BobbyLaker
Just startin' out
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Trying to wrap up my first story and struggling a little with the very end.
Do you think this is too corny a final sentence albeit you've no knowledge of the context and the preceding fireworks
?
And, thus, they slept until, hours later, they awoke, fulfilled.
All feedback appreciated, good, bad or indifferent.
Ta muchly,
Bobby
Do you think this is too corny a final sentence albeit you've no knowledge of the context and the preceding fireworks
And, thus, they slept until, hours later, they awoke, fulfilled.
All feedback appreciated, good, bad or indifferent.
Ta muchly,
Bobby