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[Asswindr]

Hi, I'm a new writer, I'm working on my first story for this sight. I've been reading stories here for a long time now and I want to write like them. I hope my stiory will be good enough to post here. I have a fetish for anal sex (like you couldn't teell from my name, lol).

Any advice for a new writer?

 

[Asswindr]

She had the most perfect ass I could ever hope to see. It was round and big but not too big that i was grotesque. I mean, like the kind of ass that filled your hands and shook just enough that you had to love it.

I first met her when she was dancing at a strip club. her name was Tiffany, a pretty typical name for a dancer but I thought she was the hottest thing on the planet and not typical at all. With the long blonde hair and that incredible but she was all i could ever hope for. And more.

I gave her a tip and she gave me a smile. Not just any smile, but a real one. Not like strippers usually gave, but a smile that said maybe I really want you. Maybe.

I was nervous and totally scared while waiting for her to come down. I mean, I wasn't really scared but maybe just really out of place. I mean, I wasn't used to this stuff, not dancers and definately not a hot chick like this.

She waggled her big tits in my face when she came to my table and said hi. She sat down and I got her a drink. She was so beautiful I thought I never could meet a girl so pretty again. I knew I had to do anything to have her, and I guess she knew it too.

We talked a while and I kept staring at her beautiful tits. They were perfect! 36DD easy! And looking so firm I thought they had to be fake but they werent. I found out when she gave me a lap dance and let me feel them. Oh wow, they weren't fake at all!

Then I put my hands on her but, that perfect, round, hot fleshy ass. She moaned and I did too. Maybe she liked it more than I did but it was hard to tell. I kept squeezing and putting my fingers in her cheeks and Tiffany was moving like she was fucking me. She was a hot kitten I could tell, and she wanted it. She wanted me I knew. And I wanted to give it to her.

Just when I thought it couldn't get any hotter, Tiffany pulls down my pants and starts stroking my cock. I can tell shes impressed by the way her eyes go big and round, like coffee saucers. "Thats a big cock baby," she says.

"Its all yours baby," I tell her and then she pulls her thong away and rubs the big head of my dick against her dripping pussy, and then her asshole! I couldn't believe it! Riught away and she wants it in her butt!

I was in heaven. .....

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Advice: Get an idea for a story that ISN'T trite and predictable, get an editor and go back to Elementary School and learn about capitalization.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Advice: Get an idea for a story that ISN'T trite and predictable, get an editor and go back to Elementary School and learn about capitalization.

I would like to add to Jenny's suggestions...don't try to write while masturbating...

 

[_Lynn_]

I believe they said it all.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

I would like to add to Jenny's suggestions...don't try to write while masturbating...

Oh! And I was sure Og's HowTo on how to write a NaNoMo said you had to 'take yourself in hand'. Better go back and see if I misunderstood.

 

[drksideofthemoon]

Oh! And I was sure Og's HowTo on how to write a NaNoMo said you had to 'take yourself in hand'. Better go back and see if I misunderstood.

LOL...it's nice to see you around....

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Welcum back, Elle