Do I have what it takes to keep writing?

[esoog]

I posted my first series on literotica a couple years ago called "Voluptuous Aunt Diane". This is also my first attempt at any sort of writing since high school. This series was an embellished version of a true story, but I have many other ideas floating around in my head. If any of you experienced writers have the time, please take a look at my stories and tell me honestly if you think I should continue writing. Any tips or criticism would be appreciated as well.
http://www.literotica.com/s/voluptuous-aunt-diane

 

[JonB1969]

I posted my first series on literotica a couple years ago called "Voluptuous Aunt Diane". This is also my first attempt at any sort of writing since high school. This series was an embellished version of a true story, but I have many other ideas floating around in my head. If any of you experienced writers have the time, please take a look at my stories and tell me honestly if you think I should continue writing. Any tips or criticism would be appreciated as well.
http://www.literotica.com/s/voluptuous-aunt-diane

Actually, yes, you do have what it takes to keep writing.

I would suggest a couple things to work on.

1. Try to break up the paragraphs where there is dialogue.

2. You could use some minor editing with regard to punctuation, but not anything big obviously.

3. The dialogue is realistic and not porn-ish.

4. Your writing is both technically and creatively good.

5. The only thing I had a hard time with (so to speak) was the size of the aunt's breasts.

Otherwise, good start.

 

[jezzaz]

I posted my first series on literotica a couple years ago called "Voluptuous Aunt Diane". This is also my first attempt at any sort of writing since high school. This series was an embellished version of a true story, but I have many other ideas floating around in my head. If any of you experienced writers have the time, please take a look at my stories and tell me honestly if you think I should continue writing. Any tips or criticism would be appreciated as well.
http://www.literotica.com/s/voluptuous-aunt-diane

The ONLY way you get better as a writer is to keep doing it

So yeah. Keep going. Don't stop now. You finished something. Do it again.

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

The way to get better is to learn the rules and apply them. Try, try again is for loser dolts.

 

[jezzaz]

And another block. Although this one was only a matter of time.

 

[polcam]

patience in writing

I think you should keep writing. I liked your series, though I felt that it may be a little too rushed. It was also short enough to be one story. I think there's a lot more that could have been added to the story to build it slowly to fruition.

It's the development of the characters that's keeps readers glued to a story. But developing a character means describing him/her and where they are at, then the thought processes that they go through as they break through various taboos, etc.

I posted my first series on literotica a couple years ago called "Voluptuous Aunt Diane". This is also my first attempt at any sort of writing since high school. This series was an embellished version of a true story, but I have many other ideas floating around in my head. If any of you experienced writers have the time, please take a look at my stories and tell me honestly if you think I should continue writing. Any tips or criticism would be appreciated as well.
http://www.literotica.com/s/voluptuous-aunt-diane

 

[TamLin01]

First of all, having "what it takes" has more to do with you yourself than with your output. If you have a desire to keep writing and to put the work into it that it will require, then yes, you can and should keep writing. Whether what you write is "good" or not is A) subjective anyway, and B) actually rather immaterial. The question isn't, "Is what I wrote good?" the question is, "Do I want to write something like it again?"

But pretending for a moment that the quality really is the crux of the whole thing, well, your first story is not what you want to be judged by. Nobody can say for sure whether you will write well in the future, but I can guarantee that if you keep writing you will certainly write better in the future. Even just what you write next will probably be better than what have you written already, even if it's just in an incremental way that's not immediately apparent.

 

[sr71plt]

I agree. How much does it "take" to share stories you enjoyed writing on a free-use Internet site? This site permits you to strip the response down to no voting and no comments, if you wish (and a half-way stop to no anonymous comments). If you enjoy writing and like the idea of sharing what you write, you can find a way to do that here.