Comments That Make Your Day

[onehitwanda]

I've just managed to tag and bag a reader who's working their way through my back catalogue and leaving "helpful" comments like this gem

Compared to your other pieces, both before and after this one, this one falls so far short of Alexis and Navigation both. Honestly, it feels like such a myopic male perspective. It was absent all emotion you've proven you're so capable of. It was just plan sex. Yes, between siblings, but I got zero feel that these two were ever really close to one another. A whole lot of complaining by both about having no sex (not really talking at all about love), it just sounded like ordinary horniness. They showed no real emotional connection. Maybe it was there on her part, but seeing it from his point of view, it was just a man with hard cock looking for a place to put it. They never even said, "I love you."

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[NoTalentHack]

This one on A Very Long Engagement cracked me up.

Interesting premise.
But sex starts and then moves ahead much too fast.
Needed much more in the way of 'convincing' him to proceed. Need may more details.
Had real potential.
Three stars.

“You didn’t make it like every other brother/sister incest story, and therefore it’s not good.” Stellar feedback there, bro.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I mean this as no offense to the authors but I had no idea people did such close readings of the stories. Major story line changes, ok, fair complaint. But an inch here or there…

The people who read my stories seem to go over them with a fine tooth comb. They notice everything. Although, picking up on the fact that over the course of five chapters the MC lost an inch off his deal, had to be a first, at least for me.

 

[lovecraft68]

Got one a few days ago that was short and to the point

"Fuck you."

The fact that person probably sat and thought until their remaining brain cells caught fire and that was the best they could do made me smile.

 

[MillieDynamite]

I've just managed to tag and bag a reader who's working their way through my back catalogue and leaving "helpful" comments like this gem


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With helpful fans like this, who needs critics?

 

[onehitwanda]

With helpful fans like this, who needs critics?

With friends like this, who needs enemas?

 

[ElectricBlue]

An appreciative comment on Garter Belts and Whiskey

by thewinedarksea on 56 minutes ago
A little bit of magic in this one. You have the gift. I read your stories and everything is there, real-life, breathing. Great work as always.

 

[shakna]

I couldn't fap, the story was too good. Dunno if that makes the story good or bad for this site.

For My Sister's a Ghost!

 

[NoTalentHack]

This reads like Joseph Goebbels wrote a propaganda piece on the virtues of cuckolding and being a cuckold. I am surprised it wasn't entitled "Hahnrei Macht Frei"!

Never change, LW.

 

[NoTalentHack]

You forgot the rest. The guy is a genius.

Yeah, I didn’t want to include something that grotesque, the violent bit. Comparing a comedic tale on a cuck/bull/hotwife story to Nazi propaganda was yikes enough for me.

 

[onehitwanda]

> feral spirits of despair

Ooh. I like that, I'm going to steal it.

 

[NoTalentHack]

> feral spirits of despair

Ooh. I like that, I'm going to steal it.

Hey! That's my rude comment! Get your own!

 

[lovecraft68]

This one on A Very Long Engagement cracked me up.



“You didn’t make it like every other brother/sister incest story, and therefore it’s not good.” Stellar feedback there, bro.

Then there's the opposite where they complain that the 'wimp/cuck/simp brother had any hesitation before crossing the line and having sex with his sister.

I get a lot of those because my style, especially in mother/son is even though the son has the desire, sex with your mother is frowned upon, and a huge deal so i have some conflict. They want "mom's hot, why not?" look up another author.

 

[RoperTrace]

From: 'Hanging In The Balance'
From Anonymous:
Your story was full of very erotic and naughty detail. The thought of being this helpless and having such naughty things being done to me, well got to me. This story is one of those secret desires alot of us keep hidden.

So hot!!!

by Anonymous user:
This story is obviously not for everybody... I love it. So damn hot. I'll save it and re-read it many times. ;-)

Not for everybody, indeed


by Anonymous user:
This was excellent, and probably the darkest story that I have ever said that about.

