Do your characters surprise you?

My writing has always been a process of transcribing my character/actors performing a script I wrote. The script is what I intended to happen, but occasionally a character will Ad-lib a line that is just so TRUE, I have to include it, even if it shreds the intended script. I have had background characters step forward and unexpectedly become headlining stars. I find that these unexpected flashes are usually some of my best ideas.
Ha! I've had that happen - including a great line but... on the seventh review I've had to be big enough to realise that the line didn't fit and might need to removed.
 
Ha! I've had that happen - including a great line but... on the seventh review I've had to be big enough to realise that the line didn't fit and might need to removed.

<Chuckles> Yeah, those scenes that are only 95% Right are just killers. You know they are great, but... just not Right. I guess that is why God created notebooks. B-)

As a fan of the "Just One Line" thread, what was the line?
 
Routinely.

Getting to know my own characters is one of the most enjoyable things about writing, and when they surprise me? That's when they feel most alive.
 
Yes. My mind will wander and I realize I'm writing something that I never planned to write. Luckily, it often works out okay.
 
All the time.

The character most "alive" for me is one I created very early on in my writing.

The Jenna Arrangement was only my third story, and was meant to be a simple tale of a horny and lonely older man paying a young college girl in need of cash to masturbate in front of her.

Jenna started out shy but with a hint of adventure to her.

She's taken on a life of her own since then and several times it's been her deciding what she will or won't do, what she is or isn't ready to explore, not me.

I remember distinctly rewriting the second chapter after realizing Jenna simply wouldn't just drop to her knees and give a guy she still only just met a blowjob. It just wasn't her.

Later, she took a scenario I'd been planning in an entirely different direction. And frankly made it far more fun and natural to her progression.

And when I wrote her backstory, talked about her past, I felt it come from her because it was certainly nothing from my own experience.

25 chapters in and she's still mostly in charge lol.

So...yeah. It definitely happens for me.
 
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