Comments/Suggestions/Critiques

[JDWenzel]

All would be appreciated as this is my first attempt at writing a piece of erotic literature. A friend of mine talked me into it, and I did enjoy writing it quite a bit.

Anna (Erotic Couplings)
By JDWenzel
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=412526

Thanks in advance!