Daddy's Young Slut

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I had a story idea. I have never written erotica before, but I might try this out.

Basically, a girl is caught performing oral sex at a glory hole by her father (who frequents the glory hole). He punishes her by forcing her to become a sex-addicted slut. She starts off as a virgin but after much humiliation and forcing her to orally serve other men, he takes her virginity and forces her to have sex with other men.

This story will also include a breeding fantasy of mine (sex with the purpose of impregnating) and slight bondage.

I was going to begin writing it today. Would anyone be interested in reading something like this?
 
I had a story idea. I have never written erotica before, but I might try this out.

Basically, a girl is caught performing oral sex at a glory hole by her father (who frequents the glory hole). He punishes her by forcing her to become a sex-addicted slut. She starts off as a virgin but after much humiliation and forcing her to orally serve other men, he takes her virginity and forces her to have sex with other men.

This story will also include a breeding fantasy of mine (sex with the purpose of impregnating) and slight bondage.

I was going to begin writing it today. Would anyone be interested in reading something like this?

mmmm sounds very arousing to me! *wink*
 
Hello Beautiful

Yes I would read one very similar to it in the lit area yesterday about twin sisters and a father and his twin brother nice I like it.
 
Hmmmm, maybe I should finally write the third installment of my "My Sexy Sisters" incest story? But I'm not sure where to go with it after the first two.......Carney
 
I like the heart of this story. Daddy makes daughter into a sex slave. I'll see what I can work up for that. However the details are a bitch. There is a saying "Real life can be random but fiction's gotta make sense". So Daddy being either single or a cheat is buyable. His virgin daughter working a glory hole is not.
 
Sounds similar to the other "daughter is sucking cock at the glory hole" story idea we have. Should be well received it seems.
 
I like the heart of this story. Daddy makes daughter into a sex slave. I'll see what I can work up for that. However the details are a bitch. There is a saying "Real life can be random but fiction's gotta make sense". So Daddy being either single or a cheat is buyable. His virgin daughter working a glory hole is not.

I like the bolded, however, maybe she was sent there on a dare (maybe a college thing?) and was caught by Daddy . . .
 
I always felt it was the duty of the writer to explain why the impossible has happened. Luckily since this is fiction, all that is needed is enough credibility as to enable the suspension of disbelief. Why is she there? Why is she doing this? Answer those questions without going too far afield (alien influence, mind control, etc.) and you can get right into the interesting aspects of the story.
 
An eighteen year old virgin agreed to a dare at a glory hole? I'm still having a hard time with it. Like I said fiction has to make sense. You'd never get the audience to buy a story about a typical soldier who wanted to be an artist exterminating eleven million people and starting a war so horrific that it ended a thousand years of on an off warring in a region. Nevermind that it happened it doesn't make any goddamn sense.

In a story he would have been a general or at least a young lieutinent who's family was killed in the crossfire.

I think for this you gotta have a daughter who is at least kinda comfortable sexually. Doesn't mean a whore, just a girl who's not an 18+ year old virgin who's first experience with sex is a glory hole. I'm really having a hard time buying that detail.
 
Why would it not make sense for a young virgin to be at a glory hole. Perhaps this is her first time. or a dare from her friends?

I'll be writing it soon. Just need to find some time to sit down at the computer and start.
 
Why would it not make sense that a girl who had NEVER sucked a dick before would do so at a glory hole for any reason short of gun point? Cus she hadn't had sex before!!!!!! Maybe it's been too long since you lost your virginity but it's a fairly big deal.

It simply doesn't feel realistic enough.
 
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