Commune story idea

[lexium]

A Large group of people decide, based on their common beliefs to live apart from the rest of the world. They recognize that it is almost impossible to totally exclude everything. They need to be able to make trade in order to have the goods and services they require to live comfortablly.

They setup the charter, choose a council, and make their own rules.

What are some rules that would allow these people to live and love each other without interference from the outside world?

 

[cherrylips_au]

Maybe trading sex for goods could be one of their rules if they don't wish to use a currency.

How would they approach sex between family members?

What about new members coming into the commune?

 

[lexium]

Maybe trading sex for goods could be one of their rules if they don't wish to use a currency.

I was hinting that some of the members would have to work outside of the commune in order to keep it stable.

How would they approach sex between family members?

Rule: No sex with anyone under the age of 18. Harsh punishment enforced by the entire commune.

Rule: No sex with animals of any kind.

What about new members coming into the commune?

Rule: There shall be no public lounging or public resturarants/diners.

Rule: Outsiders must be approved first by the council and then by 3/4th's of the entire commune.

Rule: No public sell of property.

 

[lexium]

Another thread talks about this idea:
http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=24165&pagenumber=3

This story should layout the ground rules before driving into the action. At the beginning of the story a family is being accepted into the commune. They are given the acceptable codes of conduct.

 

[Chicklet]

I like this idea. If you use sex as currency it's going to turn into a very sexual society. One of the unfortunate things about human nature...at least westerners, I have studied such long ago but not so much other cultures, is that we base so much on our wealth.

The main character could be either an ugly "poor" member, or a beautiful "rich" member - the ugly one is going to have a hard time getting by, and the thought of leaving the society is going to come to mind many times. The beautiful one is going to rule, be very full of him/herself by this point. She/he can have whatever she/he wishes.

Chicklet

 

[Chicklet]

Ps

Here in the Willamette Valley we have a lot of groups of people who have done similar things, mostly anarchists. They move out to vast peices of land and farm all their food, digging wells for water, and living without any help from the rest of society. We have smaller places in town, as well, where people live together and share the farming/harvesting/cleaning responsibilities and live well together.

If someone writes this story I would suggest it take place either in Oregon's Willamette Valley or in Montana, since both are good places for farming. It would ring more possible, and in my opinion that would make it more exciting, to place it somewhere where it *could* happen.

Chicklet

 

[lexium]

I was thinking more of a modern society. The people want all their toys, but working until they die is not apart of their game plan.

A few chosen members with high paying careers work outside of the community. Others work within the community producing a few high quality unque products.

I know nothing about farming. I'm afraid of any animal that is bitter than humans. I just wouldn't know how to write about farming. Big animals smell bad, don't they?

 

[Guest]

So, you already had an idea in your head that this is an "incest commune"?

 

[lexium]

Yes, I looking to plot out rules of conduct for the community. It would be more than incest. However, good deeds begin at home.

 

[BlackSnake]

How about expecting wives to sleep with other men in the community, married or not. To ensure the closeness of the community.

Expecting mothers to instruct their sons in the ways of sexual activity, so they will be good lovers to other women.

Expecting the mother to also instruct their daughter in the ways of sexual activities, so they to may be good lovers for the men of the commune.

Negative out brusts are punishable. As so is all negative actions.

 

[Chicklet]

This story is seeming less interesting to me

 

[lexium]

This story is seeming less interesting to me

What ideas in the story do you find troublesome?

 

[Chicklet]

Well, I really like the commune idea, but I think that most people, *most*, not all, wouldn't get involved in incest.

I think that you could write from the POV of a certain person or family that ends up involving themselves in incest, but i think overall it wouldn't happen very much.

Without the incest part this story has a realism that most people would feel. Add the incest as something to spice it up, but don't make it the main point.

That's just my opinion.


Chicklet

 

[lexium]

Well, I really like the commune idea, but I think that most people, *most*, not all, wouldn't get involved in incest.

I think that you could write from the POV of a certain person or family that ends up involving themselves in incest, but i think overall it wouldn't happen very much.

Without the incest part this story has a realism that most people would feel. Add the incest as something to spice it up, but don't make it the main point.

That's just my opinion.


Chicklet

I think the incest part came from Blacksnake. It's not apart of my planning. I don't think requiring incest would be a good rule. It's like force. However, I wouldn't make a rule against it.

