Country Charm & City Slicker (Private)

Kuuroinochou

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.COUNTRY CHARM & CITY SLICKER.
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Writen Chronicle_Tenko & Kuuroinochou

Did this have to happen now? Did it always have to be an everyday occurance? Once again her parents had struck again. Some happless group had unknowingly gotten themselves invovled with her parents scandalous lives. Con-artists by nature, her mother and father had taken to the shaddy business when she was but a girl. Now at a ripe age of eighteen they were still at it. Lord only knew how much money they owed various factions and individuals alike.

Due to the money owed, Lelana Collins had been reviered as a troublesome girl. Although this was far from the truth, an old hag of a lady, more correctly known as her aunt would travel from her comfortable living arrangements to take care of troublesome business with Lelana and her family. "This is the fifth time this week. Do they ever quit?" came the voice of her aunt as Lelana followed silently beside her.

The older woman was at a loss for what to do with Lana's parents and so turned her attentions to Lana instead. "You! You're going to work for that money they owe me. I don't care about the other people in this town. But I'm burning gas coming back and forth to save your hide. I'm losing money in my business and social life, I can't keep taking care of you and mama along with covering up the messes you're parents make." The woman howled.

Lana remained silent a frown creased diligently on her brow and a simple pout to her lips.

"What do you have to say for yourself?" Her aunt spat as they stopped in front of her car.

"Nothing. I am not responsible for my parents' deeds but it is quite obvious you're going to make me pay for it regardless." Lana huffed she didn't bother elaborating on the situation, she knew when she was in her right to speak or not.

"I'm taking you back to your home. I want you to pack all your belongings you'll be coming with me." With that said they were on their way.

At Lana's small country home, her grandmother was siting on the porch swing relaxing. Upon seeing her grandchild and her own daughter the old woman arched a brow in alarm. "What are you doing here?"

"Mama, you're daughter has lost her mind marrying that man. Look at what he has done to her life. She's out all the time, never coming home, and this child, she's bound to turn tricks just like her."

Lana snarled, "I'm not a slut and neither is my mother!"

"Shut up and pack!" the woman screamed slapping Lana across the face. This got a reaction out of the grandmother who stood to protect Lana from any further blows.

However, Lana wasn't about to stick around and be treated like so much garbage. Pushing past her grandmother and her bitter aunt, Lana was well on her way in a full run down the path and further into the small township that was her world. She would eventually find herself at a pub, where most of the locals gathered to sing, dance and entertain each after a long days work. Lana found a booth in the back where she order a simple lemonade and watched as a few of the local danced to some music on the worn dance floor.
 
Yes that is the worst pick up line in the history of them.

I had been sitting in this crummy bar all day. It was cramped and small. And full of that cozy feeling. Not a proper place at all. At home in the city I'd be lining shots up. There'd be two girls making out on the dance floor. Maybe more. And some big titted slut with shooters walking around trying to get suckers to give her money for a look at her cleavage.

Here I had some angry wet-back or something. Pouring me drinks. With his cowboy hat and boots. I sat sipping my beer waiting for anything to really perk my interest. And then there she was. Walking in ordering a lemonade and crouching in the corner. Almost looked frightened.

Just my type.

I took the girl's drink from the confused server and swung off my chair. My dress shirt and Armani pants flowing out behind me, and walked up with her drink. I sat in the booth seat across from her and placed her lemonade with a small clink on the table.

"So little miss country. Got anything to say to Mr. Rock and Roll?"
 
First person view

Here he comes, I spotted him the moment I walked in but hopefully he wouldn't come my way. He looked like something straight out of a movie. Rich and spoiled.

When he came over with my drink I arched a simple brow at him and then eyed my drink.

"So little miss country. Got anything to say to Mr. Rock and Roll?"

"Yeah, rock n' roll off..." I snorted at him and took my drink. While any other day I would have corrected his mannerisms toward women but today was not the best day.

Sighing I quickly took a long drink of lemonade. That always hit the spot, sitting back and crossing my legs demurely I took in a moment to look the stranger over. Alright so he probably didn't deserve such a recieving but I didn't owe him anything. Leaning forward I leaned my cheek against my hand smiling impishly as if I knew something he didn't. Which perhaps I did... "What's your name? Usually if you want to get to know someone you'd introduce yourself in hopes that they'd offer their name."
 
