Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

Nice comment this morning on "Cheatify The Bastard," the sequel to "Cheatify The Bitch."

I wish I could buy both versions of that app.
The mayhem I could cause with just a few modifications!

 

[Bramblethorn]

On "The Floggings Will Continue..."

I don't care if it could happen because you shaped the story in such a way that the dynamic between characters felt real.

That was one of the challenges I set for myself in writing that story, taking a far-fetched scenario and making the character reactions feel believable, and it always feels nice when the readers pick out one of the things I was specifically aiming to do.

 

[ElectricBlue]

A reader has progressively commented on each chapter of A Girl on the Bus as they have read through, culminating in this:

What a gift to have things expand and overflow convention in such a seamless way without losing all the respect and passionate kindness that has driven this story from the beginning.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

Overcritical Strikes Again...

This was my favorite critic's two cents worth on my Halloween Contest entry: The Old House on Drury Lane

Overcriticalabout 11 hours ago
This story is based on two absolutely ridiculous concepts. One that you could feasibly have two strangers buy a house together. I'm not sure a bank would even offer a mortgage on that basis ( I know these two paid cash, but that's very unusual - it's not even good business sense). The second is the ghost in the house. I know that an author can write any kind of drivel to his/her heart's content, but I have the right to rate it 2* if I like. And I did.

1) I didn't make up the premise, people are buying homes with anyone who can help them afford to get into a house these days, especially in high-end markets. Plus, he claims that a bank would never lend them the money to buy a house, though he concedes that the couple in my story paid cash.

2) Also, I did mention up front that this was a Halloween story. Yet he thought it was ridiculous to have a ghost in the house.

Strange

 

[Smuttyandfun]

This was another, much more pleasant comment on the same story: The Old house on Drury Lane

You've deftly blended timeless love, red-hot passion, and haunting otherworldliness in one beautiful story. Sumptuous and arousing in every detail...and that includes your mouthwatering descriptions of the food and stunning descriptions of the house! And such endearing characters you simply can't help but fall in love with and root for. Loved it!

 

[shakna]

2) Also, I did mention up front that this was a Halloween story. Yet he thought it was ridiculous to have a ghost in the house.

About half the comments on my zombie-sister tale have a problem with her hair growing after death. Not that she's literally an undead. People get caught up in very weird places , I wouldn't worry about it.

 

[BiscuitHammer]

About half the comments on my zombie-sister tale have a problem with her hair growing after death. Not that she's literally an undead. People get caught up in very weird places , I wouldn't worry about it.

People get hung up on weird shit, certainly. Her hair and nails growing? How about keeping Raquel's mouth or vag lubricated before she ragdolls her brother?

Jayzoz, people, there's a zombie in the story, suspend a little disbelief already.

I had one of my players in my Warhammer game bitching about peanuts being present in the Old World, which is based on medieval Europe.

Le Player: "Why are there peanuts in the Old World?"

Le Me: "At that very moment, a dragon flies by. That's why there are peanuts in the Old World."

Who cares if Raquel's hair and nails grow? Is still a fun story. Find the person griping and punch them in the shnozz for me. They ruin the immersion.

 

[SyleusSnow]

Ain't it great to wake up to find a glowing comment on an older story?

Got this one this morning on my "homeless girl meets dweeb" story If You Want It, published in 2018:

"Wow. Just wow. That was one of the best stories I've ever read on here, thank you for writing it."

And does anyone else find that comments on older stories seem to come in waves? Months (and years) go by with nothing, then suddenly a bunch pop up. A few weeks ago the same story got this one:

Wow. Thank you! Just a damn good story. You sir, are a damn fine storyteller! Accolades!

Are readers trading recommendation among themselves behind our backs?

 

[gordo12]

And does anyone else find that comments on older stories seem to come in waves? Months (and years) go by with nothing, then suddenly a bunch pop up. A few weeks ago the same story got this one:



Are readers trading recommendation among themselves behind our backs?

I've posted about the wave phenomenon before. If I recall my record is 11 in one day or something like it. Honestly, I think the universe functions in waves.

 

[shakna]

This is honestly one of the best stories I've read. I love these two so much.

On my trans artist tale, and it was a highlight of the day. I have to admit that Aliss and Tina left a little mark on me, their romance was both something that flowed, and took a lot out of me. Good for a weekend lonesome snuggle with a hot mug of something.

 

[My I]

Long ago, when I had another user name/acct., I got a comment on After Midnight that had me rolling on the floor.

Anonymous:

"Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid."

Obviously written by an 8 yr old.

 

[Emilymcplugger]

Long ago, when I had another user name/acct., I got a comment on After Midnight that had me rolling on the floor.

Anonymous:

"Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid."

Obviously written by an 8 yr old.

