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[gauchecritic]

OK maybe it's my loss but I have no experience of cock sucking (giving) and I've stupidly decided to include a first time in my story.

So for any cocksuckers out there (preferably bi) does this equivocation ring true?

Rob closed his eyes and opened his mouth then felt the strangest sensation as Denny’s cock passed between his lips. It was almost familiar. If it wasn’t for the fact that he knew it was a cock he could imagine it to be a breast, a very thin breast, but not much different in texture. It was merely silky skin in an unusual shape but just skin all the same. It could be a stiff tongue, or maybe very loose cunt lips. He sucked. Denny moaned and pushed forward.

 

[FallingToFly]

:S Not in my personal opinion. The skin of a man's genitals has an entirely different texture, taste and scent to it than any other part of his body. Yes, it's usually silky, but it goes beyond that. Have you ever felt silk velvet, that fabric that is so incredibly soft and smooth that it feels like it should be alive? Imagine that, stretched over a complicated and unique from each ot each, map of muscles and veins. I've never been with any man who felt like any other man. In addition, you can feel their heartbeat shivering along your tongue, the muscles contracting and rippling against the inside of your cheeks, taste and smell their unique body signature. WHen they get harder, they press down and back on your tongue until they seem to fill up more room than you can possibly have in there.

There's also all the fun issues of timing breathing and swallowing during strokes, the almost irresistable urge to play with your tongue along them, how to avoid catching them with your teeth (unless that is something they like, and then... you really get to have fun!) well, there's a lot of ways to put it, but, especially for a first-timer (which your story seems to be about) there's the issue of swallowing, spitting, or pulling away.

 

[carsonshepherd]

Why is he sucking cock when his mind seems focused on a woman, instead of the man he's with? There is a deep and resounding mental difference, along with what Falling said (very eloquently) and if someone is sucking dick for the veryfirst time, and it's something they've been thinking about and wanting, they are probably not going to be comparing it to being with a woman. He'll be thinking, Oh my God, this is a guy and getting off on that thought, that knowledge, that difference.
I dunno. Just my opinion, for what it's worth, you know?

 

[gauchecritic]

Thanks very much, I thought maybe I'd gone a bit far with the thread title for any one to reply.

Thanks Falling, actually there isn't much more to the description than that, but what else there is includes the veinous pulse.

Thanks muchly Carson matey, but your objection which I accept fully is actually the basis on which the excerpt lies. He's not done it before and never has had any intention but the situation has him hot and suddenly accepting if not exactly willing, hence the comparison.

 

[Boxlicker101]

The head of the cock would have a velvety feel and the shaft would feel nothing like a breast. It would be hard and smooth while a breast is soft and spongy. If the man had been circumcised, the one sucking his cock would feel the skin gathered on the underside as it passed over his tongue. If he had not been cir., the man sucking would feel the loose skin, but only if it was in his mouth quite a way.

 

[CharleyH]

OK maybe it's my loss but I have no experience of cock sucking (giving) and I've stupidly decided to include a first time in my story.

So for any cocksuckers out there (preferably bi) does this equivocation ring true?

Rob closed his eyes and opened his mouth then felt the strangest sensation as Denny’s cock passed between his lips. It was almost familiar. If it wasn’t for the fact that he knew it was a cock he could imagine it to be a breast, a very thin breast, but not much different in texture. It was merely silky skin in an unusual shape but just skin all the same. It could be a stiff tongue, or maybe very loose cunt lips. He sucked. Denny moaned and pushed forward.

Hm - I think a mouth is a mouth and while I do not have a dick I might say that you are better and best to go with an OH MY GOD - A DUDE is sucking me! OR OH MY GOD- WHAT THE FUCK am I doing suking dick- than it was a strange sensation that was almost familiar. And the breast scene? No offence, but old or young, I have never met a breast like a cock.



Edit for a spacing problem and action/reaction

 

[minsue]

Thanks muchly Carson matey, but your objection which I accept fully is actually the basis on which the excerpt lies. He's not done it before and never has had any intention but the situation has him hot and suddenly accepting if not exactly willing, hence the comparison.

I don't know, I think I have to agree with Carson on that one, even with your explanation. Even if he hadn't fantasized about being with a man before, the one thing he's likely to be focused on is the simple fact that there is a man's cock actually in his mouth. And, as said, there is definitely no similarity to having a breast or cunt lips in your mouth to having a cock in your mouth.

You have me intrigued, though. I'll have to keep an eye on your stories for when it posts.