"Yeah, rock n' roll off..."

Bristled a little. But she was the only good looking thing in this little inbred town.

I watched her drink. Her Lips sipping at the straw. So very pretty. I was imagining how they'd look on a different straw for a minute But I downplayed it.

"What's your name? Usually if you want to get to know someone you'd introduce yourself in hopes that they'd offer their name."


See was that so hard. I thought the country folk would be polite. I'm Maxwell. Most folks call me Max.

And who are you? Other than the only really good looking girl in this town.
 
"Lelana Colins." I said softly. "Lana is easier on the ears.." I smiled but looked away he had very nice eyes. They didn't lie about those city boys, their eyes were always predatorial.

Allowing myself time to regroup I met his eyes with my own golden orbs. "So what brings you to this hick town? Its not the scenary I'm sure." I spoke up noting how down trodden most of my folks looked. Definately not the scenary.

[[bed time...for me.]]
 
"Lelana Colins." "Lana is easier on the ears.."

"So what brings you to this hick town? Its not the scenary I'm sure."



I watched her speak. Those were succulent lips. And her eyes were amazing. Like Little jewels. Sparkles. No They were like stars. Twinkling against a night sky.

"Well My dad is here for some business meeting. Picking up a maid or something. Or Buying land. He always tells me that Land is where it's at."

I took another pull at my beer and Ordered up a fresh one. I snuck another quick glance down her body. Healthy. Curved in all the right places. And a deep tan. Likely the only good thing people got out of this dump.

"So that's an awesome tan. You hit the beach, Or you work outside a lot?"
 
I managed to stiffle a giggle acompanied with a blush though a little color did reach my cheeks. "Actually I'm naturally tanned...with a little help from the late summer rays." I added sipping more of my drink I sat back a bit to take in his features.

While I wasn't much of a city I knew a little bit about his world. Though girls on that side were flashy and well preened. I could hardly compare. Looking the part of Daisy Dukes, with my cut off jeans -made shorts- a white fishnet top and a bandana to hide from the heat I guess I looked pretty dull to him but his coming over had been for some reason. (Clicky)

Flashing golden brown eyes to him I watched him closely. My grandma had warned me about city slickers. How they only came this way for fun and dumped all there troubles in a town like this.

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Meanwhile, Lelana's aunt was having a fit she couldn't believe the trouble she was having. She had meant to bring Lana with her for the meeting with her new employer but with her running off as she did there was no hope for it.

Finding the hotel of which the man had asked to meet her she was escorted to the dinning area where he sat. She took a moment to look the man over, he was no doubt quite handsome. "Sir." she spoke softly reaching a hand out to shake his before seating herself.

"I'm terribly sorry for the wait, something came up that required Lelana's attentions so I was unable to bring her today." Shuffling around in her purse she pulled out some papers."These are the papers you sent me to have her sighed. As you can see all legal issues resolved, she signed them and as soon as she returns I'll have her on the first train into the city." Like hell she would get a ride with her.
 
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Max/ and Dad.

"Actually I'm naturally tanned...with a little help from the late summer rays."

"Well They do pay off. You've got great skin. Love the look."

He stared a bit. And wondered if she had any tan lines. He bet she didn't.

"So what do you do for fun around here. Sides hang out in country bars and sip lemonade."

Max took another pull of his Beer. And signalled the waitress for a fresh Bud. He didn't mind flashing some cash. It usually helped him.

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The Senior Maxwell eyed this woman. He was looking for a live in caretaker for his son. The boy was wild and stupid. But he had a knack for people. If he could ever lose that I'm a big shot attitude. Still the boy needed care. He was being given an entire house, and without a woman's touch the place would become worse than the frat in Animal House.

"Sir."

The old woman. He feigned politeness. And let her shake his hand like an equal. Where was this girl he was hiring. No matter.

"I assume the papers are in order. Everything is set on your end. And the Girl is where?"

"I'm terribly sorry for the wait, something came up that required Lelana's attentions so I was unable to bring her today."

She shuffled in her purse a very nice Italian bag he noticed.

"These are the papers you sent me to have her sighed. As you can see all legal issues resolved, she signed them and as soon as she returns I'll have her on the first train into the city."

