Do you like my poem???

[Vixen-XXX]

I would like constructive comments on this one please:

A Man I Love But Hate

I dream at night of a man I’ve loved
His body firm
And arms so strong
But a touch that is quite gentle

One night we lay beneath the stars
Our bodies side by side
One night we fight, a fight of words
One night I cry & cry

He loves me dear, but this I cannot tell
But who could when he’s under beer’s dark spell

I love this man with all my heart
But leave him if I must

Our bonds grow weak
And then stay weak
I love this man so much
I think about him & his touch

Sometimes I wish he’d leave me
Sometimes I wish he’d stay
This time I wish he’d stay
Stay and never go away

But his anger is a knife
My body is the creed
And if I stay
My heart shall truly bleed

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