Raping My Niece by mingeeter
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=57098
Author decided to write the story without using quotation marks for dialogue, or in many cases even separating spoken from narration. It ruins the flow when the reader has to figure out what is what and kills any erotic mood the author is trying to creatre.
I emailed the author and told him that I did not rate his story but if I did I would likely give it a 1 for poor style/format. I felt it would be unfair to give a low mark based strictly on form when I found the story unreadable [and I do not ever think a 1 is justified; but the threat may be useful as shock value.]
I suggested he rewrite and resubmit the story so the reader could enjoy his work.
Anyone else find it a pain to read stories without the use of quotation marks?
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=57098
Author decided to write the story without using quotation marks for dialogue, or in many cases even separating spoken from narration. It ruins the flow when the reader has to figure out what is what and kills any erotic mood the author is trying to creatre.
I emailed the author and told him that I did not rate his story but if I did I would likely give it a 1 for poor style/format. I felt it would be unfair to give a low mark based strictly on form when I found the story unreadable [and I do not ever think a 1 is justified; but the threat may be useful as shock value.]
I suggested he rewrite and resubmit the story so the reader could enjoy his work.
Anyone else find it a pain to read stories without the use of quotation marks?
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