"Excellent. See that she is. 1565 Summerside Acres. It's the blue one off campus by the man made lake. Davis Lake. Named after me. We own the land."

"She'll have one day a week off, and we'll send her salary to you." He made a short huff. Air rushing through his sinuses. "I'm amazed she signed this. Oh well nothing is unpurchasable. Our business is concluded."

Maxwell Davis Sr. walked out offering the handshake again. Soon he was in his car going over deals to buy a pork bellies plant.
 
Lelana smiled drinking the rest of her lemande and looking around the room. "I would imagine not much. I go to school just up the way but with schools ending at 12th grade here I can't hope to go to college."

She sighed a bit flicking her hair over her shoulder. "My aunt is selling my services to some rich smoe...so I'm leaving for the city today." she announced rather miffed. It was then she looked at is cloths and him closely realizing her hatred of city people like him. Coming into her town and assuming they could just buy anything. She frowned then suddenly standing to her feet. "Are you trying to buy me off for a quick screw?" she accused suddenly the shift in her temper was quite surprising but the fire she held was even more alluring if not a little put off.

"Cause if that's the case you can go screw yourself. I'm not some loose piece of ass." She snuffed and slide past him in the booth, the action brushing her round ass against his lap. She slipped from him and made her way toward the exit. No she would not show him a good time, not at all!
 
"I would imagine not much. I go to school just up the way but with schools ending at 12th grade here I can't hope to go to college."

In his head he thought how much of a shame that was. She'd be the perfect sorority toy. He'd join any Frat she picked out anyway.

He watcher her Sigh. Her chest heaved. Her hands Deftly Flicking some stray hair back over her shoulder.


"My aunt is selling my services to some rich smoe...so I'm leaving for the city today."


He had this aw fuck thought about buying and selling people. He flashed money but he didn't try to buy anyone. It was one thing he didn't like about his dad. He watched her face look him Up and Down. Then twist in an ugly sneer.

Are you trying to buy me off for a quick screw?" "Cause if that's the case you can go screw yourself. I'm not some loose piece of ass."


Max watched her get up felt her ass glide over the silk of his pants. He couldn't resist if she was already pissed He put his hand in her pocket. She was pissed give her a reason.

"Hey wait. You even going to explain."

He got up to follow her, But a number of bar patrons thought that maybe he should sit back down. He waited on his beer a bunch of cowboys glaring at him.

"Damn. There goes the Only cute thing in this town. I should be getting back soon. Dad may just strand me here I'm 5 minutes late"

He paid and tossed a decent tip on the table. Then walked out the door to go back to the city.
 
Finally free of the rich kid, Lelana headed back to her grandmothers. Perhaps her aunt was looking for her perhaps not. Either way she had to return back home and cook a grand fiest for her grandmother. Today was the last day they'd be together.

Upon arriving to her homestead she found her grandmother sitting on the porch, her aunt was just driving up. "Where were you? You were suppose with me..." Her aunt came up to her taking her roughly by the arm and dragging her into the house. "Hurry up and pack your things. You'll be leaving a little earlier than usual..."

Lana, sneered at her aunt pushing the woman off her as she hurried to get her things together. She didn't have much time to do much esle as she came outside with her bags packed. Setting them down she went back into the house to check if she had forgotten something. Reaching into her back pocket to think she only vaguely felt something there, "Hmm?" Pulling out the object she looked it over. "A ring..." she commented and turned it around in her hand. It was quite pretty obviously a rich man's ring. Then her thoughts clicked, that rich city slicker. He had touched her ass on the way... it must have been his. Stuffing the ring back in her pocket she would deal with that later.

Since she was going to the city it would be a little easier to find out who he was and return the stupid trinket to him. If all else failed she would pawn it for some quick cash. Her thoughts were interrupted by her aunt who hurried to usher her to the car. They would be headed for the train station where she was to be picked up by her employer's driver.
 
Max And Senior.

Maxwell Jr. walked down the road. Idly kicking a beer can with him. He was almost to the car. Could see his father getting out the door. Why were there Two cars. His father's Limo and a Camaro.

"Son. Graduation and entering University is a big step. And a man should be prepared to take care of himself. So I'm giving you these Keys. One is to that fine Camaro over there. The other is for a house on University Row. Your things have been moved already."


