Couple watching another couple

[davidl304]

My girlfriend gets very turned on by the thought of watching another couple and being watched at the same time. Anyone writing a story like this, like a double date but no exhange of partners
David

 

[fifty5]

My girlfriend gets very turned on by the thought of watching another couple and being watched at the same time. Anyone writing a story like this, like a double date but no exhange of partners
David

Not actually a rare story line... In a car or a front room...

Have you (your girlfriend) any specific suggestions for the circumstances?

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[davidl304]

I think the encounter would be in a home or maybe start in a restaurant and then move to a home.
There would be some verbal interplay not just a silent observation through a car or home window.

 

[pop_54]

Hmmmmmmmm

Not only a common storyline but very common with unmarried couples the world over in real life I think, married couples as well at times, wife and I have bonked on the beach next to friends doing the same quite often.

That I think would be one of the favourite storylines here, a nice drunken mini orgy on the beach or somewhere similar. All doing stuff without embarrassment around each other.

Nothing wrong with a bit of swapping by the way, adds to the fun like hell

 

[fifty5]

I think the encounter would be in a home or maybe start in a restaurant and then move to a home.
There would be some verbal interplay not just a silent observation through a car or home window.

Like pop said, the plot isn't new, but then neither is 'boy meets girl, things go wrong, they get sorted" (with both nice and tragic versions of 'sorted'), yet that still works.

(Re)tell the storyline well and there will be people who like it...

IMHO

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[davidl304]

Thanks for the feedback, I think I will give my writing skills a try and see what I come up with.
David

 

[fifty5]

Thanks for the feedback, I think I will give my writing skills a try and see what I come up with.
David

Best wishes for your efforts, David.

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[fifty5]

I think I will give my writing skills a try

PS Let us know when and where we can read the results

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[pplwatching]

I wrote a story like this a few years back. It was written trying to explore a couple pillow-talking about the fantasy aspect of it rather than writing it as the experience itself. I tried to submit it here just a few days ago, but it didn't make it for some reason.

You can find it here

It would be fun to help with a story written from the perspective of actually being in that situation. Let me know if you need a review or any help.

 

[mck]

pplwatching I read that story you posted the link to. I t was very honest and very real..and quite hot. My husband and I have had very similar sessions and he was very like the reluctant guy in the story..so i say it is honest and open and real from a very personal viewpoint. I only found a few typos so i am not sure why it was turned down. I would love to know why because I think it would be a great addition to literotica. There is a lot of good writing on this site but I don't come across a lot of real feeling stories...ones that hit home what life is really like for a married couple. Your story did just that. Good going...and hey, maybe ask for why it was turned down.

 

[fifty5]

Thanks for the feedback, I think I will give my writing skills a try and see what I come up with.
David

Do read pplwatching's story, David. That does illustrate how a comparitively simple twist can turn that old, old plot into something worth reading (gud-un ppl!).

Do have a go at your version!

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[DianneD]

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Not sure if it would make a could story subject since there are a lot of those stories out there and I have read a lot of them. it is rather exciting in real life though. There is a couple that I know that let's me watch them have sex. I don't join in because the wife doesn't want me to she just likes the idea of me there in the room watching them do whatever and they are very erotic and it is quite a turn on for me as well as them. I have fucked the guy a few times without the wife knowing. Good luck on the story!

 

[A7inchPhildo]

My girlfriend gets very turned on by the thought of watching another couple and being watched at the same time. Anyone writing a story like this, like a double date but no exhange of partners
David

Tough story to write you need to be overly descriptive to make it erotic. Since there is no physical contact being exchanged as in a 4some. All you get to relate to the reader is verbal and visual, then contact amonge own partner. That could be confusing to the reader even if it is properly written.

My younger brother had a situation once that was different.

How or why I do not know how exactly this came about?

Some how while reroofing his home with a close friend of his. Him and his friend convinced thier wives to climb up on the back side of the house roof naked with them. I understand they had a large blanket with them But this was a 6/12 pitch roof. Now youth stupidity prevails here they are with thier clothes on the ground.
In the middle of boinking. I guess it was a thrill. Now they could hear, "Hello J**N, A**Y any one around? My sister inlaws mom was at the bottom of the ladder. Which they never heared her car on the other side of the house pull up.

Not only were they busted by the mother inlaw. They were on the roof and the clothes were on the ground. Plus here they were also with thier friends. Trust me they wanted to crawl under a stone and die. The best part is her mother is like the town news papper there is no secrets with her. This is how I know this to be true. No morals in this story he he!

But think next time who just might catch you doing the OMG! especially if others are involved.

I do not find that erotic but funny as all hell it could only be topped if she had brought some of her Nun friends along from the Church.