couple swpaing

pretty_lil_stranger said:
ROFL. You still haven't. Sorry dear. ;)

I am sort of interested in this poker game, though. How did it get started? Where is it taking place?

I had not got that far but a private room at a Las Vegas the couples have lost all there money in the casino and run up hotel debts the so this is for the owners pleasure they have to play until all debts are paid the losers have to work for the hotel as a escorts
If you want to work it up please do so
 
i dont know i still like the idea of two couples going camping and one thing leads to another.
 
nono i am simply saying i think that the camping idea would be a very good one.. oh and i like your avater aswell lol. :: hides his eyes :: oh boy.
 
Couple Swapping Idea:

Tina and Mike (names unimportant) have been married for ten years, ever since Tina turned 18. Tina was raised in a Catholic family and believed that she should save her virginity for her husband. She did so, and therefore he is the only man that she has ever fucked. They experiment together, though. They've done anal, a few different positions, a little bondage and some other fetish stuff they've seen online.

Mike's ex girlfriend comes back into his life. Not in any romantic sense, just that she appears one day and he greets her. Tina feels a little bothered at this, and broods about it for some time. She voices her worry and Mike tells her that it's okay, he loves Tina, nothing is going to spark up that old flame. Then Tina asks how sex with the ex was.

Okay girls, I know everyone has wondered and asked this question of their boyfriends/husbands. Was "she" better than me? Tina gets the same answer ALL of us do! "NO." But she's still bothered.

Mike, unlike most guys I know (not to try to make the males out there feel bad, you can't help it!) feels a little weird. He starts, for the first time in 10 years, to feel a little down about himself. He wonders how he compares to other men. On the one hand, he is happy that Tina likes him, happy that he's the only one Tina has ever been with, happy that Tina saved herself for him...but on the other hand, he wonders if she'd still be happy with him if she'd experienced more.

Tina is thinking to herself that she wonders what other men are like. She loves Mike, loves him to death, enjoys sex with him A LOT. But still she wonders..."what if..."

The two of them have a serious talk, discussing their feelings. They both think that Tina ought to have some more experience, to make both of them feel better. They start to decide what to do about it.

A local paper has some personal ads in it, for swingers. They bring it home and scan the ads, thinking about calling some. They end up calling a couple that sounds a lot like them, and meeting them at a restaraunt for dinner. The two couples hit it off, become instant friends, and are attracted to each other (mike to the other wife, tina to the other husband.) After dinner they get some ice cream and go to the park.

They talk about possibilities of sexual encounters between each of them. Tina confesses that the idea of seeing Mike with another woman, or him seeing her, scares her, and she would feel uncomfortable with it. They decide to go to a hotel, get two seperate rooms, and spend the night with each other.

So off they go. I'm picturing more of a romantic setting, a mock courtship, so to speak, with champagne and flowers and whispers in the ear. (For Tina, at least. She's pretty innocent and scared about this stuff.) Dunno what Mike and the other wife are up to!)

So they get jiggy with it. They spend the entire night together, after the sex they aren't allowed to run back to their mates, they have to stay and talk with the other person, get to know each other better. They sleep in the same big bed and shower together in the morning, as if it were a short affair they were having in younger days. After the hotel, the two couples leave with their husbands/wives, and go home, back to normal life.

The two couples remain friends, eating out together, going on outings together and camping trips and the like. Should they switch again sometimes? I'm not sure...

Chicklet
 
couple swapping

Chicklet's scenario is your typical "Group" or "Loving Wives" story after it has been feminized with all that touchy, feely baggage. Go for it, sweetheart. Let's see if you can improve on the form.

All of us fans of the above categories are always looking for a new slant on things.
 
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Axeltheswede said:
Chicklet's scenario is your typical "Group" or "Loving Wives" story after it has been feminized with all that touchy, feely baggage. Go for it, sweetheart. Let's see if you can improve on the form.

