christcat69
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(Fairytat?) Dominatrix feedback
Dominatrix
Darkness encumbers you
The only light is that from the sweat glistening on your brow.
Your body is drained now,
Of energy,
Of your sweet juices,
Of all that you ever beleived was pious.
I'll show you the darkness within us all,
I'll make your body anticipate me,
The way I would touch you,
The way that I would drain you,
I'll leave you panting for more,
And then,
Only then,
Will you know the true me.
Okay, so I need some feedback before I post it guys. I need you guys to let me know what you think. Thanks.
Dominatrix
Darkness encumbers you
The only light is that from the sweat glistening on your brow.
Your body is drained now,
Of energy,
Of your sweet juices,
Of all that you ever beleived was pious.
I'll show you the darkness within us all,
I'll make your body anticipate me,
The way I would touch you,
The way that I would drain you,
I'll leave you panting for more,
And then,
Only then,
Will you know the true me.
Okay, so I need some feedback before I post it guys. I need you guys to let me know what you think. Thanks.
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