Comments That Make Your Day

[gordo12]

Another nice comment this morning on Homeless

Loved it

 

[SyleusSnow]

A story written back in 2018, If You Want It (coincidently also about a homeless girl) got a lovely comment a couple days ago:

Outstanding! You're a very talented writer. I love the way that you're able to convey the story using almost exclusively conversation between the characters. That's a real skill. The story was wonderful and I like the characters. Only 5 stars since 10 aren't available!

So wonderful when something written years ago receives a new comment.

 

[gordo12]

That was a great story Syleus. I enjoyed it.

 

[gordo12]

Three nice comments this afternoon.

Homeless

What a wonderfully well written love story. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. Well Done 5++stars

Wheelchair Girl

Great story... still have tears running down my cheeks. I agree with Jenellesl on no errors noted. Job well done!

What a great love story full of wonder and fate mixed in. When the girl phoned her dad an said daddy it brought tears to my eyes. I have two estranged girls from 40 years ago.

 

[Candy_Kane54]

Not really sure how to take this one ...

Sadly, for me, the author has done so well on evoking a sense of poignancy and sadness that the regularly occurring (and perfectly well written if it wasn't for that juxtaposition) sex scenes are a jarring change of tone

 

[shakna]

So cute, so manipulative, so bossy. So very, very... feline.

Salmon was a fun little catgirl to write. It's nice, and somewhat poignant, that people are still enjoying her origin story, after what I did to to her in Tauli.

 

[gordo12]

I was kind of stoked yesterday when a couple of readers went through my story list and added most to their reading lists. But I know things like that seldom bring any results.

Wrong. 13 comments on various stories this afternoon from the two. Somebody wanted to see me working here.

Hidden Boss

What a great story, I found it well written with great characters and totally entertaining. I enjoyed for once a tale with no spousal cheating, just a per romantic tale. Well done 5++stars

No fiction in this story its all real life if you always do the right thing. Virtuous people don't decide when to b virtuous they just are.

Homeless

Lovely store don't you wish Karma really worked like that all the time. Of course this story took all making right of a wrong to a new level. Keep writing

April Fool No Longer

Excellent, why no stars? to click?

Great short BTB Story. 5 stars

April Fool Gotcha

smart ass wives, never marry a woman smarter than yourself, 5 stars

Great story. 5 stars

April Fool Best Friends

Well written short. 5++stars

Not quite my cup of tee and I don't appreciate practical jokes especially one that embarrass people.
Point in case: I was in the Army back in the 60s in Germany. A new guy had come into out unit. We were sitting around not much to do and the subject of playing chess came up. The new guy said "will you teach me how to play" so being the nice guy I am we sat down and started to play, he check mated me in 3 moves. I never played another game of chess while in the Army and gave him a wide birth for the rest of my stay on that post. No, I don't appreciate jokesters. I do give your 5 stars though.

Crash

Don't really like cuck stories but the guy was willing to share and so was the wife so I guess to each his own applies here. Well written though with an interesting twist at the end. Stupid shit that brad guy.

Cuck Delusions

Reginald was one sick puppy and Susan divorcing him and marrying David made the whole story very good. Gets my 5 star vote

Cheatify The Bitch'

Another good one, I just wished I'd had that stuff 40 years ago. 5 stars

Cheatify The Bastard

another good one, who says revenge is useless or whatever? Perhaps other viewers of the cheater wife stealers beating will send the right message, don't mess with another man's wife

 

[lovecraft68]

Comment from my contest entry and in reply to a few insecure asshats who are in an uproar because the twenty year old sister in the story is a little bit of a party girl and has "gasp" had sex with other guys. He really nails that BS concept a girl should always be a virgin, yet somehow be able to fuck like Sasha Grey.

Again, another comment requires me to say something. That’s nice you like shapely girls, Mr/Ms. Anonymous.
(That Anonymous family is Huge! And they all seem to read stories here. heh). But this site REQUIRES all characters in stories be at least 18 years old. So you are telling this fabulous writer that YOU think someone who looks the way you described is going to be a complete virgin, and then as if transformed by a bolt of lightning turn into a total porn star and go off on her brother??!
Just that premise alone would render the story so ridiculously unbelievable it would be a farce. I think you need to realize that women have hormones just like men do. And women get horny just like men do. And in the western world
it’s only because of a bunch of limp dick priests who actually preferred young boys that all this chaste and virgin crap ever got started in the first place! You want your thrills, you want your excitement. Yet you expect females to sit around and do arts and crafts until they are suddenly hit by whatever magic you believe and they hurl themselves at their brothers?! I have three words for you Anonymous: YOU WRITE IT!,,

 

[windar]

"You are the most handsome and brilliant man I've ever met".

