Daughter Hate stepmother

[Donovan7777]

Daughter and father get very close for several years after death of wife and mother. At the time she is 13 . For 5 years until she goes off to college, they share the same bed. Always a pillow between them, they cuddle a lot. No incest. For her 18th birthday she asks her dad to take her out to dinner like a date. They have been living out of the same bedroom for several years. When she comes down dressed up the father is stunned. She is dressed like her mom. The father is mesmerized all night. He drinks and, to the daughters delight, they make love. Anyway the daughter goes off to college. The father finally started dating the daughter is unhappy. The father marries. The daughter plots and invite the new stepmother to visit her at college. They drink, smoke some weed and she gets her stepmother gangbanged on video. The video has audio which clearly displays the stepmother, while drunk, enjoying the fucking. Marriage over

 

[FantasySharer1]

I'd prefer if the stepmom is incredibly apologetic and is dependent on the now rich dad for her lifestyle. Daughter cuckqueans the stepmom and moves into Dad's bedroom.

Stepmom's job is to clean daughter's pussy of Dad's creampie, suck dad's dick clean, serve them, cook for them, take care of their needs. Stepmom becomes sex slave to both Dad and Daughter. She is forever loyal but is live-in maid and sex slave.

Stepmom's job almost every morning is to to wake up to daughter's pussy in her face dripping with Dad's cum. She gets fucked at will, pissed on, used, and generally treated as a fuckslave for Dad and Daughter.
Daughter gets pregnant and stepmom has to spend 9 months giving daughter footrubs, back rubs, getting her food at will, etc.

 

[sirhugs]

Daughter and father get very close for several years after death of wife and mother. At the time she is 13 . For 5 years until she goes off to college, they share the same bed. Always a pillow between them, they cuddle a lot. No incest. For her 18th birthday she asks her dad to take her out to dinner like a date. They have been living out of the same bedroom for several years. When she comes down dressed up the father is stunned. She is dressed like her mom. The father is mesmerized all night. He drinks and, to the daughters delight, they make love. Anyway the daughter goes off to college. The father finally started dating the daughter is unhappy. The father marries. The daughter plots and invite the new stepmother to visit her at college. They drink, smoke some weed and she gets her stepmother gangbanged on video. The video has audio which clearly displays the stepmother, while drunk, enjoying the fucking. Marriage over

I suspect the 13-18 piece will run afoul of the "under 18" rule, which is very strictly applied.

 

[FantasySharer1]

Yeah and theres no reason for it. Just say its her 18th birthday.
her mom died x years ago
she hasnt been able to sleep on her own.
let the reader figure it out rather than explicitly spelling out these things

 

[BlackSnake]

Do you have to put in the precursor?

After the dealt of the wife, the father raises his stepdaughter and sends her off to college. The father then remarries which upsets the stepdaughter. The stepdaughter plots to get rid of the her stepfather's new wife. The new wife plans a trip to visit the stepdaughter to get to know her because her now husband is so close to her. The new wife tries to hangout and be friends with the stepdaughter. The stepdaughter sets the new wife up to get roofied and gang banged. The stepdaughter gets the new wife back to her hotel as if nothing was the matter. They had a great time at a party and they got separated for a while, but they had a great time together. A few weeks later, a video is leaked. Concerned, the stepdaughter sends to video to her stepdad. Stepdad ends marriage and the stepdaughter is there to comfort him.

 

[sirhugs]

Do you have to put in the precursor?

After the dealt of the wife, the father raises his stepdaughter and sends her off to college. The father then remarries which upsets the stepdaughter. The stepdaughter plots to get rid of the her stepfather's new wife. The new wife plans a trip to visit the stepdaughter to get to know her because her now husband is so close to her. The new wife tries to hangout and be friends with the stepdaughter. The stepdaughter sets the new wife up to get roofied and gang banged. The stepdaughter gets the new wife back to her hotel as if nothing was the matter. They had a great time at a party and they got separated for a while, but they had a great time together. A few weeks later, a video is leaked. Concerned, the stepdaughter sends to video to her stepdad. Stepdad ends marriage and the stepdaughter is there to comfort him.

roofied and gangbanged is not liklely to pass Lit's non-consent rules.

 

[BlackSnake]

Drunk and fucked

 

[lovecraft68]

The basic premise is common and can be done without the problematic under age NC elements. Start with daughter at 18, her and dad have been close since mom died. She goes off to college, he dates and she's upset because she felt like his surrogate wife in a way.

He marries, she's jealous and....from there she could just dig up proof the new wife is a cheat or something, no needs to to get crazy.

 

[sirhugs]

Drunk and fucked

works

 

[FantasySharer1]

Step ruins it for me. Just daughter so much better.

 

[CurtGiles46]

I'd prefer if the stepmom is incredibly apologetic and is dependent on the now rich dad for her lifestyle. Daughter cuckqueans the stepmom and moves into Dad's bedroom.

Stepmom's job is to clean daughter's pussy of Dad's creampie, suck dad's dick clean, serve them, cook for them, take care of their needs. Stepmom becomes sex slave to both Dad and Daughter. She is forever loyal but is live-in maid and sex slave.

Stepmom's job almost every morning is to to wake up to daughter's pussy in her face dripping with Dad's cum. She gets fucked at will, pissed on, used, and generally treated as a fuckslave for Dad and Daughter.
Daughter gets pregnant and stepmom has to spend 9 months giving daughter footrubs, back rubs, getting her food at will, etc.

I agree. The original version is okay but it’s a little dry by erotic standards since the stepmother’s sex is just with strangers. Your addition of the stepmother becoming submissive to the daughter ups the eroticism a thousand fold.

Reader taste for these stories prefers overwhelming sexual victories/defeats.