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I like stories that start in media res as they say...

however, it would be more realistic if her confession came out more slowly and naturally, also hotter.

then hubby says "tell me all about it..."

as she does, she notices him getting hard...

you can cut between the backstory of wife with Shelly & Pat and the main narrative. You could check out my Stepdaughter's Best Friend or sequels Stepdaughter with Her Best Friend and Stepdaughter, Best Friend and Wife for examples, however successful or not, of the technique.
 
So the husband never gets sex again with his wife, but only gets to watch the neighbor putting it to her?

Or the husband only gets to have sex with his wife upon receipt of permission from the neighbor and under that person's supervision and critique. The guy has to ask permission to fuck his own wife?

Interesting concepts, I'm wondering where it goes.
 
So the husband never gets sex again with his wife, but only gets to watch the neighbor putting it to her?

Or the husband only gets to have sex with his wife upon receipt of permission from the neighbor and under that person's supervision and critique. The guy has to ask permission to fuck his own wife?

Interesting concepts, I'm wondering where it goes.

Or pat trains hubby to be a proper Dom, and gifts wifey back to him?
 
Or pat trains hubby to be a proper Dom, and gifts wifey back to him?

That would be the charitable thing to do. Although she might be a little the worse for wear by the time she was gifted back - but she'd have skills.
 
I like it. I also like the "abrupt and crass" approach.......Carney
 
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