*you’re x 20

 

[BiscuitHammer]

Long ago, when I had another user name/acct., I got a comment on After Midnight that had me rolling on the floor.

Anonymous:

"Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid. Your so stupid."

Obviously written by an 8 yr old.

*You're

 

[BiscuitHammer]

Oops, Emily beat me to it...

 

[JuanSeiszFitzHall]

This one, on "The Empty Walk," continues to make my day long after the comment was posted:

"This didn't turn me on at all (maybe being a heterosexual woman didn't allow me to identify with either character) but I loved it because it's extremely well-written - the dialogue, the atmosphere with the whiff of desperation and sadness, the realism - altogether creating a pitch-perfect scene, IMO."

The commenter signed as "Anonymous," which can remind us that the decision not to reveal identity here is not always a shield for bad behavior.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5116173&page=submissions

 

[gordo12]

Another nice comment on April Fools - Gotcha!

Another 5 rating. This time is not for insight to human connections but the cutie quick read

 

[onehitwanda]

Overcritical Strikes Again...

https://media3.giphy.com/media/3osxYfo1Y0NtKdYJi0/giphy.gif

I often wonder if he's a group of people sharing an account, because he seems bipolar at times.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

https://media3.giphy.com/media/3osxYfo1Y0NtKdYJi0/giphy.gif

I often wonder if he's a group of people sharing an account, because he seems bipolar at times.

I've wondered what his deal is, too. I'll probably never find out though.

 

[onehitwanda]

I've wondered what his deal is, too. I'll probably never find out though.

It's probably for the best, all things considered. He's very... passionate.

 

[Smuttyandfun]

It's probably for the best, all things considered. He's very... passionate.

That's putting it mildly. I think strange describes him better, though.

 

[PrincessArianrhod]

In all honesty, I've happily received almost all comments on my handful of stories and have thus far been fortunate enough to not attract any trolls or anger management candidates.

Although not in the comments section, this post made me smile since it shows the story managed to illicit exactly the response I was hoping for:

Post in thread 'The Official Authors' Hangout Halloween 2022 Contest Support Thread' https://forum.literotica.com/thread...-contest-support-thread.1573483/post-95926616

Very grateful for that.

 

[TallGlassOfSarcasm]

Any positive comment is welcome..Even the simple "Wow! I really liked it!" ones that don't tell you anything about WHAT the reader liked. I mean a compliment is a compliment. And I genuinely appreciate any compliment.

Even negative comments that are constructive can be welcomed. Negative comments that say "This sucks"....well who cares? Your comment sucks... so we're even.

What I'd love is specific positive comments in terms of how well the story "worked". It's erotica. Thank you telling me you like the plot or the character's name or something. But did the story get you off? I didn't write it to compete with Shakespeare. I wrote it to make the reader aroused. Did it do that or not? That is what I want to know.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

On "Third Time Getting Lucky", a First Time story: "That was so very beautiful. In every respect. Thank you."

Though my favourite comment on that story is this one: "Beautiful story. And this line "Yes, this was a huge breakthrough. One small thrust for a man, a giant leap for my mind." had me genuinely laugh out loud. That's rarer than getting one off on this site . Thank you."

 

[dmallord]

Some Anon comments are just too humorous. This one is probably one of my best regarding the story 'Life Is Like Shit - Not Chocolate.' I like this commenter's wit!

"Wow.... I mean wow. I actually read a story on Literotica that was it's own original thing, and not a brother being trapped in a cabin, with his twin lesbian sisters and their lesbian girlfriends (also twins), thar he discovers that while they really are all hard core lesbians, somehow his magic dick, and his alone, is fascinating and a turn on for lesbians, thing. There was not any naked sex ed teachers, with knockers the size of bowling balls, or mind controlled futas being forced into servitude for an utter bastard, with the body of a young Schwarzenegger and a prick thick enough and hard enough to drive railroad spikes. Where was the nudist campground extended family, inter-generational, 18+, orgy? What did I just read? Quick someone, get me a story with a 51 year old MILF with the perky ass and tits of a teenager, luring in the 19 old Tarzanesque house painter, with her daisy dukes and her tiny, tight, sheer tank tops. Boobies......"

 

[SimonDoom]

I've been doing this long enough and have received enough comments of every stripe so many times that the negative comments sometimes "make my day" as much as the positive ones. I got this one today, for one of my incest stories:

"Sadly, you have no real creative writing abilities. You do have a good imagination. However,
you lack the ability to put your thoughts into a well written, and enticing formula that would occur in a mother son sexual relationship."

The Anonymous (of course) author of this comment then went on to digress about his own ideas about the "formula" for the ideal sexy mother-son relationship, without saying anything more about my story.

We have different formulas.

Fortunately, enough people like my formula that it's been one of my most popular stories for the last 5+ years.