common mistake

[dude_lebowski]

Ive notice a lot of the writers here cant seem to help themselves and jump right into the sex. maybe its just my personal prefrence, but i think its pretty improtant to build up the foreplay in a sex story. otherwise its just a person having sex which almost every other story on this site has. the things that make your story original is the set up and characters antics with each other before they actually have the sex. thats just my opinion i could be wrong. "D miller

 

[princessjennie]

Ive notice a lot of the writers here cant seem to help themselves and jump right into the sex. maybe its just my personal prefrence, but i think its pretty improtant to build up the foreplay in a sex story. otherwise its just a person having sex which almost every other story on this site has. the things that make your story original is the set up and characters antics with each other before they actually have the sex. thats just my opinion i could be wrong. "D miller

From what I've read on the boards, there generally seems to be 2 types of stories - one that is simply a stroke story and the other actually having a plot. Different stories for different folks, I guess

 

[catalina_francisco]

Seems a valid observation to me. I guess for those who look for wank value, the sex is vital, but even then some context is good. LOL, my Possession 2 does not even contain any actual sexual intercourse and has proved hugely popular with many.

Catalina

 

[princessjennie]

but even then some context is good

LOL!

There is no getting past it, context is a necessary evil!

 

[dude_lebowski]

correction

i only write stroke stories myself, i cant help myself. what i meant was...in a stroke story its important to have a lot of build up to the sex, like......

"she bent over to look at a book on the bottom row and the thin material of her spandex pants stretched allowing him a fleeting but mind blowing view of her beautiful puckered asshole".

after a bunch of these kinds of situations than they actually have the sex. because without those things its just another "she blows him, he does her doggystyle than a little anal than he ejaulates on her face, the end" story.