From: 'Cindy Gets Gangbanged'

by Anonymous user:
i've returned to this one

I am a female who recently found this site. I must say I have returned to your story a few times to bring my self to a orgasim. I have tried reading a few other stories on the site, but they don't give me the same reaction. Keep up the writing.

by millisande
made my toes curl
Thanx, great story, its got me thinkin bout renting out my house,and keepin my fingers crossed, you do a great job of putting in just the right touches of gross, without goin too far, ha, anyway, thanx again for makin my toes curl

 

[dmallord]

"Made an old man smile. Happy, funny, lovely, beautiful sex!" commented an anon on my Valentine's Day 2023 entry – Cupid’s Valentine Therapist.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

Some good comments on Meaningless Kisses:

I really like your characters. I was actually more interested in the conversation than the sex (I hope that doesn't sound like an insult, it's meant as a compliment).

Dialogue perfect; felt so real.

Marvellous experience and charming conversation. It was like being in a movie, the repartee was that good.

But to bring me down to earth, here's a regular Anon who seems to comment on many of my stories:
"Good premise.
Disappointing story.
Simply listing what happened, not describing it in detail.
Two stars."

Why yes, it was a 750-word entry.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Some good comments on Meaningless Kisses:

I really like your characters. I was actually more interested in the conversation than the sex (I hope that doesn't sound like an insult, it's meant as a compliment).

Dialogue perfect; felt so real.

Marvellous experience and charming conversation. It was like being in a movie, the repartee was that good.

But to bring me down to earth, here's a regular Anon who seems to comment on many of my stories:
"Good premise.
Disappointing story.
Simply listing what happened, not describing it in detail.
Two stars."

Why yes, it was a 750-word entry.

I don't think a lot of readers understand the whole 750 word story thing, and they keep wondering what happened to the rest of the story.

 

[gordo12]

I don't think a lot of readers understand the whole 750 word story thing, and they keep wondering what happened to the rest of the story.

They don't and even if you announce it up front, they'll tell you it should have been longer. And then there's always this comment. One of my favs from another author (I suspect)

by Anonymous user on 01/28/2020



Finally!

After reading thousands, perhaps tens of thousands of comments and calls by readers for 750 word stories, our Intrepid Hero, Gordo, rides to the rescue! The longing of every single reader for 750 word stories, as a band dying of thirst in a parched wilderness of long awful stories, some of 10,000 words or more, we gain the cool refreshing drink from the 750 word well. If only we could read hundreds of 750 word stories, it would not assuage our thirst for these wonders.

Please, Gordo, bless us with more of these wondrous gems; 30, or 50, would not be too many. The reading public demands 750 word stories! We will march to the gates of Literotica Hell to demand our rights to have 750 word stories. Thank you, Gordo: the people’s champion.

He got his wish. 164 stories that year.

 

[onehitwanda]

Your stories give me mixed feelings. They are all fantastic, but they also are all very similar. They all have a girl who self hates and puts herself down no matter if she's into dudes or chicks. Not only that, but they all go on too long with the will they won't they fuck aspect, specially when you know they will. Like I said I love the stories but they all kind of have the same feel after you've read a few of them

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[NoTalentHack]

Five stars. Your stories often push boundaries and take us out of our comfort zones. I don't like cuckold or bull stories, but I couldn't stop reading this. Reframing cuck and bull relationships as kayfabe is a brilliant idea. Thanks.

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment from a reader who DOES appreciate 750-word stories.

April - Fool No Longer

Short sweet and to the point. Great story

 

[NoTalentHack]

On Meat Market:

You own every album The Cure ever made on vinyl, don't you?

 

[NoTalentHack]

On Virility:

That was raw and visceral and dirty and ultimately intimate and romantic, with a depth only attainable between a couple profoundly in love. We should all be so lucky. Thanks very much.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment on April Fools - Best Friends

Got me, I figured the wife would not be fooled, but the switcheroo, was a surprise. Well written, and fun..

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment this morning on Homeless:

Hallmark Movie... Super Good.