Copy editing requested for chain story

CopperSkink

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My "Derrick at the Bar" series is continuing for another ten chapters or more, and any assistance offered on cleaning up minor ("major" would be accepted if vanity didn't rule out any such possibility) hiccups that occur.

The piece will continue along the same timeline and place as the first five chapters (link availible in my signature), and each subsequent chapter is expected to exceed ten thousand words each, though they've spanned thirty > forty before. First-person narritive from a male in his early twenties in a town of twenty-five thousand by the beach.

Genre/themes include romance, incest between siblings, dating, engagement, marriage, consensual sex, male/female (sometimes many) female/female, (also sometimes many), angst drama, shameless sex, icky lovey dovey sex, sex in the missionary position between consenting male and female, and possibly some dirty talk ("please put your hand under my skirt, but for the love of God don't look").

Content/literary editing is welcome for those that have the time and the will to spare such comments, but I already have at least one person keeping an eye out for any plot holes.

Payment is offered in the form of advice and suggestions on what yarn to use for knitting a sock or a sweater for a loved one, possibly discounts at a leading yarn store. Thank you for your consideration, but mostly for your patience.
 
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