Dialogue

[soflabbwlvr]

It's a nice story but those folk do speak a lot in one go. Most sentences are only around 30 words at most. Obviously speeches are different. It's good, but I feel as though the dialogue is a bit strained and too expositionary. I keep my dialogue to a couple of lines. Only the science fiction stories have more dialogue in once 'mouthful or bite' if you will because that's what the genre is like, more like a historical story too.

Context. It's a talk show. The guests are being asked to explain their viewpoints.