Comic strip. ... wait.... something is happening here....maybe

[EmilyMiller]

Is that a visual representation of "hun"?

It’s how I imagine you looking when you agree to beta my next story as an apology.

Em

 

[StillStunned]

It’s how I imagine you looking when you agree to beta my next story as an apology.

Em

I walked right into that one, didn't I?

 

[Voboy]

Aliens abduct nine strangers, detach their heads and have fun attaching them to random sex machines while the bodies try to escape?

Actually, if I were in any way artistic, I can imagine this would be a BLAST to draw.

 

[MasterNothing]

It would... hence the post asking for clarification .... more please

 

[EmilyMiller]

I walked right into that one, didn't I?

Yup. At least it’s only 6k words.

Em

 

[StillStunned]

Yup. At least it’s only 6k words.

Em

Ask me again in the morning. I might be able to be firmer then.

ETA: that probably came out wrong.

 

[Devinter]

I have no experience whatsoever with writing for a comic strip. I imagine that would be a fair bit different than ordinary writing. But that makes it sounds quite intriguing. What kind of length of comic are we talking here? Just a couple of panels or something a few pages long? Is the end-goal to titillate, or to amuse?

 

[EmilyMiller]

Ask me again in the morning. I might be able to be firmer then.

ETA: that probably came out wrong.

Just a little

 

[EmilyMiller]

I have no experience whatsoever with writing for a comic strip. I imagine that would be a fair bit different than ordinary writing. But that makes it sounds quite intriguing. What kind of length of comic are we talking here? Just a couple of panels or something a few pages long? Is the end-goal to titillate, or to amuse?

Couldn’t you adapt one of you 750 word things?

Em

 

[MasterNothing]

Devinter,

I was thinking comic strip like Calvin and Hobbs style... mostly intent to amuse, but if some titillating happens.... nothing wrong with that


So like 3 to 10 panels long for each one... Sunday comics were/are longer than daily strips... so there's some flexibility there. And however many of those you feel like doing, could even be just a one panel strip like Non-sequitur or Ziggy

 

[Devinter]

Couldn’t you adapt one of you 750 word things?

Em

Perhaps. And a few of the "ideas" I have written down on my long list of potential future projects are quite simple, and could probably be told in about 8-12 panels. Probably wouldn't be super arousing, but I reckon I could make it funny. Speaking of which, I actually got one of the ideas on there FROM a comic. (Note that if I ever wrote such a story, the boy would be significantly older as it's questionable at best if he's 18 in this comic strip.)

 

[Devinter]

Devinter,

I was thinking comic strip like Calvin and Hobbs style... mostly intent to amuse, but if some titillating happens.... nothing wrong with that


So like 3 to 10 panels long for each one... Sunday comics were/are longer than daily strips... so there's some flexibility there. And however many of those you feel like doing, could even be just a one panel strip like Non-sequitur or Ziggy

Let me put my troubled mind to work.. Okay, I think I have something. Two-three panels ought to do it. I'll DM you.

 

[AlinaX]

So... the heads are having sex?.... so robot/ cyborg genitals ? Go go extendo penis.. inspector gadget style?

Sam has a dildo and two wheels, but one wheel is bigger than the other and he keeps going around in circles and failing to catch pussy.

Meanwhile, Sally is a tentacle monster the size of a city block, and all she wants is a hug.

 

[nice90sguy]

Hello,


I can provide a deviantart page for more of my art if you ask.

That is not the extent of my talent or skill, and I'm willing to work with you to develop your vision as we create this comic.

Let's discuss.

All I can tell from those sketches is that you can sketch comic charaters (which I can't). But c'mon, you can do better than that, surely. If those pics were stories they'd definietly belong in the "Non-Erotic" category. I think a single page with some action or poses that are sexy would help you a lot.

Why not use some sexier, less "cute" examples? As an R Crumb and erotic comic fan in general, I love the idea of putting some of my stories into comic form.

If you're into M/s stuff, there's a perfect example of what you should add to your portfolio.

And your point of posting is....?

Some people here are postaholics.

 

[Rustyoznail]

I must admit my start here was due to me reading Erogenesis's comics, and I did send him a short script for two of his characters - after I bought all his works. Probably eight panels.

I wouldn't mind giving it a shot. Send me a PM of your DA page and I'll have a look.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

I feel

So... the heads are having sex?.... so robot/ cyborg genitals ? Go go extendo penis.. inspector gadget style?

Damn, Inspector Gadget. I loved that cartoon.

 

[M_K_Babalon]

I've thought about such a thing, but if it isn't going to be smutty, why ask any of us? I've never written anything funny and whimsical, like C&H, I have some funny moments in stories, that I hope people find funny, or it might just be me, but that's it. I don't only write erotica or smut, but I don't know how well I could intentionally try and be funny. The closest I probably get to whimsy is my "light novel"/"slice of life" type writing.

 

[onehitwanda]

Perhaps. And a few of the "ideas" I have written down on my long list of potential future projects are quite simple, and could probably be told in about 8-12 panels. Probably wouldn't be super arousing, but I reckon I could make it funny. Speaking of which, I actually got one of the ideas on there FROM a comic. (Note that if I ever wrote such a story, the boy would be significantly older as it's questionable at best if he's 18 in this comic strip.)

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I'm ashamed to say this took me a bit of time.

 

[StillStunned]

I'm ashamed to say this took me a bit of time.

I was once a teenage boy, so it took me about 2 seconds to get.