Dedicated to my Master

[dreamangel_4980]

with Artful's permission:

I wanted to share the fact that I am the new "sub" of Artful and am ecstactically happy about it...i can't get my new name="Artful's Dream to log in for me so I will still be posting under this for a bit..wanted to share my poem to you tho..

For Master With Love

You came into my life
and You gently touched my soul
No longer I'll feel strife
as I surrender my control

You only have to ask
and at the mention of Your name
this lady You call "sub"
will never be the same

You bring my life such passion
Your hand it strokes my face
I want to stay forever
in Your loving,warm embrace

dedicated to my new Master Artful whom I shall serve with joy and passion..from your "sub"Artful's Dream"











.... The answer is :* One who may teach me submissive sexuality* ~ The question is"Who is is that I have chosen to open myheart and spread my sex*

 

[WickedEve]

Hi Artful's Dream!

I saw you on the Bound/Submissive Pictures Thread. I'm sure Artful will be very pleased with what you wrote.
I write poetry for my Master. Most of it never goes any further. What I write Master is different than what I post here. For Him, I can rhyme and use clichés till my heart's content.

 

[Guest]

Please take no offense

1. What is this some sort of visual torture?

2. Ok please I submit.

3. I'm not familiar with bdsm but ugh could I have a blindfold since I've just been fucked.

4. Okay this is part of the torture, when does something good happen?

5. Thanks for the lesson in discipline, now can I go?

6. Funny after reading that poem I feel as if I've have been whipped.

Congrats Dreamangel!

 

[WickedEve]

Poet comic, you offered no constructive criticism.

dreamangle wrote this for someone special. And like I said, I'm sure he'll be pleased with it. dreamangle has posted other poems and asked for feedback. I believe she wants to improve her poetry.

I'm not sure if dreamangle wanted a critique of this poem or not. But poet comic, you could have done better. All you did was make jokes at her expense.

 

[Guest]

True, no crit was intended. Comedy is not pretty and no insult intended. But after being brought to tears I felt a big round belly laugh was needed!

I'll be back.............

 

[UnmaskedPoet]

Right on Brotha!

The Poet Comic is correct. I have examined this poem for rhyme and meter for devices and tricks. I will take the comedy!

I was dissed as the " Comic." It is amazing how the views jump when I use this name. I appear to have the windbags following!

UP

 

[Elda Furry]

UP #2

Not the real Unmasked Poet but an incredible life like simulation. A Synthetic and Improved UP" U.P. without that board up his ass!

Oh baby, is all of you Synthetic? Do you think you could borrow UP #1's ass-board? I'd love to spank you with it.

 

[UnmaskedPoet]

Oh yeah

Thats what I'm talkin bout!

 

[Elda Furry]

Oh baby, cum to momma kink

Let's not use dreamangel's thread. Why don't you start a new thread and invite me over. I'll give you some rhythm that'll make you speak in rhyme.

 

[UnmaskedPoet]

Amen to that sister

Who told you I was a member of the clergy? Oh baby you turn me on when you start speaking in tongues, oh I meant about!

 

[Elda Furry]

Speaking of tongues, mine knows a few tricks. I've trained it to do this... thing. It's kind of a swirling, flicking, wrap around, kind of thing. I just need a thick pole to demonstrate on. Have any suggestions where I can find one?

 

[UnmaskedPoet]

I got something for you

Bring it over to the new thread!

 

[~Dream~]

With Artful's permission

ok ok people geez let's settle it down they have forums for this kinda thing ,don't they?/ lol it's cool wicked eve i can handle anything that poet wants to try to dish out at me lol bringit on!!! i'm a big girl and can handle a little humor but ..eve was right ..my poem was and IS special to me and i AM trying to improve..so if ya dont got nothing to say... he he see ya on the bdsm room or something....i'm gonna be busy pleasing my Master Artful myself mmmmm uh huh and a couple of these to wicked eve thank you for defending me sweet Lady ... Artful's dream...

 

[artful]

Re: Hi Artful's Dream!

I saw you on the Bound/Submissive Pictures Thread. I'm sure Artful will be very pleased with what you wrote.
I write poetry for my Master. Most of it never goes any further. What I write Master is different than what I post here. For Him, I can rhyme and use clichés till my heart's content.

Eve,...wanted to let you know,... your comment was correct. Though my dream has just now started training,...I am well pleased with her poem. I also have much confidence in her being able to learn what is needed for her happiness. Thank you for your support.

 

[WickedEve]

Artful

She's a sweet dream, and I'm glad she found her way to this board. I hope she keeps working on her poetry.

dreamangel, I must inform you that poets are a vicious lot. You wouldn't want to meet one in a dark coffee shop. But I see you can handle yourself.

 

[~Dream~]

With Artful's permission

re:to handling myself yes i can and those poets just need to know that dynamite comes in small pkgs and i have a very short fuse at times lol..
but as to you miss eve i greatly respect and admire you and any help you give me..even regarding being a "sub" as i'm quite new at it..wanna get better,,love and want to please my Master Artful more than life itself.. I'm missing him terribly tonite ..it is a pain like no other... cant hardly take it..going to bed soon perhaps sleep will help but i doubt it hugs to all to my Master

 

[Guest]

I'm free! I don't need Artfuls permission

Oh no, this sappy spank my ass stuff is back. The crappy poetry was better.

 

[~Dream~]

With Artful's permission

Some people around here (poet's comic) have the I.Q,of a burnt up pea..and i'd just like to say yes i know you are jealous because i have to answer to my Master and not your sorry ass he he never evr would i want to be ANYWHERE near someone who wastes their time cutting down others ..maybe my poetry isnt the BEST in the world but it comes from my heart (and at least i have one !! ) as for the spank on the ass stuff -don't knock it till ya try it baby!! ppersonally i know i will enjoy it VERY VERY much if and when my Master choose to please himself that way because the end result is i am pleased also....too bad with your attitude you may never know a woman's sweet caress!! later dude much much later by the way..DREAMANGEL4980 also happens to be me!!

 

[The Poet Comic]

You're too funny

What are you trying to say?
Did your master have you leave out complete sentences as a penance? Now I know why your poetry is so funny!

If you would just keep the topic on poetry I would leave you alone. Instead you want me to enjoy your position as a sub. Well good for you. I hope your Master teaches you how to be a sub and hopefully he will teach you how to write poetry. Until then I will shield my eyes.

 

[Sweetwood]

Imposition and my two cents worth

This is after all a poetry site not a D/s chatforum. Or is it?

While your feelings for Artful are lovely and wonderful for you, and will, I am sure inspire the most heartfelt poetry, I am not sure I really want to know the details of your personal life in prose and smack dab in the middle of a poetry feedback forum.

Most people here, come to this board to discuss and critique each others poetry.

A dominant who permits you to impose yourself on others in this way must be savored with caution. It violates the basic principles of SSAC, with the emphasis on consensual.

So let's keep this about poetry however erotic and playful it may be.

Sweetwood

 

[~Dream~]

With Artful's permission,

SWEETWOOD,
since i DO respect YOU and NOT the other gentleman ..if thats what he is ,i will keep it to poetry as it was INTENDED to be sir in the 1st place until the wrong person critiqued it..i apologize if i have offened anyone at this forum..and will go back to my attepts and yes they ARE" heartfelt "ones as even wicked eve can at least see,and leave the childish bantering oover my lifestyle to those of weak minds..thank-you for your comments SWeetwood