I need feed back on a story I would like to post. In the story one scene involves a girl riding her horse naked. In no way does the story imply that she wants to have sex with the horse, but she is turned on by riding the horse naked. Can I use this scene. Thanks for you feedback.
Does this situation cross the line??
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Penelope Street
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I think it depends a lot on *why* she gets excited, especially whether or not it is because of physical contact with the horse.
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I cannot imagine that crosses the line, personally. Horse riding and getting off on it is a time-honored activity!
Submit it, and find out-- if they do reject it, you can edit or whatever you need to do.
Submit it, and find out-- if they do reject it, you can edit or whatever you need to do.
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Any inexperienced woman, will find that some things between her legs will give her unexpected pleasure, be it a trotting horse, a fireman's pole or even a train.
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The exception that proves the rule. *nod*
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The most obvious examples of bestiality would be a man fucking a sheep or a woman on her hands and knees while her great Dane mounted her from behind. Those would obviously be rejected, but sometimes there is more of a gray area.
One time I submitted a story of a woman using a live snake as a dildo. It was a king snake, which is a constrictor with a muscular body, and it worked great as it writhed inside her, hitting all her sweet spots. It wasn't really an animal fucking the woman, since he was no more than a live dildo, but it was still rejected. The woman on horseback story might be treated the same way, especially if she is naked and is doing it to get herself off.
One time I submitted a story of a woman using a live snake as a dildo. It was a king snake, which is a constrictor with a muscular body, and it worked great as it writhed inside her, hitting all her sweet spots. It wasn't really an animal fucking the woman, since he was no more than a live dildo, but it was still rejected. The woman on horseback story might be treated the same way, especially if she is naked and is doing it to get herself off.
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omigod, Box.
*laughing like a loon*
*laughing like a loon*
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Using a horse for masturbation; you know Mike & Carol will luv it.
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My story The Giant Squid hasn't caused any problems because that particular squid is a mythical squid...
...and it was a satire on tentacle sex.
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...and it was a satire on tentacle sex.
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My story Bare Back has sex in a bunch of ways on the back of a horse. From dildos to masturbating on the saddle horn. I never even considered the bestiality angle when I wrote it and posted it. It went through with no problem.
I guess on a horse would be like in a car or on a motorcycle but with four legs. I think the key is on and not under the horse.
I guess on a horse would be like in a car or on a motorcycle but with four legs. I think the key is on and not under the horse.
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I always thought this was why women rode horses in the first place.
Stella_Omega
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Well, that and getting to where you're going.
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And learning to outsmart something that's bigger and stronger than you are. I knew a woman's riding coach who believed that horseback riding should be part of every girl's education for that very reason. Of course, her prize pupil used the large half of a pool cue as a quirt! Worked wonders on a stubborn bronc when applied across the nose . . .
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Ha! I just used to ride aimlessly.
I had heard a theory that one of the reasons why girls/women become so attached to horses is because it gives them/us something they can control.
My oldest is always much happier when she's breaking some big brute in for riding, so maybe there is something in it.
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I'm part of the consensus but just to inject a political flavor to this thread (I can't help myself and I'm not going to say anything about the horse anyone rode in on - which does involve bestiality, btw); I would stay away from anything that a sitting president described as 'the best thing for a man is the outside of a horse....' there's a whole lot left unsaid there.....
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Adolescent girls and horses are the worst kept secret on the planet.
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Horses;
What's not to love?
- Are a satisfying struggle to break in.
Once broken, they - Are huge yet controllable
- Love unconditionally
- Easy on the eyes
- Responsive
- Have soft velvety noses
- Feel great between a girl's legs
What's not to love?
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spooky. it's like you are channelling the girl!
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