luna_oscuro
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- Jan 23, 2009
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Comments requested on first submission
I'm looking for some feedback regarding my first submission. You can email feedback to me at lunaoscuro@gmail.com, post it here or comment on the story itself. While votes are nice, I'm really looking for constructive criticism and/or encouragement. I'm very appreciative of the comments I've gotten so far.
luna_oscuro - Erotic Couplings
All Because of a Napkin http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404030
I did post this on the sticky note for new story advertisements, but I thought it might get lost there.
Many thanks,
I'm looking for some feedback regarding my first submission. You can email feedback to me at lunaoscuro@gmail.com, post it here or comment on the story itself. While votes are nice, I'm really looking for constructive criticism and/or encouragement. I'm very appreciative of the comments I've gotten so far.
luna_oscuro - Erotic Couplings
All Because of a Napkin http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=404030
I did post this on the sticky note for new story advertisements, but I thought it might get lost there.
Many thanks,
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