Oh, wait, you mean comments on stories.

OK, I got this a few days ago on the one and probably the only story I ever wrote or will write for this site, a cheating wives story, which I wrote as a sort joke just to see the nasty comments: "Fabulous story, you are a wonderful writer Thank you for sharing !" OK, I guess I failed then...

 

[SyleusSnow]

That was a great story Syleus. I enjoyed it.

Thanks very much, Gordo. Yours tugs on the heartstrings more (and has a hell of a revenge angle).

 

[gordo12]

Thank you for that kind comment

Thanks very much, Gordo. Yours tugs on the heartstrings more (and has a hell of a revenge angle).

 

[dmallord]

PM comment regarding my I/T story 'Grampy Taught Me Everything I Know'

Your Grampy story was excellent, actually better than if you had gone longer in detail with Grandpas consummating of the inevitable bond with his granddaughter. Ignore the negatives in the comments, they don’t appreciate that filling in the blanks with their own details can often be a greater reward.

 

[Nonsense01]

Not really sure how to take this one ...

In a positive way. You've done a great job.
Creating emotion and making people stop and thing is an awesome talent that you posses. Keep it up! You're adding to people's lives.

 

[gordo12]

Nice comment this afternoon on Wheelchair Girl

Really enjoyed the story . It had the required mushy scenes as well as a hint of super natural

 

[NotWise]

So maybe it didn't make my day, but it made me smile.

On my April Fools story ("Every Girl in Edgarville") anonymous said:

Just a couple of complaints about this five star story.
Her name wasn’t Becky, and my name ain’t Abner. Otherwise, you pretty much got it all right.

Don't know how to fix that.

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments this morning and one that had me scratching my head so I left it out.

April Fool - No Longer

5 star BTB!

Cuck Delusions

A different take on cuckolding. Highly entertaining and a salutary lesson for those who want to punish masochists by beating them.

 

[Mastered_again]

Only the second comment on my new story, but yeah, it made my day. Especially considering how idiotic the first one was.

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-01

Best story I have read here in quite some time! Thank you! I used your avatar pic in my mind to build the story around. You are a wonderful, sexy, naughty woman. Loved how you became his bitch at the end!! Where might this story go from here.!

 

[shakna]

Great stuff - As with all the related stories of this world....
Very much looking forward to reading more of Bubbles (mis)adventures
Many thanks.

The bad luck of Bubbles is one of my favourite things to write, so it's always fun to get someone else who loves her misadventures.

 

[Comshaw]

I got slapped around by the reader "Anonymous" (that asshole gets around a lot!) on a story I wrote for one of the contests awhile back for "bad history". The time frame was the beginning of the Battle of the Bulge, the place was the Ardennes. I have to admit, I didn't do as much research as I should have on the Army units and their movements, so the comment was a correct. And I was embarrassed for not doing the research. But a few I got after that gave me a smile, like this one:

"I chose this story expecting a good-read but didn't find it. I found an excellent read. The characters and story line captured me quickly and kept my interest (a 5 star read). My interest is the characters, their relationship, and how well the story line is written. The accuracy of history is not what this story is about - it's about people and relationships. It felt good while reading and after the last word. Many thanks to the author for capturing my mind for a short time and leaving an excellent impression."

It just goes to show the disparate things different readers can glean from the same story.

Comshaw

 

[gordo12]

A couple of nice comments today. I liked this one on Homeless best:

Can’t imagine anything better…!!! Perfect! On a scale of five stars, this is a six or seven

 

[RachelPost]

I got a PM for my first story: The sex scenes were not just erotic but felt real.

Makes me more excited about finishing part 2.

 

[gordo12]

Some nice comments this afternoon

Fido

Great story. Dogs are GOOD PEOPLE. Do more of these!

Cheatify The Bitch

Good story... Wonderful payback! Wish I could program like you. (But then, my wifey and I are happy.)

 

[kromen]

It's been years since I published here. It's comments like this that remind me that I need to get back in the game. From my story, Drug of Choice.
"Setting the bar..
simply put, this story is so well-written it makes me burn with envy. caught up in the initial setting, i honestly forgot i was reading a literotica submission until it snatched me by the scrotum and delivered the knockout. bravo."







i am not anonymous...this is dannyboy from the desert, phx az"

 

[kromen]

"setting the bar..
simply put, this story is so well-written it makes me burn with envy. caught up in the initial setting, i honestly forgot i was reading a literotica submission until it snatched me by the scrotum and delivered the knockout. bravo.
i am not anonymous...this is dannyboy from the desert, phx az"
From "Drug of Choice"

 

[gordo12]

it snatched me by the scrotum and delivered the knockout."

He/she certainly didn't hold back on the visual cues.