Could you answer a question?

[Carl East]

Could anyone out there help me please. I want to seperate the paragraph's in this tale, so that the reader knows it's going from one character to another. How do you do that?


Incest Urges of a Nymphomaniac Ch5

Sophia awoke the next morning feeling sticky, and tried to remember the dream she’d had the night before. Once again she knew it was an erotic one, but the details were very fuzzy. When she tried to get up she found her pussy was a bit sore, and decided to take a bath before going down stairs.

Sophia’s mother was washing the dishes in the sink when Brian grabbed her from behind. He playfully patted her butt with one hand, and squeezed her waist with the other.

“Morning son, you look wide awake,” she said, as he sat down.

“I was awake most of the night. I just couldn’t stop thinking about yesterday,” he replied.

His mother smiled as the memory returned, and knew exactly what he meant. This family had always been close, but now thanks mainly to Sophia’s accident there was an intimacy that transcended close. Brian’s mother turned to ask if he wanted a cup of coffee, and smiled when she saw Brian holding his huge cock, and stroking it suggestively.

Sophia felt much better after that soak, and decided to make her self some breakfast. When she approached the kitchen however, she could hear groans of pleasure coming from inside. Opening the door just enough to peek, Sophia was both shocked and surprisingly turned on by what she was witnessing.

Thx

Carl

 

[Guest]

Carl,

I'd do this...


Incest Urges of a Nymphomaniac Ch5

Sophia awoke the next morning feeling sticky, and tried to remember the dream she’d had the night before. Once again she knew it was an erotic one, but the details were very fuzzy. When she tried to get up she found her pussy was a bit sore, and decided to take a bath before going down stairs.

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Sophia’s mother was washing the dishes in the sink when Brian grabbed her from behind. He playfully patted her butt with one hand, and squeezed her waist with the other.

“Morning son, you look wide awake,” she said, as he sat down.

“I was awake most of the night. I just couldn’t stop thinking about yesterday,” he replied.

His mother smiled as the memory returned, and knew exactly what he meant. This family had always been close, but now thanks mainly to Sophia’s accident there was an intimacy that transcended close. Brian’s mother turned to ask if he wanted a cup of coffee, and smiled when she saw Brian holding his huge cock, and stroking it suggestively.

#

Sophia felt much better after that soak, and decided to make her self some breakfast. When she approached the kitchen however, she could hear groans of pleasure coming from inside. Opening the door just enough to peek, Sophia was both shocked and surprisingly turned on by what she was witnessing.

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That's how it's done in proper manuscript format, but without the double spacing between the paragraphs.

That's just how I do it, anyway.

Lou

 

[Carl East]

Re: Re: Could you answer a question?

That's how it's done in proper manuscript format, but without the double spacing between the paragraphs.

That's just how I do it, anyway.

Lou

Thank you, I thought it would be something like that.

Carl

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Re: Could you answer a question?

Thank you, I thought it would be something like that.

Carl

Pleasure.

 

[lewdandlicentious]

Carl,

Something I've seen, and used is this:



Incest Urges of a Nymphomaniac Ch5

Sophia awoke the next morning feeling sticky, and tried to remember the dream she’d had the night before. Once again she knew it was an erotic one, but the details were very fuzzy. When she tried to get up she found her pussy was a bit sore, and decided to take a bath before going down stairs.

* (Centred)

Sophia’s mother was washing the dishes in the sink when Brian grabbed her from behind. He playfully patted her butt with one hand, and squeezed her waist with the other.

“Morning son, you look wide awake,” she said, as he sat down.

“I was awake most of the night. I just couldn’t stop thinking about yesterday,” he replied.

His mother smiled as the memory returned, and knew exactly what he meant. This family had always been close, but now thanks mainly to Sophia’s accident there was an intimacy that transcended close. Brian’s mother turned to ask if he wanted a cup of coffee, and smiled when she saw Brian holding his huge cock, and stroking it suggestively.


* (Centred)


Sophia felt much better after that soak, and decided to make her self some breakfast. When she approached the kitchen however, she could hear groans of pleasure coming from inside. Opening the door just enough to peek, Sophia was both shocked and surprisingly turned on by what she was witnessing.





Similar, but different.

I've seen that in books.

 

[Guest]

Carl,

Something I've seen, and used is this:



Incest Urges of a Nymphomaniac Ch5

Sophia awoke the next morning feeling sticky, and tried to remember the dream she’d had the night before. Once again she knew it was an erotic one, but the details were very fuzzy. When she tried to get up she found her pussy was a bit sore, and decided to take a bath before going down stairs.

* (Centred)

Sophia’s mother was washing the dishes in the sink when Brian grabbed her from behind. He playfully patted her butt with one hand, and squeezed her waist with the other.

“Morning son, you look wide awake,” she said, as he sat down.

“I was awake most of the night. I just couldn’t stop thinking about yesterday,” he replied.

His mother smiled as the memory returned, and knew exactly what he meant. This family had always been close, but now thanks mainly to Sophia’s accident there was an intimacy that transcended close. Brian’s mother turned to ask if he wanted a cup of coffee, and smiled when she saw Brian holding his huge cock, and stroking it suggestively.


* (Centred)


Sophia felt much better after that soak, and decided to make her self some breakfast. When she approached the kitchen however, she could hear groans of pleasure coming from inside. Opening the door just enough to peek, Sophia was both shocked and surprisingly turned on by what she was witnessing.





Similar, but different.

I've seen that in books.

Yes, that's often the way it's presented in books, but manuscripts go off to the publisher the way I showed it.

However, your suggestion could be better, as it is the way it is presented to the reader.

Now you've just confused the issue.

Katie-Lou