Look, ma! No emoticons! Do you know how hard that was??

 

[carsonshepherd]

Thanks very much, I thought maybe I'd gone a bit far with the thread title for any one to reply.

Thanks Falling, actually there isn't much more to the description than that, but what else there is includes the veinous pulse.

Thanks muchly Carson matey, but your objection which I accept fully is actually the basis on which the excerpt lies. He's not done it before and never has had any intention but the situation has him hot and suddenly accepting if not exactly willing, hence the comparison.

He didn't seem very turned on to me in your excerpt but granted it was short, and out of context.

(Min gets across better what Iw as trying to say.)

 

[gauchecritic]

Ok. I'm going to have to rethink that one. But here's a smidgeon of context.

Karen was actually drooling as she watched but the wetness on her lips was nothing compared to the moisture between her thighs. Carol re-focused and saw that Rob was open mouthed too, maybe not drooling but a glance downwards indicated a definite stirring.

“Anybody would think you two had never seen a cock before.” Carol said.

Rob shook himself out of the semi-trance but her mother just kept on staring.

Rob turned his head. “I think you would like to suck this cock.”

Carol smiled and raised her hand to caress the back of Rob’s head. Karen nodded once, very slowly and shuffled her legs to sit on her knees. Carol looked at Denny and smiled wider then inclined her head slightly. He stepped forward. Karen’s tongue visited her lower lip to disgorge more saliva which dripped onto her hanging breasts to mingle with the sheen of perspiration.

Carol reached across Rob and took hold of her husband at about mid-length and raised it to point at her mother’s waiting mouth and then pulled towards herself, making Denny turn slightly but instead of moving on she held it before Rob.

Rob looked at Carol from the corner of his eyes and when he strained his neck to take his head away he felt Carol’s fingers wound into his hair and holding him. He didn’t struggle. He thought he would. But he didn’t.

“Boys first.” Carol said. “To show they’re not scared.” And put pressure onto Rob’s head to move him forward. “Say ‘Hello’ to Denny.”

 

[CharleyH]

I dunno - I have been with men who had a first time dick in their mouth, and while the sexual experience at the time was one of little complaint, the next day they were articulating either OH MY GOD, I LOVED it or OMG what the fuck did WE (not I) do!

 

[ibhard]

:S Not in my personal opinion. The skin of a man's genitals has an entirely different texture, taste and scent to it than any other part of his body. Yes, it's usually silky, but it goes beyond that. Have you ever felt silk velvet, that fabric that is so incredibly soft and smooth that it feels like it should be alive? Imagine that, stretched over a complicated and unique from each ot each, map of muscles and veins. I've never been with any man who felt like any other man. In addition, you can feel their heartbeat shivering along your tongue, the muscles contracting and rippling against the inside of your cheeks, taste and smell their unique body signature. WHen they get harder, they press down and back on your tongue until they seem to fill up more room than you can possibly have in there.

There's also all the fun issues of timing breathing and swallowing during strokes, the almost irresistable urge to play with your tongue along them, how to avoid catching them with your teeth (unless that is something they like, and then... you really get to have fun!) well, there's a lot of ways to put it, but, especially for a first-timer (which your story seems to be about) there's the issue of swallowing, spitting, or pulling away.

damn. that post was hot. i must find ice tea, cold shower...something cool.

 

[CharleyH]

Ok. I'm going to have to rethink that one. But here's a smidgeon of context.

Karen was actually drooling as she watched but the wetness on her lips was nothing compared to the moisture between her thighs. Carol re-focused and saw that Rob was open mouthed too, maybe not drooling but a glance downwards indicated a definite stirring.

“Anybody would think you two had never seen a cock before.” Carol said.

Rob shook himself out of the semi-trance but her mother just kept on staring.

Rob turned his head. “I think you would like to suck this cock.”

Carol smiled and raised her hand to caress the back of Rob’s head. Karen nodded once, very slowly and shuffled her legs to sit on her knees. Carol looked at Denny and smiled wider then inclined her head slightly. He stepped forward. Karen’s tongue visited her lower lip to disgorge more saliva which dripped onto her hanging breasts to mingle with the sheen of perspiration.

Carol reached across Rob and took hold of her husband at about mid-length and raised it to point at her mother’s waiting mouth and then pulled towards herself, making Denny turn slightly but instead of moving on she held it before Rob.

Rob looked at Carol from the corner of his eyes and when he strained his neck to take his head away he felt Carol’s fingers wound into his hair and holding him. He didn’t struggle. He thought he would. But he didn’t.

