Daddy's Lil Girl (Erotic Poem)

[dream33_2]

He loves it when I call him
Daddy, I am his lil girl
He loves it when I dress up
in pig tails and curls
He loves to watch me bend over
showing him my wet naked kitty
He loves to take his thick rod
pumping it slow between my titties
He loves it when my warm mouth
sucks on his swollen tip
He loves it when I flick my tongue
making him cum all over my face and lips
He loves it when I call him Daddy
all dressed up in pig tails and curls
He loves it when I sit in his lap
and tell him I am Daddy's lil girl

 

[Xarmyguy]

love it.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Is this up for critique or just posting a dirty ditty? Erotic poems are not dirty ditties

 

[pelegrino]

Is this up for critique or just posting a dirty ditty? Erotic poems are not dirty ditties

well, the author defines it as an erotic poem and i think LITEROTICA guide lines would support that claim.
Since your question whether it's meant for critique or just for posting something nice and light has not been answered by the author, I don't know either.
A poem in here can be either erotic or non erotic, that's all. I wish there was an option to define some poems as dirty ditties for whoever wants to do so, but there's none.
I am not interested in the word "ditty" so much, but the word "dirty" carries a lot more weight in its juxtaposition to "erotic poems" which are not "dirty ditties".
What, in your opinion are erotic poems? How much erotic are they?
What are dirty ditties? How do you measure this dirtiness, by what artistic/non artistic or moral units?
What is erotic and how is it differentiated from pornographic? (I'm not sure I know, I'm not sure I will ever know, but I am sure LITEROTICA does know, therefore it does not supply an option for pornographic or dirty-well done LITEROTICA!).
All these could be anybody's opinion, guess, preference, taste, intention etc.
I don't want to here again all that stuff about subtlety of expression, context etc, valuable as they may be. Too much of that going round lately. What some people call "subtle" in erotic writing, some others may call it "anemic" or some other worse names I could think of. A word can be vulgar to one and erotic/exciting to another. Who is to decide?
Please, do not consider my style as aggressive, it is not intended as such, and I may have the same or similar opinions to yours in general about these matters, or I may defer, but since the author does not answer your question and I guess that you would like a discussion on this topic, I give you some of my thoughts (a lot more questions as you can see), hoping to carry on with this thread. The original post/poem, dirty ditty or whatever does not pause a problem, but your question definitely does to me.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Without reading through all the poems again I can't point you in the direction of the ones I mean, but I know many poets on here have certainly written some that are what I would call erotic without being 'shove it in your face' dirty ditties. Erotic is subtle , you can certainly get the meaning without needing 'swollen tips' and 'titties'. A dirty ditty needs those expressions, true erotic poetry does not to carry its message, and there lies the art of a good poet.

 

[dream33_2]

I am lost

Honestly to both of you I am totally lost I came to this site only to sharmy erotic/porn if u mY sexual fantasies I didnt realize this was not allowed and another thing is i honestly do not know where to post thes eanywya but i do thank both of you for your concern

 

[Tsotha]

Honestly to both of you I am totally lost I came to this site only to sharmy erotic/porn if u mY sexual fantasies I didnt realize this was not allowed and another thing is i honestly do not know where to post thes eanywya but i do thank both of you for your concern

Hi dream33_2.

You can post your poems here. However, this being the poetry discussion and feedback forum, poems are frequently posted with the intention of receiving critique, which is what UnderYourSpell asked above (whether you were looking for feedback).

The intention of feedback is improving the poem and your skills as a poet. However, depending on the emotional attachment of the writer to the poem, it may be a bad idea to ask for feedback, since the people here will give a very honest (and direct) response, listing everything that is "wrong" in a poem — not to be mean, but in the interest of developing technique.

 

[twelveoone]

perhaps if it was in a form
Senior Week
Basho, you fool

cock between soft places
the jizzum tree in full bloom
the school bus comes soon