dirtying my niece

[lisamuse]

My niece just turned 18 and is so pretty and perfect in her unspoilt splendor.

I was thinking of writing a story about me, the aunt with a bit of a mean streak, bringing her to a strange older man/men to be "dirtied"

Anyone have any ideas to this end?

 

[Tio_Narratore]

...and her mother, your sister, knows exactly what's in store for the girl when you take her off for "a birthday weekend she'll never forget." After all, it's a tradition in your family that the women are "dirtied" beyond belief for their 18th birthday. "It builds character," Grandma always said, "there's nothing that can daunt a girl after going through that!"

On Friday afternoon, you'd drive her to the "country place," miles from anywhere, and send her in while you get the luggage. Inside, the older man you recruited is waiting for her. Before she can turn on the light, he throws her to the ground and ties her like a calf. You come in another door to go to the next room, with a one-way glass so you can watch what happens. There will also be opportunities for you to offer suggestions or orders to the man.
Friday night he does what he wants to her, and on Saturday, other older man arrive, one every three hours, starting at 9 am. Each has her in turn until the next man arrives for his turn (Perhaps her Aunt might even clean her up with a rough, cold shower/bath between men, waiting for the serious dirtying). At 6 pm the fourth, and last, man arrives. A 3 hour break, and at midnight, she becomes the plaything of all five of them, at once and by turns until noon on Sunday. The men leave, and you clean her up and bring her back home for her mother to explain the lesson.

How's that idea?

Of course, if you want just the mean streak, with a touch of the green-eyed monster casting your eye on the perfect little princess... that could be arranged as well...

 

[JMaxwell69]

There are all sorts of ways to work it. The question is what motivates the mean aunt?

Is she in debt, and the only thing her creditors will except other than cash is a sweet young honey-pot? (either servicing them or working it off on their clients.)

The jealousy idea, previously mentioned, has potential. "This is what life has in store for you, little miss perfect."

Maybe the aunt is in a co-dependent relationship with a man who threatens to leave her if she doesn't get him some younger action.

May be the aunt has bad blood with her sister, and feels the most effective way to get back at her is to take it out on the woman's darling daughter. (e.g. Maybe the sister's boyfriend assaulted the aunt years ago, and she always blamed her sister.)

Maybe the aunt loses control of the situation (if you don't want the aunt to be such a dark character) maybe she is going to help get her niece laid for the first time, and the man they chose to do the act is a little dark.

 

[lisamuse]

Definitely "jealousy"

The angle that would most resemble what I actually want to capture in the story. I think it's what motivated this daydream to begin with.

She is little miss perfect and to see that ruined is tremendously exciting. Is this something others have thought of before or am I weird?

 

[JMaxwell69]

The angle that would most resemble what I actually want to capture in the story. I think it's what motivated this daydream to begin with.

She is little miss perfect and to see that ruined is tremendously exciting. Is this something others have thought of before or am I weird?

Yes and yes, you're wierd, but certainly it has been thought of / fantasized about before. It is not uniquely weird, and it has a certain undeniable hotness to it.

It is also is not so comon that there are a billion other stories exactly like it, which is a plus.

You've got motive.

What's the setting? Biker bar, nursing home (making her service geriatrics would be kind of niche but dark), you stop the car on the seedy side of town in front of a milling group of thugs and kick her to the curb, military base (supporting the troops with some hot young cootch), etc?

 

[RawHumor]

Weren't you the niece in your other thread?