"Thanks dad." Max knew that anything else was to be cut short. Fi his dad was giving him a gift, a firm handshake a steely look and a thank you was all thjat was expected. Even lavish gifts like these.

"Now you're driving yourself I have one last little thing to pick up in this town."

Max Senior looked at his son's hand in his grip. Felt over the knuckles.

"Where's your ring? Your graduation Ring?"

Max checked his hand. Then his Pocket. He fumbled through his shirt and his pants.

"Fuck. I must have left it in the bar or something. I'll go get it. I can't leave without that ring."

Max sped off. He was sure he knew what house he had just recieved, and he needed to get that ring back. And he hoped to talk to that cutie again.
 
On the drive to the train station, Lelana watched as the scenary flew by. She had her mind on other things rather than the current at hand. She was partically excited about going to the city and partically nervous. So many buildings, so many people, loud noises and plenty of smog, would she get used to all those things. Could she really be a maid for some uppity snob?

Coming past the familar pub, she reached out to grab her aunt's arm. "Please stop! I want to say goodbye to Bob." Her aunt spared her a glare but stopped the car snarling.

"Make it quick your train leaves soon."

Without a word from her she jumped out of the car and rushed into the pub. There she saw Bob the barkeep smiling as he had though she wouldn't return. "Hey lil' sis, I see you got that old fart to drop you in for a quick visit. You just let me know if you need anything. Anything at all..." pulling up a napkin he wrote his number down. "You can call me at the bar anytime."

"Thanks Bob. Um..." fishing in her pocket she pulled out the ring. "Have you seen that city slicker around? He left this and I wanted to give it back."

Bob looked the ring over whistling. "Pretty expensive, I think you should keep it." chuckling he thought a moment but shook his head. "Sorry luv, but I haven't seen him since you left. Hold on to it maybe you can get in touch with him in the city. If that fells pawn it."

Lana chuckled, "I was thinking the same thing. Anyway, if you see him tell him was looking for him." with that she said her goodbyes to the patrons and hurried to the car. Just as she was pulling out a car was coming in.
 
Max.

Max watched the other car pull away as he sqeualed to a stop. This baby had some horses on it. It pulled in front of the bar. He left tread as he got out.

He burst through the door. "DID ANYBODY SEE A GRAD RING"

He made motions with his hands frantic like people had never seen a ring before.

"It's gold Kinda squishy because it's pure, With a sapphire in the middle, a blue gem. and it has a falcon coming out in a pattern behind the stone."

He was stared at. "C'mon someone must have seen it."

He searched all over. At his table the bar. Finally he offered a reward and his cell number for someone who had seen it. He got into his car and drove him. Thinking about that girl.

Maybe she had it. If he ever saw her again.
 
Lelana was finally at the train station preparing for her departure to a new home. She would be picked up by her employer's (Max's dad) driver and taken to his home for introductions. She didn't know that she would be working for the son but then she didn't even know who she was working for to begin with.

Stepping out of the car she gathered her bags and said her farewells to her aunt. Though she knew the old hag would keep in touch with her simply to make sure she was doing her thing.

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Meanwhile, at the pub, Bob decided he would cut the city slicker some slack and called the number. "If you're looking for your ring Lelana has it, she said she'd get it to you one she got to where she was at. You could give me your address and I'll be sure to get it to her, or if you think you're fast enough, she's at the train station heading to the city. If you go fast you might catch her she left just before you got here."
 
Max / Senior

Kuuroinochou said:

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"If you're looking for your ring Lelana has it, she said she'd get it to you one she got to where she was at. You could give me your address and I'll be sure to get it to her, or if you think you're fast enough, she's at the train station heading to the city. If you go fast you might catch her she left just before you got here."


Max heard 'fast' and Jetted out. He wasn't actually sure what his new address would be. A side note of not grabbing it off his father. He planned on going down to that row of new houses down University Row in Summerside and just trying his key in a few locks till he found a dark house that it worked in.

He hopped in his Camaro and sped off towards the station. It took some skilful driving but he was there before disembark. He rushed to find parking, Checking his ticket and running into the station. Just as the train left. He hollered but it took off. He could almost see the girl in the window But he didn't think she could hear him.