“Boys first.” Carol said. “To show they’re not scared.” And put pressure onto Rob’s head to move him forward. “Say ‘Hello’ to Denny.”

Well, we cant tell you how to write, but women do not drool - women ... and this is my experience - but women are devious little creatures. Her pleasure and desire is always somehow either cold and non-caring like nature or encouraging and warm like (mother) nature to get - she never really gives away what she wants though, well, not from my personal POV

Edit to add: that was not your question - c'est la vie - good luck with the story, Gauche.

 

[FallingToFly]

damn. that post was hot. i must find ice tea, cold shower...something cool.

:S You're easily aroused, aren't you?

 

[minsue]

Well, we cant tell you how to write, but women do not drool - women ... and this is my experience - but women are devious little creatures. Her pleasure and desire is always somehow either cold and non-caring like nature or encouraging and warm like (mother) nature to get - she never really gives away what she wants though, well, not from my personal POV

Edit to add: that was not your question - c'est la vie - good luck with the story, Gauche.

Hmmmm....I drool.

 

[CharleyH]

Hmmmm....I drool.

MMM, Gosling drool is great, as long as it does NOT translate to something I must clean off my balcony!

Hi Min!

 

[ibhard]

:S You're easily aroused, aren't you?

nah. say what you will, but i found it be a hot description.

 

[dr_mabeuse]

The thrill of having a man's cock in your mouth--in my mouth, in any case--was the feeling of its virility and aliveness. It felt very heavy and dense to me, nothing like a breast. A breast is pure goodness. It's innocent and generous and undemanding, comforting and nurturing. It's always given as a gift--you never hear about a woman fucking a man's mouth with her tit or holding him down and making him take it.

A cock, on the other hand, is threatening and demanding and selfish. It's dangerous, like a stick of dynamite, and you feel that when it's in your mouth.

Also, when you suck a man's dick there's this parodxical feeling of being both servile and in control at the same time that's pretty exciting. I think most women are aware of the power they have over a man when they're on their knees with his cock in their mouths. It's pretty exciting to make this big tough guy moan and shudder and beg with just a flick of your tongue.

 

[FallingToFly]

The thrill of having a man's cock in your mouth--in my mouth, in any case--was the feeling of its virility and aliveness. It felt very heavy and dense to me, nothing like a breast. A breast is pure goodness. It's innocent and generous and undemanding, comforting and nurturing. It's always given as a gift--you never hear about a woman fucking a man's mouth with her tit or holding him down and making him take it.

A cock, on the other hand, is threatening and demanding and selfish. It's dangerous, like a stick of dynamite, and you feel that when it's in your mouth.

Also, when you suck a man's dick there's this parodxical feeling of being both servile and in control at the same time that's pretty exciting. I think most women are aware of the power they have over a man when they're on their knees with his cock in their mouths. It's pretty exciting to make this big tough guy moan and shudder and beg with just a flick of your tongue.

Pretty much.

 

[Guest]

The thrill of having a man's cock in your mouth--in my mouth, in any case--was the feeling of its virility and aliveness. It felt very heavy and dense to me, nothing like a breast. A breast is pure goodness. It's innocent and generous and undemanding, comforting and nurturing. It's always given as a gift--you never hear about a woman fucking a man's mouth with her tit or holding him down and making him take it.

A cock, on the other hand, is threatening and demanding and selfish. It's dangerous, like a stick of dynamite, and you feel that when it's in your mouth.

Also, when you suck a man's dick there's this parodxical feeling of being both servile and in control at the same time that's pretty exciting. I think most women are aware of the power they have over a man when they're on their knees with his cock in their mouths. It's pretty exciting to make this big tough guy moan and shudder and beg with just a flick of your tongue.

What Zoot said.

No time now, but I have more to add, I'll BBL.

 

[3113]

Have to agree with everyone else. It's really different. And I think Dr. M. makes an excellent point. You may hold an average-sized cock with your hands and find it not so threatening, but it feels larger in your mouth, much more invasive. And it's not just the profound difference in texture. There's intense smells and flavors. You're right there in that sweaty gential region of the guy, there's usually pubic hair, sometimes a lot of it, and there's precum.

Breasts are not smelly, hairy, or, er, usually leaking anything (unless one is sucking a nursing mother). The nipple is the only "stiff" part and that's relatively small, not thick and twitching and filling your mouth. Nor is a nipple so textured as a cock. Cocks have ridges and dips and veins.