All of us fans of the above categories are always looking for a new slant on things.
you are so right

what about this

two girls go camping with one of the girls parents the daughter wakes up in the middle of the night to go to the bathroom or whatever and through the side of the parents ten she sees the shadow of her friend with her parents and watches as they rape the young girl in a frantic sexual threesome
 
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Unregistered said:
3 couple have fun in one house in same room
Are you not being a little mean to Unregistered who started this thread? (S)he wanted three couples and you are only offering two.
 
couple swapping

I have tried a three couple story in the past. The third couple seems to add confusion and little else. Another complication is the added length for character development.

One possible solution would be having the third couple as passive observers. Make them voyeurs. Or, resurrect that previous thread about the small penis guy. That couple is unwilling to expose his size.
 
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Axeltheswede said:
Go to the "Group" category, swing a dead cat, you'll hit six stories like this the first time around.

Nice twist though, Chicklet. Might be hard to do. Problem is, it could turn out like a murder mystery with the sex tacked on, or vice versa. Any ideas on how to integrate the two threads?


there's something incredibly post-modernist about a serial killer plucking off a bunch of swingers one-by-one. Something about a comment on how the modern, industrialized world separates sex from love and creation and turns an activity meant for life and renewal into one that breeds destruction of spirit and loss. But oh doesn't that sound depressing. But the good news is, it's modernism, so you can dress it up real pretty and make it LOOK nice and uplifting and sexy, and call all of that gloss part of your point about how difficult it is to find anything real these days. OK, enough of my flashback to my English classes. Chicklet, i like this idea, you write it and i'll deconstruct it.:D
 
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Axeltheswede said:
OK, you two. Meet somewhere in the middle and get a room!

No doubt, the experience would be grist for a hundred stories.


ditto.
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
Yeah, yeah, we all know how much you boys would like the post-meeting story. Keep it to yourselves. ;)

mm-hmm. don't act like you haven't already "written" it more than a few times yourself.


;)
 
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couple swapping

Interesting take from Fanzee. Take three swinging couples, kill them off one by one. Sound a little too familiar? It should. Isn't that the plot line for about a thousand B horror movies?

Crime (read sin) and punishment is not a big hit here on Lit. I posted an incest story a while back. "Ma and Her Outlaw Sons", in the incest category, brought that realization home for me. I had them get caught in the end. Half the feedbacks howled about how unfair that was. The other half begged for a sequel. They wanted a jailbreak so Ma could get poked in the ass by her boys.

We seem to like our stories fantasy rich and consequence free. And why not? The real world has enough consequences for everyone.

Sorry I went so far afield.
 
Re: couple swapping

Axeltheswede said:
Interesting take from Fanzee. Take three swinging couples, kill them off one by one. Sound a little too familiar? It should. Isn't that the plot line for about a thousand B horror movies?

Crime (read sin) and punishment is not a big hit here on Lit. I posted an incest story a while back. "Ma and Her Outlaw Sons", in the incest category, brought that realization home for me. I had them get caught in the end. Half the feedbacks howled about how unfair that was. The other half begged for a sequel. They wanted a jailbreak so Ma could get poked in the ass by her boys.

We seem to like our stories fantasy rich and consequence free. And why not? The real world has enough consequences for everyone.

Sorry I went so far afield.


don't apologize, you're making me wistful for my college days. I was an English major.:)

Consequences need not involve AUTHORITIES or commonly held ideas about justice. To me, punishments are far more weighty, when they involve states of being -- things the state cannot impose upon people. And just based on the tenor of this place, i would bet that you could put people in some pretty dark emotional, or even spiritual, prisons in your stories and get a much better response from Lit members.

What do you think?
 
I did think you would that’s why I sent it proved me right again
 
wow linnet i took alook at your website and it rocked my world you are quite the writer. ( an cute too )
 
did you guys ever do the chain story thing ? i would have liked to get in on this.
 
MrFrost said:
did you guys ever do the chain story thing ? i would have liked to get in on this.

Do you meen the story from each persons point of view if so the answer is yes if not then tell me more

love lin
 
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