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Mothbite

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Hello,

I recently tried my hand at actually writing instead of requesting. As it turns out, I have a gift for writing the build-up, but not what comes after. The story in question is about the narrator, a good young man of the church, having an affair with the youth pastor's wife.

I've written a build-up for what I originally envisioned, but I'm stuck on writing what comes after. So I'm thinking that somebody write up the 2nd half of the story, which would include the sex and the aftermath.

I'm also brainstorming ideas to build this as a series, and I'm up for doing an idea any colloborator comes up with.

Any takers?
 
I feel your pain, my son (or daughter, as applies. Vic TG is modern, and therefore accepting of the new-age idea that there are actually women on the Internet). One of my biggest hurdles in writing porn was actually doing something once the stars of the show got into bed. My recommendation is to watch porn. Read porn. Let something inspire you. Hell, have sex. See what's happening on screen and make a scene all your own. Thinking about sex is your best route to visualizing and exacting.
 
I feel your pain, my son (or daughter, as applies. Vic TG is modern, and therefore accepting of the new-age idea that there are actually women on the Internet). One of my biggest hurdles in writing porn was actually doing something once the stars of the show got into bed. My recommendation is to watch porn. Read porn. Let something inspire you. Hell, have sex. See what's happening on screen and make a scene all your own. Thinking about sex is your best route to visualizing and exacting.

Two weeks later, still no inspiration. :eek: So I'm still looking.
 
Here's a secret.

I do something pretty naughty. i take people I know and transform the situation they are in. THen at the last minute, I use MS Word's "Find and Replace" feature to change the names to fictitious ones. But up until that point, the story is really about two people I know, and that chases the thoughts trippingly off the tongue.

For example, take two very uptight people you know and would enjoy watching in this situation you describe. Like "That Jesus-freak kid in my high-school class that was always going on about something to do with turtles or the Bible." and "Jane from accounting" and put them into those characters' bodies. You might wind up changing some of your build-up, but hey a build up is worthless without a climax and falling action anyway right?

If you just continue to come up dry, try casting actors or characters from a favorite movie and reimagine the scene with that person. Google their names and find a picture of them through the "images" tab and sit and ponder them in the role of your characters.
 
ideas for story

I have a couple of side line storys i could share with you to see if you like my style and we could try it from there.
drop me a PM and Ill send some over.
 
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