One suggestion he made that I liked was:

Originally posted by BlackSnake
How about expecting wives to sleep with other men in the community, married or not. To ensure the closeness of the community.

Here I would say expecting not requiring both men and women to have sex with each other as a sign of their willingness to share.

 

[Guest]

I think the incest part came from Blacksnake. It's not apart of my planning. I don't think requiring incest would be a good rule.

That's not entirely true. When I asked:

So, you already had an idea in your head that this is an "incest commune"?

You said:

Yes, I looking to plot out rules of conduct for the community. It would be more than incest. However, good deeds begin at home.

So, similar to a nudest camp or something, you stated this would be an "incest commune" of sorts. It does seem to me that you were making it a main focuse of a small community that wants to break away from "normal society".

Posted by lexium

A Large group of people decide, based on their common beliefs to live apart from the rest of the world.

 

[lexium]

Ahhhhh! Don't shot me!

I want to first get some ground rules for the community. Set boundaries for where the story will go. There will be incest, but more activity than that.

 

[Guest]

Originally posted by lexium

What ideas in the story do you find troublesome?

Well, I really like the commune idea, but I think that most people, *most*, not all, wouldn't get involved in incest.

That's just my opinion.

I would have to agree with Chicklet here. Besides, with Lit and Lit's rules, any kind of commune/camp with incest or nudism as a rule, things could get complicated if they have families. Sure, one may not write minors in sexual roles directly, but if they live in a nudist camp or an "incest" commune, sexuality will be all around them. It would be difficult to mention a family in such a location unless every "child" is 18.

 

[lexium]

Well, I really like the commune idea, but I think that most people, *most*, not all, wouldn't get involved in incest.

That's just my opinion.

I would have to agree with Chicklet here. Besides, with Lit and Lit's rules, any kind of commune/camp with incest or nudism as a rule, things could get complicated if they have families. Sure, one may not write minors in sexual roles directly, but if they live in a nudist camp or an "incest" commune, sexuality will be all around them. It would be difficult to mention a family in such a location unless every "child" is 18. [/QUOTE]

You're so sweet!

The first rule of the commune:

Rule: No sex with anyone under the age of 18. Harsh punishment enforced by the entire commune.

You know you're going way to deep for this story, don't you? Rule number one should tell you that no one under 18 will be mentioned.

Check you later sweetie

 

[Guest]

The first rule of the commune:

Rule: No sex with anyone under the age of 18. Harsh punishment enforced by the entire commune.

I know you already stated that as a rule, but that is not what I am talking about. Say nudity is a way of life within this commune. Everyone is naked unless they need to contact the outside world for some reason.

Well, if there is a family there with kids or teens, they are witnessing the nudity (or incest) on a daily basis. You may not write sexual scenes with said kids/teens in it, but they are still in the commune. By the nature of the commune, you are adding these kids into a sexual world by default.

 

[lexium]

I know you already stated that as a rule, but that is not what I am talking about. Say nudity is a way of life within this commune. Everyone is naked unless they need to contact the outside world for some reason.

Well, if there is a family there with kids or teens, they are witnessing the nudity (or incest) on a daily basis. You may not write sexual scenes with said kids/teens in it, but they are still in the commune. By the nature of the commune, you are adding these kids into a sexual world by default.

Your argument would be valid if it was real. The best thing about fiction is that you can just leave out the parts that you don't like. I do that when I read sometimes. I just skim over things that are not that interesting to me. Try that and see how it works for you.

 

[Guest]

Some people prefer realism in stories or realistic stories. Sorry.

 

[lexium]

Some people prefer realism in stories or realistic stories. Sorry.

Yes, I too like realism, but realistic stories call for researching facts and lightly covering with fiction. That's not the depth I take my stories. I try to make them believable, as long as it doesn't interfear with the hot and steamy sex that the readers like.

 

[lustforlife74]

You could make it a comune that doesn't have children or families. Just a group of like minded adults.

 

[lexium]

The point of children is mute.

There is no work around because they will not exist in the story.

This is about rules for the commune. Would anyone like to offer suggestions about rules?

 

[BlackSnake]

The point of children is mute.

There is no work around because they will not exist in the story.

This is about rules for the commune. Would anyone like to offer suggestions about rules?

Whoop thayed is!

I got a rule for you: 3/4th of all incomes must be contributed to community living.


Really this commune stuff sound like communism lol