo: PC, played by zeo. Again, I'm not quite sure on exact numbers, but either 1/32 or 1/64 saiyan blood. Was evil, but now has kind of turned over to the good guys side... but still has not gained the others' trust.

Michio: PC, played by bandman2000. 1/64 saiyan. Descendent of Gohan, and the one who owns the Book of the Saiyans. At the moment is acting kind of like an "interum kami" before Mr. Popo gets around to organising a new one after Piccolo's death.

Kelson: PC, played by kelson. Pure human. Has spent two years training with Laos, so the two of them are friends, but other than that, Kelson seems to have a little bit of a social problem :p

Ski: PC, played by Phoenix. 1/64 saiyan. Has very sore groin. Also has a cool double-bladed battle staff type thing.

Mark: Started out as NPC, but Phoenix may be "adopting" him as a second PC. Very powerful, ultimate evil galactic overlord type thing - occupation similar to that of Frieza's in the original Dragonball Z.

Mr. Popo: NPC, Kami's attendant. The only character from the original series still alive.

Okay, those are the main characters, there are also Ski's and Nilon's families, but Michio and Laos both have no family. I can't remember if Kelson has any family... anyway, those aren't very important characters.

Oh, and about the whole 32/64th android, 1/64th namek, blah blah blah thing... I really don't care, but maybe you shouldn't go into that much detail... nameks are asexual, so I don't know how the hell you could be part namek, but other than that, androids, aliens, whatever you want, but don't bother going into numbers, just say like "part android" or something like that. We get the picture :p

Phew, anything else? Good.
 
Rite

PArt Saiyan
Part something else!!! :)

okay thats my guy. Yea. okay anyways i was just curious what mark was if it was a PC than i would be shocked and maybe have just exited my browser :) anyways im here now and ill just wait for a few more psots before i join in
 
Lets continue shall we?

ooc) Thats cool Lord is your character going to be good or bad, About Mark well i thought of the character so i might as well tell you wot race he is or can be. Well errr he he i dont know really, i just thought of an idea that he can change his race when he wants to so it gives him the advantage. Ok lets make a sarniro here or a example i think there the same thing lol anyway lets begin

First up we have Zeo

Start Fight

"Mark its your time to feel my blade of the Zeo Sword" Zeo shouted "So the rookie wants to die here fine then let it be" Mark replies smerking. "Race change" Mark shouts, Mark's becomes Saiyan.

End fight

Ok that was simple but i bet your thinking ^Hang on i dont really get it^ Well lets deminstraight here

Up next is Kelson

Start Fight

"Zeo has paid for his mistakes now you will" Kalson demands "Another fight how pitaful" Mark laughs "Your hopes die here" Mark shouts "Kaioken X3" Kelson Kelson fires the engery blast right at Mark, Mark rasies his hand and knocks the blast away like it was a fly "Now my turn" Mark shouts "Race change" Mark comands Mark becomes Human "Kaioken x 1000000" Kalson is distroyed

End fight

Now remeber people this hasnt happened it could happen lol. So i hope that gives you a brief insite into Mark and his powers i'll think up some more and pass them onto who ever takes the role as Mark remember hes a bad guy and thats about it
 
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