Concerned Mom

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How about a story about a mom who's very concerned that her son won't graduate high school due to poor grades. He needs to study for, and ace his finals. In a very maternal way she decides to give him an extra incentive to study hard. If he does well on a practice test he gets a handjob, and so on. If he graduates he gets to ass fuck her. These are my favorite types of story.
 
not my fave sort of story, but might I suggest that the "plan" not be laid out like a menu. Much better the first encounter be almost accidental...she walks in on him not studying, he blames being horny, she suggests porn, butthey watch together. Next time, she watches him, and can't resist touching. Only the third day does she actually jerk him to completion. Then she tells him "your first exam is tomorrow...if you do well, I'll do what she is doing..." pointing to a bj on screen. Each day gets more intense, one step at a time. Neither character nor reader is sure how far they will go.....
 
Could go for a broader audience if you had mom perhaps do his teachers or professors... or would that be a bit over the top?
 
maniac1967 said:
Could go for a broader audience if you had mom perhaps do his teachers or professors... or would that be a bit over the top?
WHy would being "a bit over the top" limit the audience, especially the Lit audience? It seems to me that some totally way out rubbish gets high votes, and hence high readership, on here.
 
I would not put the teachers in the same story line...the idea is that sonny succeeds through rewards. But the "mom seduces teacher" is tried and true.
 
Here's a little twist perhaps nobody has considered. Instead of making the son in danger of flunking high school ... make him in danger of flunking high school for the second or third time as a senior. The mother is at the end of her rope. She has tried everything and anything she could think of over the past year or two: anything from giving him money, new car, paying for extravagant vacations etc. etc. Accidentally she discovers the one motivating factor that actually motivates him to do well.

A 20 year old high school senior banging his mother is sufficiently different to stand out on Lit. Just my thoughts.
 
The Tutor

I wrote a story similar to this (as well as an open-ended sequel) called The Tutor , about a tutor who's fucking an entire family. The son gets to do more with her with each good performance on certain school assignments. You can find it under my name in the Author Index.
 
Flashlight7.5 said:
I wrote a story similar to this (as well as an open-ended sequel) called The Tutor , about a tutor who's fucking an entire family. The son gets to do more with her with each good performance on certain school assignments. You can find it under my name in the Author Index.

I enjoyed that series. The Mom twist would be a nice variation I think.
 
What if the son is only failing one subject. English Lit. He thinks the stories are boring because the are romantic stories. His mom wants to help, and tries to spice up the stories to get him interested. She reads the stories to him. In the process, she gets them both very horny. They don't sleep together until the night before the final and the tension is at it's highest. He tells her that he couldn't have done it without her, knowing that what they did was wrong. Neither one would do it differently.
 
BlackSnake said:
What if the son is only failing one subject. English Lit. He thinks the stories are boring because the are romantic stories. His mom wants to help, and tries to spice up the stories to get him interested. She reads the stories to him. In the process, she gets them both very horny. They don't sleep together until the night before the final and the tension is at it's highest. He tells her that he couldn't have done it without her, knowing that what they did was wrong. Neither one would do it differently.

but do they decide he better take the advanced Romantic Poets summer school course?
 
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