As always, I recommend a reading of one of my all-time favorite stories, one with a very realistic scene of sucking cock for the first time, including all the smells and pubic hair: Justin's Jock

One thing you might want to consider is that man sucking cock for the first time is familiar with his own cock. This is why gay guys argue (perhaps rightly) that a gay blow job is the best. They know what guys like because they're exploring what is familiar. So instead of thinking "breast" or tongue or cunt lips, he IS going to thing "This is a cock"--but it may be familiar simply because he has one, too. So he can imagine what the guy is feeling if he swirls his tongue over the head--he knows what the feels like, yes?

Don't forget as well that a first-time sucker may not know what to do with their teeth. Which may have the suckee saying either, "Yeah, I like it when you scrape your teeth over my length!" or "Woah! Ouch! No Teeth! NO TEETH!"

 

[shereads]

Men and women would almost certainly perceive the experience differently, wouldn't they? Your protagonist perceives it as 'familiar.' For a woman, a big part of the thrill might be that it isn't familiar at all, but completely alien to her own body.

Not that I'd know; I'm just taking Mom's word for it.

 

[Guest]

Don't forget as well that a first-time sucker may not know what to do with their teeth. Which may have the suckee saying either, "Yeah, I like it when you scrape your teeth over my length!" or "Woah! Ouch! No Teeth! NO TEETH!"

LOL! This reminds me of my first time at sucking cock...

I was 15... damn, ok, I was um...16 (16 is ok to say, for me, because I am a Brit, and that is the age of consent here, dammit anyone who objects. )

Anyway! I was having my first fumbles at giving a bj with my boyfriend of the time (I was in the same bedroom as my best mate and her boyfriend, who were also being naughty - but that's a whole nuvver story!). I was pretty clueless, but knew I had to wrap my lips around this guy's rock hard cock - he'd been "encouraging" me for a while to give it a go. I kind of kissed it a bit first, then I took it into my mouth - I was AMAZED by how hard it was. I moved my mouth up and down the shaft a bit, and he was moaning with pleasure, but it felt so big in my mouth (as someone else said, a cock in the mouth feels bigger than a cock in the hand - or the bush, lol! Sorry, couldn't resist. ).

I digress... he was moaning with pleasure, as I just sort of licked at it, wrapped my lips around it a bit, and moved up and down a bit. He was definitely "on the edge" lol, poor guy. The next thing that happened was that he moved suddenly - out of extreme sensation/pleasure I think - and my teeth kind of caught the head of his dick. It felt like metal chinking against my teeth. Metal, I tell ya! The guy was so fucking hard, he'd gone metallic. It felt exactly like knocking an item of cutlery against my teeth (which makes me cringe) it was that fucking hard.

Like I said, poor guy, he cried out, "Ouch!" pushed me away, as an instinctive reaction, then came all over my best mate's little fluffy rug she had on the floor, lol, which she started freaking about, cos her Mum might see it.

Ah, such a memorable first time at sucking cock for me.

 

[shereads]

Well, we cant tell you how to write, but women do not drool - women ...

That's either from Masters & Johnson or Helen Gurley Brown; I get them confused.



On the sub-topic of drool, I come down firmly on the 'pro' side.

There are so few times in life when it's good to lose control so completely that one not only drools, but doesn't care. The first is infancy, when even having gas is considered adorable. The older we get, the less our drool is appreciated. After age 3, visibly drooling is no unacceptable except in certain presidents, or while performing fellatio.

If I had a cock and someone did me the courtesy of sucking it, I'd welcome drool as a sign that my partner was becoming lost in the pleasure of the act. Drool, like sweat, isn't pretty, so it isn't likely to be part of someone's repetoire of tricks.

 

[gauchecritic]

Well thankyou very much for all the info. guys. I've given up on imagining the physicality of it and stolen Zoot's view wholesale. The power trip. (cheers Zoot)

It fits the denoument more accurately too.

Thanks again.

Edited to add: I'm keeping the drool. I'm not particularly fond of descriptions of oozing pre-cum (not all guys have it) so I'm getting my own back.

 

[shereads]

Well thankyou very much for all the info. guys. I've given up on imagining the physicality of it and stolen Zoot's view wholesale. The power trip. (cheers Zoot)

It's both submissive and powerful at once...It's interesting sometimes to see how different authors interpret cock-sucking in a relationship. Some mui macho writers only see the submission, and not the power of submission.