LovesDancing
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- Jun 8, 2022
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As I stated in the story idea, I'm a newby at this. What I need to get this story really good is a co-writer. I've got the story in my head that he talks about what they're doing, then she talks, then rinse and repeat. I want it to be evident that there is two people in this story, I don't want the words and style of the woman's story to sound like the mans side of the story. I'd be in charge of the basic story (it is my story idea) but would welcome any suggestions and critiques of what I'm/We're creating.
Pretty please with whipped cream and chocolate sauce on top (I lick it off you or you lick it off me or we take turns).
Pretty please with whipped cream and chocolate sauce on top (I lick it off you or you lick it off me or we take turns).