Do you like the thought of naked lesbian massage?

AcadiaSky

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Now that I have your attention, read all about it in my Holiday Contest story- "A Holiday Angel"!!!!

THANKS A MILLION. I would love feedback!!!!

I'm sorry for the blatant plug!!!!
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
What a horrible tease you are!
I like that in a person. :cathappy:
Still, you must be punished. The spankings will now commence.
(I'll give your story a read - well done!)

Give her a whack for me, too!

And yeah, I do like the thought of naked lesbian massage.
 
Hey, ouch!!!!

Sounds harsh to me!!! Geez!!!! Oh well, maybe the story will make you change your mind about punishing me!!!! :)
 
AcadiaSky said:
Sounds harsh to me!!! Geez!!!! Oh well, maybe the story will make you change your mind about punishing me!!!! :)

If you notice in the pic the punisher seems firm while the punishee seems to be enjoying the spanking.

Not too much of a punishment, after all.

;)
 
I really enjoyed your story. Interesting premise, well-detailed, and sweet and believable and very arousing sexual situations.

I would caution you against using ellipses (. . . ) They interrupt the flow.

There are a few spots of changing tenses and other minor grammatical errors. Nothing major, and nothing that gets in the way of the enjoyment of the story, but it would be a good idea to have another person give your next story a read before you submit.

Well done! Good luck on the Contest!

:rose:
 
Thanks!!!

I basically wrote it in like 2 hours on a quiet Sunday! Kind of like today! I wasn't taking it too seriously.... THANKS a bunch!!!!

*D*
 
I'll go read your story in just a minute...
But I wanted to add that I have a story that contains naked lesbian massage. Another plug from AHer to another. (in the sig line, of course)
 
logophile said:
I'll go read your story in just a minute...
But I wanted to add that I have a story that contains naked lesbian massage. Another plug from AHer to another. (in the sig line, of course)

Yes.

Oil and warmed stones and lustful massage.

Yum.

:heart:
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
Yes.

Oil and warmed stones and lustful massage.

Yum.

:heart:

Mmmm, that warms MY stones... :D

Especially that part where they turn to each other and say, "Damn! I really need to suck a cock!"
"OOOH, me too!"
"Look, that guy has one!"
"Me first! Me first!"
"No way, bitch! I saw him first!"
"Let's not fight. We can have a contest!"
"OOOH, that's so HAWT!"
"Spread out that plastic mat and pour all the oil on it"
"Wheee! It's so slippery!"
"That's hawt"

That's what you were thinking too, right? ;)
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
Yes.

Oil and warmed stones and lustful massage.

Yum.

:heart:

You are good to me, Sarahhh...

And Acadia -
Nice story.
Thanks for sharing.
I didn't PC (I'm so lazy these days) but did vote. Hope it helped.
 
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logophile said:
You are good to me, Sarahhh...

And Acadian -
Nice story.
Thanks for sharing.
I didn't PC (I'm so lazy these days) but did vote. Hope it helped.


Back at ya, Logo.

:kiss:
 
I'm begging for votes too.

I hate to start another thread for the purpose, and can hardly top this one's attention getting title, so . . .

I'm begging for votes in the next several hours for Susan's College Girl-Lust Ch. 02. It's almost certainly not going to win the November "sweeps" in the lez category, but funny things happen here sometimes . . . It has 49 votes right now, and if one of those funny things did happen it would be sad to come up a just a bit short.

Full disclosure: This is a long story (six pages) in a category that is not everyone's cup of tea, so I understand that few if any can help. The "stroke" count is high, but it has some very interesting personal interactions, as well. It has some very sweet and poignant moments, and hard-driving passionate ones also.

Finally, the stories (and authors) that will almost certainly take honors in the category for November are terrific and I am honored to even be competing on the same field with them, so there will be certainly be no sour grapes from me whatever happens.
 
AcadiaSky said:
Now that I have your attention, read all about it in my Holiday Contest story- "A Holiday Angel"!!!!

THANKS A MILLION. I would love feedback!!!!

I'm sorry for the blatant plug!!!!



Can we hear more about this plug? Is it the vibratin kind?

:cool: :) :cool:
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
LISA!


You beautiful girl - where have you been?


I kinda got busy, then I cleaned up my computer and deleted lots of old files, I dunno how my favorites and bookmarks got dumped, it could have somethin to do with the way I file everything under M for miscellaneous. That way I don't seem to have many files at first glance, and can't find any files no matter how many glances.

Nice decorations in your siggie, makes me feel all warm and holiday spirity ...... and wet.

:nana: :nana: :nana:
 
Lisa Denton said:
I kinda got busy, then I cleaned up my computer and deleted lots of old files, I dunno how my favorites and bookmarks got dumped, it could have somethin to do with the way I file everything under M for miscellaneous. That way I don't seem to have many files at first glance, and can't find any files no matter how many glances.

Nice decorations in your siggie, makes me feel all warm and holiday spirity ...... and wet.

:nana: :nana: :nana:


So glad you found your way back to our AH den of iniquity.

You wanna start sinning together right away?

:devil:
 
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