tomlitilia
Literotica Guru
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Background: I've always hated erotic stories that involves "you". It never worked for me, maybe because I know I didn't do what the narrator tells me I did. But I like a good challenge, so I've decided to try my hand at it, and the way I hope it can work is to write the story as a letter, in this case as a written confession from a wife to her husband (oh yes, it's an LW tale).
Problem: What I find most challenging with the letter format is when (in this case) the wife describes conversations. Using quotation marks like a normal story doesn't work because it breaks the style; no one would use quotation marks in a letter. Instead I end up with the wife giving the synopsis of conversations, but that has it's own problems. It's a lot of "I said..." and "he said..." It ends up boring and dense.
Question: Does someone have good pointers for how to write conversation synopses in this style that doesn't make the narration stale? Also grateful for good examples.
Problem: What I find most challenging with the letter format is when (in this case) the wife describes conversations. Using quotation marks like a normal story doesn't work because it breaks the style; no one would use quotation marks in a letter. Instead I end up with the wife giving the synopsis of conversations, but that has it's own problems. It's a lot of "I said..." and "he said..." It ends up boring and dense.
Question: Does someone have good pointers for how to write conversation synopses in this style that doesn't make the narration stale? Also grateful for good examples.