oggbashan
Dying Truth seeker
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The original poster said that that it was easier if she was sixteen. I'm clueless as to why that's easier. Maybe it has something to do with the story's timeline, which he didn't describe. The author is forewarned and I'm going to let him make his judgement and take his bumps, if there are any.
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I have had problems with a story's timeline before. I was writing that a character had a child before marriage, and that was a significant plot element. The original timeline would have meant a child at age 15 to fit with the rest of the draft story. I had to reconsider the whole timeline, including temporarily assigning real historic years for date of birth, marriage law changes and death to make the child born at least 9 months after the mother's 18th birthday.
It was a real pain and took longer than writing the original draft.