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LWulf

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Title: Tales from The Bad Girl Bar - Chapter 1
Author: LWulf
Editor: YDB95 (note: additional self-editing was done after the fact)
Category: BDSM
Description: Family Values - Lashley auditions & Summer's 1st time on stage
Story tags:
  • Comedy/Serious
  • Non-Consent (light)
  • Bondage
  • Spanking
  • BDSM
  • M/f
  • F/f
    ...........
  • A play within a strip club
  • Mother (acted)
  • Father (acted)
  • Incest (acted - Domestic Discipline (non-sexual))
  • Exhibitionism/voyeurism
  • First time
    ...........
  • Oral sex (suggested)
  • Older man/young woman

Accompanying Illustrations:
Outside The Bad Girl Bar - Scene 1
Tales from The Bad Girl Bar - Scene 4


edit: ...and to the anonymous poster, I have NEVER considered myself normal. roflmao
 
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