could someone give me some help with this im kinda stumped....?

[kingem125]

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1)this is a rap song about bdsm and I'm saying I'm the master and the slave.. I'm a switch... but i would make a bit of a better Dom i personally feel...also its trying to make a point against/about the misconceptions and legal issues associated with bdsm.....

2)its inspired by the song freak bitch by boondox

3) is it good far...? do the lyrics have a good flow to them..?now could someone help me continue where i left off... i want the next line to say something to the effect of why would you discriminate/hate me for what I'm into and what if i did the same thing back to you... also that there wasting there time because i will still do what i want to regardless of what they say...

4)could someone give me some sources / resources to help me gain more knowledge of every aspect of bdsm.......


here are my lyrics so far:

this beat is a banger it goes hard like when i bang her, rip it out with a hanger in anger i never thought i would be into stranger things,rings gagin no gaspin, stop askin me,just do it your f***ing self I'm tuckin it below the belt you ever felt the rusty blade i grabbed it from the shelf ,i do it all, my self no one else you can't run when you tied down with the belt, i just never felt... never delt somethin so....hated approximated only to decimate defecate in my face desecrate me make me crack that i ask, love seein the leather masked master lookin back, better do what i asked or your gettin it back but you ant comin back from that session, don't need a gat to teach you a lesson I'm guessin you love it when your screamin and moanin,and groanin for, me to stop when i top form you pretty face the tears just drop and wont stop when I'm beatin down now you with a crop, treatin you like used to mop the floor,you seem to scream for more,sure no word is safe look me in my mother f***ing face,I'm so sadistic and sadomasochistic,you asked for this its a power trip, i slit my wrists,and I slip into a trance,i just cant stop,not when i enter ya with the enema,i know I'm sending ya in to a rage i can see it on your face your such a disgrace,do you love it how does it taste,only moving with a fast pace,can i have a taste,is this love or is this hate....


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[kingem125]

people skip #4

 

[Stella_Omega]

You can edit posts here. If you want to delete your rap you can.

Your sex life is your sex life. Lots of people feel entitled to shove their sex life in other people's faces, but it's not such a good idea. With a little common sense, you won't face discrimination for your sexual preferences, simply because you can keep them private.

Discrimination is when you get stopped by the cops for the crime of walking while black. Or when you cannot marry the person you love because they are the same sex as you are.

I'm not sure what kind of discrimination you feel you've experinced about BDSM. Make sure that your sessions are consensual and your partner leaves happy-- don't forget aftercare, that helps.

 

[Netzach]

OR, as Dan Savage says, move.

Yes NYC, as an example, is expensive, but if you want it badly enough, you can live somewhere where even now, as commercialized as it is - everyone truly truly does not give a rat's ass what you do to get attention. You'd have to try really hard to get people to look, stop, stare, or comment.

 

[Etoile]

this beat is a banger it goes hard like when i bang her, rip it out with a hanger in anger i never thought i would be into stranger things,rings gagin no gaspin, stop askin me,just do it your f***ing self I'm tuckin it below the belt you ever felt the rusty blade i grabbed it from the shelf ,i do it all, my self no one else you can't run when you tied down with the belt, i just never felt... never delt somethin so....hated approximated only to decimate defecate in my face desecrate me make me crack that i ask, love seein the leather masked master lookin back, better do what i asked or your gettin it back but you ant comin back from that session, don't need a gat to teach you a lesson I'm guessin you love it when your screamin and moanin,and groanin for, me to stop when i top form you pretty face the tears just drop and wont stop when I'm beatin down now you with a crop, treatin you like used to mop the floor,you seem to scream for more,sure no word is safe look me in my mother f***ing face,I'm so sadistic and sadomasochistic,you asked for this its a power trip, i slit my wrists,and I slip into a trance,i just cant stop,not when i enter ya with the enema,i know I'm sending ya in to a rage i can see it on your face your such a disgrace,do you love it how does it taste,only moving with a fast pace,can i have a taste,is this love or is this hate....

Is the part I bolded supposed to make me think of abortion?

 

[kingem125]

The "rip it out with a hanger" part was not susposed to be an abortion reference... It was referring to the one sub,bdsm session I was in and the guy ripped the nipple/ body clamps off of me using an un bent metal wire type of hanger and he was like shut the hell up because I was at his house when we had our only so far bdsm session... And he was pissed off towards the end because his sister was saying we were being too loud and he got in trouble....Alos Etolie if that's you in your (tell me if im wrong here)what I think is called an avatar pic.... Then you are a really
Cute girl...

 

[Stella_Omega]

so you meant "rip them off" not "rip it out."

 

[kingem125]

so you meant "rip them off" not "rip it out."

Yeah your totally right but out works a bit better, you know it flows better this way....

 

[Stella_Omega]

Yeah your totally right but out works a bit better, you know it flows better this way....

but it means abortion.

how about "rip em off wit a hanger."

That's also called a zipper. if that helps.