Daddy's Chat Room Sudeuction

[gwen_gypsygirl]

OK so years ago I read a story on-line about a father who seduces his daughter by pretending to be a stranger. The "stranger" talks to her about incest and convinces her to try it with her father. The story ends with the girl walking naked into her father's room just as he's switching off his lap top.

Now, I can't find the story again but the concept is hot and in the original it was kind of rushed (all happening in a matter of minutes/couple of hours).

I think it'd be a fun story with a relatively slow burn and some of it could be in the format of IM Chat transcripts.

What do people think?

 

[sirhugs]

personally, I don't like IM chats embedded in stories, but I'm old fashioned. just interrupts the flow for me.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

What about the story idea in general though?

 

[darkbeast]

I do happen to like embedded IM chats. I have a fondness for adding ephemera from characters in stories. Love letters, interviews, diary entries... all that works for me.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

Yeah I have an unfinished novel that will have diary entries in it.

 

[darkbeast]

Yeah I have an unfinished novel that will have diary entries in it.

Reminds me of a story I read years ago that was a supposed collection of diary entries of dozens of women and their memorable first sexual encounters. Wasn't always about losing virginity, just about memorable sexual encounters and I found it so hot. Some incest, some lesbian, some solo (first orgasm). While the writing style made it clear it was all written by one person, I got off so hard from the thought that maybe I was reading someone's intimate confessions. The same applies to reading IMs... which I guess I get off on because I do enjoy erotic chat as well so it is just like rereading my own IM logs.

 

[Carnevil9]

I think it's a fine story idea. You could work it either way: the father seducing the daughter, or the daughter seducing the father. The version where neither knew who each other were has pretty much been done to death, but your way sounds much fresher.

There is a Lit category for letters and transcripts; that might be the place to submit a version that is mostly chat transcripts.

 

[EddieEgypt]

Sounds like a hot idea to me. Though I'm more keen on other incest dynamics, not really into the daddy daughter thing. Make this sister on sister, or mom on daughter, you've got my attention.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

Make this sister on sister, or mom on daughter, you've got my attention.

Maybe a sequel? Either set a couple of years later (The original sister- The now of age younger sister) or daughter gets the idea to expand her parental fun.

 

[Buzzboy]

Sounds hot. I'd like to read that story.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

OK so how does daddy start to plan this, does he simply get a yen for his little princess' body or does he discover that she's been visiting some questionable sites while looking through the family computer's browsing history*?


*Or maybe there are two laptops, one she brings home from college and one he uses and they're the same model so he accidentally discovers her interest that way.

 

[darkbeast]

I think it should start with him seeing a familiar chatroom on her computer, getting freaked out that she discovered where he liked to chat and then realizing that she was their on her own accord. As a concerned father, he wanted to see exactly what she was saying so he created an alt identity in the room to chat with her to see what she talked about.

General interest turns to lust, lust drives him to push her... getting naked pictures of her, little videos of her masturbating... talking to her about her own father to gauge her reaction to the idea... culminating in the climactic father - daughter getting it on scene.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

OK so anyone reading this work at a computer store? I have some technical questions for the first part/chapter which set the scene.

 

[darkbeast]

OK so anyone reading this work at a computer store? I have some technical questions for the first part/chapter which set the scene.

I don't work at a computer store, but ask your question. If I can't answer, I'm certain someone else can.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

Ah see there is a technical question or two (like what a top of the range laptop would include) but also I wanted to get an insight into the sort of BS a salesperson at one of those stores might use to convince somebody to buy two of such computers.

EDIT: Ah what the hell? I just started writing it today hopefully the introductory bit will sound OK.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

OK so let's kick this off shall we?

Chapter One
(no sex, scene setting)​

“She’s a real beauty isn’t she? And she’ll do whatever you want faster than anything else out there”

The voice seemed to come form nowhere. Harry McCann straightened up and looked around to see the disturbingly grinning salesman beaming at him.

“Oh, yes” he replied “it’s a nice little laptop”

“Nice?” The salesman looked as if he’d been deeply offended for a moment before the odd grin returned “Sir, this is the Maple Power Valise 16 inch, probably the greatest machine on the commercial market today. She’s a great machine for creative types but she’s got enough power to run a business empire from your kitchen table”

“Er thanks” Harry continued, unconsciously backing away from the clerk a little, “I am looking for a new laptop, Maple’s are a little pricey though, I don’t know if” the salesman waved Harry’s concerns aside “Oh no sir, it’s a marvelous investment plus” here he smiled as if laying down the ultimate trump card “we have a special deal just today, buy one get one at a 75% discount”

Harry took this in “Well why would I want two?” he protested.

The answer to this again seemed to come from nowhere “I could use it Daddy”

Both Harry and the salesman turned to see Harry’s oldest daughter Sophie walking into the computer area of the store. She’d been checking out the DVDs and music when Harry had slipped away to check on laptops.

Harry noticed with a little annoyance, the way the salesman’s eyes did a quick approving inspection of the girl.

Sophie McCann was certainly something to look at approvingly. Her hair was raven black, where it wasn’t highlighted in funky deep purple tones, and fell to just below her chin which only increased the contrast between her hair and her pale features.

The outfit she wore was just the respectable side of slutty and hugged her in ways Harry wished it didn’t, Sophie, like her mother at that age, was more than amply blessed with curves.

“It’s my birthday in a month Dad, and I’m off to college soon, I could used the second one”

Harry was faced with two smiles now; the same unctuous grin of the clerk was joined by a slightly pouty one from Sophie. Harry sighed “Show me the paperwork”

Sophie gasped joyfully and pounced on her father “Thanks Dad!” she exclaimed hugging him tightly and placing a kiss on his cheek. Despite the amount of cash he was about to be relived of, Harry smiled, he loved making Sophie happy. “Remember” he told his daughter “this will be for school work only, I don’t want you wasting time surfing on line when you should be studying”

Sophie frowned a little “K, dad, I’ll be a super good girl and never go on line at all” then she winked. Harry chuckled “just make it at least an 75/25 split OK?”

Sophie nodded, “Of course, don’t worry, this will be great I’ll get so much done at home and college”

Harry forked over the cash and father and daughter headed for the car, not realizing in the slightest how much that purchase was due to change things between them.

 

[LindsayRae]

OK so let's kick this off shall we?

Just a reminder that you're not in the SRP board but a board where you simply bounce off ideas for stories to write up and submit to the site.

 

[gwen_gypsygirl]

Just a reminder that you're not in the SRP board but a board where you simply bounce off ideas for stories to write up and submit to the site.

Yes I thought I might like to see if people like the introduction.

 

[HeyAll]

That's a really nice intro, I'm looking forward to reading the full story when it's done. Sounds like it has a lot of potential.


The biggest challenge, in my opinion, is setting up & why the dad begins to do stuff with his daughter online without her knowing it's her father. And why would the dad do it?

 

[voyfun]

good start

love the idea..i generally like mom son..may be we could bring them in too later

 

[LindsayRae]

Yes I thought I might like to see if people like the introduction.

It sounded like you were setting up a role play. I apologize.