It was likely for the best. At that moment he could have made a sailor blush.

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Maxwell senior had a picture with his chauferr of the girl he was picking up. Told she was wearing a bandana and Daisy Dukes. he was sure that would go over well with his son. He had to give this girl a change of clothes.

"Giles. Have Antwaan ready we'll get this girl some new clothes as a starting bonus. Take her shopping a moment."
 
The ride into the city was uneventful, she had her meal during the ride and got to chat it up with a few of the passangers. Through it the train came to a halt and she grabbed her bags stepping off the train. A man holding a signed waved her down and she walked over smiling. "Hello. I'm Lelana the new housemaid."
 
Maxwell Senior

Maxwell watched his chauferr bring the girl down. She was gorgeous. Even in those hick clothes. Her skin and complexion were quite flawless. He almost thought of keeping her for himself. But deals were deals, And this one had a signed contract as to her terms of work.

"Good day miss. I'm Maxwell Johnathon Davis." He left out the senior for her. It made him feel old.

"I'm to be your employer but you'll be cleaning and keeping my son's home. You'll have your own quarters and use while he is in school. It's simple work keeping a house, cleaning and cooking." Maxwell talked as he looked this girl over. Her photo did her no justice. "But first. As a sort of Hiring bonus I've arranged to have clothes made for you. It may be fine in the country but here we expect you to dress better."

He waited as his chauferr put her bags away and opened the door for them both. He got in after her and sat on the ooposite end of the pit. Despite the girls appearance he got on the phone quickly conducting other business.

"Is there anything you wish to know before you begin?"
 
Lelana learned easily that this man was all about his business and appearances. Being wisked swiftly back into the car she watched him as he conducted his business though managed to keep up with what he was doing in person. Trying to be as professional as she could she crossed her legs suddenly feeling a bit put out simply because she had on cut-off shorts and a not so modest top.

"Is cooking and cleaning all I'm being paid for?" she asked bluntly. God she hoped that was it, cause she really wasn't about to shroke some pampered boy's ego under the sheets."
 
Maxwell Senior

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Lelana learned easily that this man was all about his business and appearances. Being wisked swiftly back into the car she watched him as he conducted his business though managed to keep up with what he was doing in person. Trying to be as professional as she could she crossed her legs suddenly feeling a bit put out simply because she had on cut-off shorts and a not so modest top.

"Is cooking and cleaning all I'm being paid for?" she asked bluntly. God she hoped that was it, cause she really wasn't about to shroke some pampered boy's ego under the sheets."

Mawell looked at her. The unspoken words, cutting his thoughts. He frowned but guessed that the earth thoughts came with earthy people.

"Yes Just cooking and cleaning." He went back to the phone talking through a a merger with one of his puppet corporations.

Soon they arrived at Antwaans. He'd see the little ragamuffin dressed properly. Before she was presented to his son.

"Now Antwaan here does all manner of uniforms and tailoring And he has a wide selection. Just have it put on my account."
 
Sighing she got out of the car a bit settled at not having to be more than the maid. Inside the shop she let the man work taking in her measurements. Despite his professionalism he seemed to take a bit more of an intrest then he should have.

Ignoring it for the time being she left his back room to shop in the rest of the store. Gathering clothing and accessories that were of her taste. She would have her uniform made by this man as well, which she found to be impressive.

Once done with her shopping she return to the car, dressed in a typical pinstrip dress suit, pumps and leggings.
 
Max/Driver

Max drove home. Finding the large colonial style home. He was pretty sure it would be this one. In summerside acres. Next to the lake. It was the biggest one on the block.

"What is it with dad and mansions. This thing takes up like two lots. I bet it's this one. 1565 Summerside Acres."

Max walked up and tried the lock. The door swung open.

"Yep. I know dads taste. And what is with the columns. I'm gonna walk into each one of these looking for coffee in the morning. And how in gods name am I supposed to keep it clean."

At the mention of the word Clean a little Disc came out and began to vaccum the floor. Max jumped and then quieted. "Oh A roomba. Neat."

