criticism on the story "a dream come true"...

[persiancat]

I am a young mother and i find your story interesting, giving much food for thought.First, I would like to know if this story had happened indeed to one of the protagonists
and if so, did anybody got caught by the father? How he did react?Did the mother had to confess to her husband what happened? Did she ever feel sorry or regretted the event? Finally, can mothers
of young adolescent participate in the discussion and say her true confessions weather they were ever tempted or did what the heroin of this story did? And if they did, what was the eventual outcome in the mother-son relationship in the long run?

 

[Weird Harold]

I moved this thread from the story discussion circle to the "proper" place for feedback.