do you see me

[temperanceless]

My eyes track you like a big cat's watching an antelope on the savana....but, it is you that I want to be the predator, and I want to be your prey. You stare back. You see my strength, my cunning, my bold request to be seen. I close my eyes a bit... seductress.. animal anticipation. Can you see my need, can you see me watching, waiting to see if you have the power, the confidence, the skill to overtake me.
You don't ask permission as you come very close. My juices begin to flow. You do not smile. You take my hands in yours, lifting them and kissing each palm. All of my feminine power is poised on a knife's edge...can you see that I want you to take the knife and run me through. I think...see my power, dance with it, then take it prisoner. We stare at each other for a long moment before I get my answer.
You run my hands around to my back and snap them together behind me as you lock me in an agressive embrace, thrusting your hips against me. You tower over me. You raise your head and look down at me. I lay my head back and to the side, exposing my neck. You know I am going to give myself up to you and it makes you raging hard and driven to devour me.
You lift me into your arms and carry me to your bed, whispering "I see you...you are a goddess devine and an animal in indignant heat.....you are dirty sweet, hungry and naughty, a luscious slut, my little girl, a beautiful lioness I ..will ..have unto me."
"You see me...That is what I need. Be my Father, my Jesus, my Zeus. I am a wild animal fucker, make me surrender to it. I want to hunch my sex against you, lick and bite and suck you, spread my legs and beg you to fuck me. I want you to hold my head and fuck my mouth, I want you to tie me up and finger me, taunt me, rule me, drive me....over the edge to the world at the core of me... Take me away to the pantheon, valhalla, the den, the coven of masculine and femme, where I can worship the power and the glory. I give up my will, I give up my body, I capitulate, I surrender myself to you...... bring it "

 

[Betticus]

Yep, I see you over there. Hello to you.

 

[graceanne]

Yep, I see you over there. Hello to you.

You can stop looking now, you perv.

 

[brioche]

" Be my Father, my Jesus, my Zeus. I am a wild animal fucker, make me surrender to it. I want to hunch my sex against you, lick and bite and suck you, spread my legs and beg you to fuck me.
Take me away to the pantheon, valhalla, the den, the coven of masculine and femme, where I can worship the power and the glory. "

I was okay until I read that. With everything I learned in Classics, now I want to giggle.

Somehow, Father, Jesus, and Zeus aren't too sexy to me. Now I've got these funny pictures in my head...

 

[graceanne]

I was okay until I read that. With everything I learned in Classics, now I want to giggle.

Somehow, Father, Jesus, and Zeus aren't too sexy to me. Now I've got these funny pictures in my head...

LOL I didn't read her whole thing, but yeah. LOL

 

[temperanceless]

What would you suggest? I've never written on this subject.

 

[graceanne]

What would you suggest? I've never written on this subject.

Actually it was well written - I'm just tired and sick and my attention span is nil. You'll have to excuse us, we all have an odd sense of humor and your way of introducing yourself was . . . well different.

Plus the whole Father, Jesus, Zeus . . . well you've got two Christian deities, and one greek deity, it's just slightly humorous.

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

Am I missing the revelence as to why this is posted here

 

[catalina_francisco]

What would you suggest? I've never written on this subject.

I would suggest posting it in a more appropriate place such as Story Feedback , or Author's Hangout or Editor's Forum or Story Discussion Circle or Sexual Role Play if that was your hopeful outcome. Also, if you want to have it read, perhaps submitting it as a story to be published on Lit would be another option, where you can also nominate to receive feedback and public comments. This forum is for the discussion of BDSM and related topics, not a place for publishing writing or presenting blogs, though of late many see it as that because I imagine they want a captive audience where they don't have to compete with hundreds of others wanting to be read. I am hoping we can get back to some sort of putting things where they belong, not where people would prefer.

Catalina

 

[cati]

Did you want someone in particular to notice you "see you?"
All in all it's an interesting concept and if I were a guy I'd give you a
run for your money...shrugs

 

[temperanceless]

I wrote this as a way to wrap my head around this thing I want and need. I think I hoped that the force I seek would see it and reveal themselves to me. I don't know how better to describe it than to say that there is a power within my femininity the pinacle of which I feel certain I will not experience until it is revealed to me at the alter of masculine.

Anyone?

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

Right fess up who has the alter this week please.............

 

[temperanceless]

Right fess up who has the alter this week please.............

I AM A UNIQUE PERSON WITH A UNIQUE PERSPECTIVE
THE IDEA THAT I AM SOME ALT PISSES ME OFF.... WHAT THE FUCK?

 

[catalina_francisco]

So this was a personal ad with a bit more creativity than we usually see?

Catalina

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

I AM A UNIQUE PERSON WITH A UNIQUE PERSPECTIVE
THE IDEA THAT I AM SOME ALT PISSES ME OFF.... WHAT THE FUCK?

I don't know how better to describe it than to say that there is a power within my femininity the pinacle of which I feel certain I will not experience until it is revealed to me at the alter of masculine.

Get over yourself

 

[catalina_francisco]

Get over yourself

LOL, so could the mistake in understanding alt and alter have been a result of guilt?

Catalina

 

[temperanceless]

So this was a personal ad with a bit more creativity than we usually see?

Catalina

you could look at it like that I guess. What I hoped to do was spark a conversation

 

[Etoile]

you could look at it like that I guess. What I hoped to do was spark a conversation

Really? You sure have a funny way of doing it. I thought Catalina was right on the money when she suggested other places that might have been more appropriate for this. To be perfectly frank, you're kind of barking up the wrong tree in this forum. Posting a flowery woo-woo piece that doesn't contain any questions or request for information of anything is not the best way to get people in here talking. As you can see by the responses so far, what you tried was not very effective. I would suggest that you couch your feelings in less dramatic (story-like) words, because that would be a lot more likely to generate the conversation you're looking for.

 

[temperanceless]

Catalina, at first it seemed like I wanted a force of nature to overwhelm me, and I do, but I wonder what else I need. The first time someone told me that I would beg I told him I had never begged for anything in my life. I recently was told that I would take a ball gag quite nicely thank you and the Amzon ran between my legs I've never played for real.

 

[temperanceless]

1. I am not a man

2. There is no "right" way to talk about something.

3. Why does it bother you?

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

Ye gads you really chose an astute user name for yourself as for the "Amazon" may I suggest a warning next time its certainly some imagery I could live without.

 

[catalina_francisco]

I've never played for real.

I sorta picked up on that in the first post.

Catalina

 

[temperanceless]

Ye gads you really chose an astute user name for yourself as for the "Amazon" may I suggest a warning next time its certainly some imagery I could live without.

It's a quote from a song. Sorry to offend your delicate sensabilities.

 

[cati]

rebecca shame on you.

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

It's a quote from a song. Sorry to offend your delicate sensabilities.

Your adding genuine to unique now I take it ?