He went back outside. Parking his car in the Four car garage. He went upstairs. He needed a shower. And maybe sleep. He left a small trail of clothes to the bathroom, And showered quickly. He figured that there were auto locks. All the places had them. So he dropped off.
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The driver was silent. Commenting only on mundane subjects. He told Lelana that the suit looked good, But mannish. He stopped to buy her food. Expecting that there would be none. They hit five places. Bringing home, A $250 sushi platter. An entire roast chicken dinner with Salads, Collard greens, potatoes and gravy. A vegitarian ensemble. Two gourmet Pizza's. And a roast Lamb souvla platter.

The driver pulled up to 1565 Summerside acres. The sun was going down past the lake and glowed a brilliant Fire orange. He opened the door And walked her to the friont door where he left everything.

"Your Keys madam. And the Starter. We will deliver a van for you tomorrow, and your quarters are in the Small out stay of the east wing. Likely the young master is not home. Otherwise the car would be in the lot. Use the main door and feel free to use the house while he is out. The list of chores and helps are on your bed. Good night miss."
 
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Lelana nodded and bid farewell to the driver as he drove off down the road. With light still emitting from the setting sun she hurriedly got into the house and put up all the food bought prior. She gathered her bags about her and went upstairs to her quarters, to say she wasn't impressed would be lying.

The room was definately decked out for the wealthy but she was almost certain her employer's room would have far more elaborate decour. With a sigh she began to put away her clothing she bought a long with the cloths from her country lifestyle she found that not even half of what she owned and was allowed to purchase today made up the room left over for storage.

No matter it just left more room for her and less to clean up later. She took the time to explore the adjoining bathroom, a beautiful one at that. Smiling she thought perhaps taking a hot bath would be in order, after all she'd been out all day and hadn't been able to clean up properly, it wouldn't do for her new employer to see her in such a filthy state.

Stripping out of her cloths she began running some hot water in the bath, adding bubblebath to the water. Snagging a towel from the towel rack she wrapped it around her and left the room, deciding a quick run of the house would be in order. Taking the paper with her duties on them from the bed she read them off as she walked the house once over and made sure all the doors were locked before returning to shut the bath off. Submerging herself within the warm waters she sighed contently the liquid always a warm welcome to a relaxing moment alone.

The whole time she lay there, she wondered what kind of employer she had. Perhaps he were nice and handsome. Maybe he'd take a liking to her easily enough and give her an easy time of her work. Maybe he was a tyrant and cause her turmoil, make her do things against her will... she shuddered at the second thought, hoping he was a nice gentleman and wouldn't abuse her services in that manner.
 
Maxwell heard water running. *Who the hell was here. And why would they be taking a bath.* He got up still only in his boxers and sporting wood from the highly erotically charged dream about the cutie he met in that little town today.

Max got out of bed and began to creep towards the running water. Passing downstairs and hearing the sound of the water leaving. he walked to the door. grabbing a rolling pin from the kitchen. He knew Blunt worked really well.

He walked towards the new additions. He was not sure what these rooms were for or why they were so far off. But he was curious. He saw the door just open and the steam rising from the bath.

he jumped in, Arm raised ready to strike whoever was in his house for whatever reason. And dropped the rollingpin square on his foot as he saw the girl from today. Her hair now free and long. Beautiful. His penis swelled again seeing the reason for it's current state nude in the tub. Max felt the pain of the pin hitting his toes and he hopped. His toes feeling squashed, His dick flopping comically in his shorts. Swearing loudly. The only thjought in his head was Oh shit. Now I've really done it.
 
Lelana jumped turning to find the source of the noise. When she looked up to find that City Slicker from the bar earlier that day she almost had to scream. In fact she did. Jumping out of the tub she quickly grabbed a towel wrapping it around her and went for the rolling pin to swip at the peeping tom. "GET OUT GET OUT GET OUT!! You perv... you voyuer... get out get out!" she screamed again and swung the pin wildly again.

She had bad aim as it were and was spinning the pin around just to back him out of the bathroom. He got pushed into the common room where she followed after him. Swinging again, her towel lost grip and fell to the ground. Still swinging she hadn't noticed until she felt her nipples perk up from the cool air hitting their wetness. "Ah!" screaming she huddled down on the ground covering herself up. Finding anything of value, she started tossing it across the room at the pervert, all with screams and curses on her lips. "Get out!" she wailed and almost broke into tears at being seen so suddenly.
 
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