Cruel2Bkind, newish writer in gay male

[Cruel2BKind]

Hi! I am a fairly new writer, but even though i joined in january I already have five story lines, three of which are still in progress and they each have over a thousand views and several favorites. Since i am a total attention whore (lets face it, who isn't) I would like to get some actual feedback because a lot of readers are shy and don't comment. If you like gay stories with an actual plot, cute skinny guys, and supernatural creatures (so far i have werewolves, mermen, and HeShes) Please check out a story or two and leave comments here or on the stories. You can either click my user name or search
The Bottom Tier
The Boy from the Sea
The New World
Poor Simon
Shy Jared

Thanks a lot for any comments, be harsh if you see any errors, because then i know what i did wrong!

 

[Experiencedguy]

Hi Cruel.

First bit of critical input: Most of us here are too lazy to do any researching. You need to provide a direct link to whatever you want us to read. Although, your topics are pretty much in my area of interest, I am one of those lazy members. I will keep you in mind though as I peruse through the stories. Also, your profile does not provide a link to your stories (easy to fix).

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Um...

I'm really shitty with computers... If anyone else sees this can they tell me how to make a link? please?
I feel really stupid right about now...

 

[sr71plt]

I think the easiest way to link is to key in the message box, go to your story in the story file, copy the url, and then insert that between the bracketed url slugs.

Thus:

http://www.literotica.com/s/poor-simon-ch-01

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Thank you!!!

Ok, HERE are my stories
http://www.literotica.com/s/poor-simon-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/shy-jared-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-bottom-tier
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-boy-from-the-sea-ch-01
http://www.literotica.com/s/the-new-world

 

[Experiencedguy]

You have nothing to worry about. With 25 posted stories (as of this writing), you have 10 red "H's". Your lowest score is 4.27, and your highest is 4.81. That means that 96.2% of people love that particular story. Just take your scores and be thrilled, don't worry about 'comments', or lack thereof.